Sue

Yes, it's me Sue. Came here because I love to read and most importantly, write. I am a supernatural writer.Do read my stories. Do reviews.

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Unique

To discribe this book in one word word would be unique.
I love the characters and their personality. The name Ghost always makes me smile. I think that's my favorite little detail on the story. I also love the amount of discription you gave on the character's personality but left the rest for us to discover.
You grammar is excellent too which really is a great deal.
The only thing I want to say is that I find something missing in the plot. Maybe it's the formation of the the bond between the characters. Or maybe the ending left me a little unsatisfied or unsettled.
Either way, it is a great story.

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Love it

Awesome story. Love it. To tell you the truth, this is the first time I've ever read a fanfic. Stupid, I know. Anyway, I absolutely fell in love with it.. I am still reading it. Keep going author. This book is meant to see a big light

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Beautifully written.

The characters in the story has been beautifully portrayed and I love the way you express their emotions. Although, the book is very nice, everything has room for development. I think every sci-fi lover should read it

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HOT

Well, I read it all within an hour and that's saying something isn't it?
To describe this boom in word word would be, it is sexy. This is an erotica and I can promise everyone that this author doesn't disappoint. You give the right amount of detail to keep it burning.
I love the plot, the character and the plot line. Basically, I love the whole book.
The only problem is a few grammar errors bit who doesn't make thek.
Good work author and keep it up.

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Addictive

Well, first of all, this is exactly the kind of story I love to read. A mixture of mystery, thought-provoking and intriguing.
I love you writing style. It's distinct and clear. I had absolutely no trouble in painting a picture in my head.
The characters are something out of the ordinary. Especially Xavier. There is something about him that just keeps me wanting to know more. I swear if I meet him in real life, I am gonna follow him around till I peel off each one of his layers. That being said he is addictive and I love him and will continue to do so(Even if you turn him into a villain.) Klein is also a intriguing character. He's the kind of guy I would love to keep as my right-hand man.
Your storyline is alluring and addicting. I swear I read it all in one sitting and now I am frustrated with when the next update will be.
Only one critique: try to avoid being repetitive. It changes as you progress, that I can see. And it does nothing to ruin the book. And that's it.
This book is really a work and I gotta say, A dominant like you did a great job.

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Just magical

Love it.
I have always been a lover of this genre. So believe me when I say that I have read quite a few novels in this field. And I would like like to say this is definitely a must read for anyone who likes to feel in extremes while reading.
I love the way you designed the characters. I have connected to them in ways I can't express. The female MC makes is a phenomenon.
Your writing style is good too. It describes an image very clearly so readers have an idea of what you are wanting them to see but it also leaves enough space for readers to create their own imagination. The flow is good too.
You just have a few minor punctuation errors and a little switching of tenses. Though I had the same problem at the beginning of my first book. So it's not something a little editing can't fix.
I honestly recommend this to any reader who likes the romance genre.

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Addicting

I enjoyed this book a lot even though I don't usually read this genre. It is unique, thrilling and a very compelling story to read.
I also am a fan of your writing style. I love it when the authors keep the sentences short and yet gives a clear image of what they are emplying. I think that it helps me concentrate and focus on every detail of the story.
Your grammar is good too, though it has a few errors.
Everything considered, it is a great book and I am eagerly waiting for more from you.

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Hilarious

I read it at one sitting. That itself shows how addicting this book is. And it is hilarious. I love the names of the quadruplets. Oh and their discription too.
The plot is light hearted and really refreshing.
The characters are amazing. I wish nothing more than having them as friends. They'd be a constant source of entertainment.
The only thing you could do is make the sentences a little smaller or use punctuations to help. If the sentences are too long they can overwhelm the reader.
All in all, I love it and I tell every romance lover to give this a go.

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Thrilling

I love the way you described your character. It's very realistic and the way you portrayed her emotions made me feel like I was the one feeling them.
I also love the plot. It's thrilling and extremely captivating. Good call with the cliffhangers too. It leaves you no choice but to keep reading like a possessed man/woman.
I love your writing style to. Your grammar is near perfect. The only criticism I can come up with is your punctuation. Though it's hardly a problem. I recommend every book lover to read this.

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A TRUE WONDER

This is pure magic. I recommend this book to everyone. Read it people. This book will blow your mind.
I love your writing style. The plot is exceptional and your writing style brings out the best of it. I love the fact that it is a merman instead of a mermaid. I absolutely adore MCs. Their character is very distinct. I can't honestly praise this book enough. It is a masterpiece. I would guarantee buy this book when it gets published. Because a gem like this will definitely get published.

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BEAUTIFUL

If it was possible to put more than five stars to a book, I would have given yours more. The language and phrases you use just seeps in through the reader's skin and touches every depth of their souls. Your poetry is is magic and I would recommend to everyone.

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MAGIC

Read it!!
This is a must read. I love the plot. It has twists and thrills and will literally make you keep turning the pages and read. And once it's over, this book will make you bite your nails and eagerly wait for the next chapter(kind of like how I am waiting).
The characters are brilliantly designed and the author's writing style is magic. The grammar is good too.

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Heart-warming

Goodness me, I think I just understood what falling in love feels like. In simple words, I recommend this book to anyone who wants to feel the warmth, comfort and emotions love can bring. One of the most most heart-touching and unique books I read in years. This really is a master-picture.

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Compelling

Let's just say, you have my undivided attention.
The plot is great. It has a shadow of mystery around it which will compel you read further and find out what's going to happen. I am extremely eager to know what will happen later.
It just needs a little editing on its grammar and punctuation but that can be fixed very easily.
Overall, the story is great and I am pretty sure that whoever reads it, won't regret it.

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Excellent story line

You are a person with unimaginable creativity. When I started reading the book I couldn't stop. Honestly saying that this book is something I would love to have in my bookshelf. A few Grammer mistakes here and there. That is the only flaw this book have. It's not too severe either. This book has a lot of potential. I feel that one day this book is going to reach excellent hight

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Good going

Nice story. Your grammar is quite good but there are a few punctuation mistakes. The plot is nice and is quite educational. I like the names you used in the book

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Cool story line

Very good story line. I love the way the story is told. The plot is good too. But there are a lot of plot holes. Nothing you can't fix with a little editing. The grammar is good but there are a few. Punctuation mistakes. You are very talented and your creativity is very bright. The story is very good but even the best stories has room for improvement. The book is going to stay in my reading list because I love it. Good luck author

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Good plot

Very good plot. Your writing style is very good but everything has room for improvement. The story is realistic. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Nothing you can't change with a little editing.

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