sruthi

mumbai, india

xvii. she/her. virgo. infj-a

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Great

I really enjoyed reading the book. The whole idea is something refreshing after reading a lot of disappointing books. I would suggest only to add a better cover because the story is too good and also needs an equally beautiful cover. Also the pace was better than other stories so i liked tht too. Love, sruthi ๐Ÿ’•

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Great Potential

The book has quite potential in my opinion. The sweet intimate moments b/w Ray & Dark are adorable but there are some things that I felt needed to be worked on. The story is too fast paced making the readers wanting to stop and wonder which part they last read and how could it happen so fast (breaks the cycle and frustrates the readers.)There's supposed to be some kinda speedbreaker to lower the velocity at which it's pacing. There's also this need to more idk what they exactly say but ig realism bc when a person is supposed to have a dark past and supposedly wake up in a strange place he/she is supposed to wary, scared, anxious and tensed which i found surprisingly wasn't in the case of Ray (makes u feel like ur reading something unrealistic and written just bc the writer wanted to have things in their way without having to understand what effect it might have on their readers) Grammar and tenses could also be worked on. Other than that i enjoyed the story with sweet lil chapters and believe has a rich potential. Love, Sruthi ๐Ÿ’•

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Genuine Potential

So it took me some time to review ur book (sorry was busy!) but babe the plot was wonderful. The story has a lot of potential but the grammar is a big problem. A real speedbreaker in my opinion if you want to get known more. In the first line of the blurb itself the spelling of angel is written off as angle which dulls down the sparkle. Try editing or showing it some editor (even i could edit it for u). I love Andrew and how brave Stella is. The story is beautiful and would really do well if you correct the errors. Do not get offended or hate me for the pep talk i just gave but as a well wisher and a genuinely intrigued person i thought of saying it to u. I enjoyed the story and send u lot's of prayers for ur good luck for progress and popularity of ur book. Also if u don't mind try adding a cover to ur story, a hack which gains more readers [if u don't mind allow me to make u one? i could send through email or any other site u want. i wanted to do this as fanart) Love, sruthi ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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Diamond among a pile of rocks

Ok idk if the author's seeing this but by the title if she is seeing this, then she'll know what reference i just used lol. Anyways back to the review. For the past few years i had been looking for an actual angel-demon related stuff and wonderfully today i found Fallen. Fallen tbh is just something that would make me speechless i guess? The character's are on point, Siberia is so real like and the grammar is on point. The story is beautiful and i binge read this for around an hour or so. I highly loved this book and would love to read it fully. (low key waiting for an update but it's ok bc we all have a life too as well)

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Well fuck, looks like we found the best of them !!

I srsly don't understand what to say ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿค ๐Ÿฅด This book was just fantabulous ๐Ÿคฏ Oh god, i loved Krystal's traits and how bitchy she can but dang as the author said, All boys with the name of Carter were trouble and it stuck. Carter is one god smacking, aww-smacking idiot who really needs to sued for his hotness ๐ŸฅตNobody should be so hot oofff, lmao. The plot just perfects sits with you and so does the story pace. You don't feel it moving too slow or fast. The grammar's pretty great as well and i was hooked to it completely. Am really waiting for these amazing updates and the power and ability to spam the comments section with all the love the book deserves. (sorry not sorry author ๐Ÿ˜‚). BMR is a must read for all those girls with a high drive with hot mc's and vampirey stuff. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. ๐Ÿ˜˜

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Just a beautiful piece of art

The story is so very well designed and intricate with details that it awes me. The story is just so fricking marvelous that god damn everybody would love it. Lovely read with perfect grammar for all those grammar nazi sitting with their noses scrunched up for nice books. Love, sruthi ๐Ÿ’–

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Amazing Read โœจ

To be honest the book was cool. I specially loved the MC's name, Maril (long since i heard some vintage names for MC) but there are somethings i would like to point out. I mean no harm or offense but speak as a random well wisher so there are a few grammatical loopholes that can be fixed. I would love to hear a more expanse, vividly painted scenario from you. You write amazingly but those grammar loopholes seem to dull down the sparkle shine of ur book. Overall I enjoyed the story and was thoroughly kept intrigued and marveled through the journey. Love, sruthi ๐Ÿ’–

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