Review for “You son of a Ghoul!”
I love this sooooooo much! Gave me feels man. I loved this at a whole new level. Legit got sad there wasn’t more.
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Anyways, onto the actual review.
First off, I really like the characters and how you describe their connections to each other. A brother who fights for his sister that’s said to be stronger than him because he tries not to fight when it isn’t necessary. I really love this.
Second, I really like how you wrote the fight scene. It gave me feelings in places I didn’t know I could feel.
Third, everyone has room for improvement. Even though I love this, there’s almost always a way you can make it better. Maybe after you finish another story or two, come back and check the little things like spelling mistakes or errors with your grammar.
Fourth, I love love love love looove the poetic side of the character! It puts a slight bit of comedy into the story.
And of course, WOULD. READ. AGAIN!