Itz

“And we’re all see through, just like glass. And we can shatter just as fast.” I don’t know

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Review for “You son of a Ghoul!”

I love this sooooooo much! Gave me feels man. I loved this at a whole new level. Legit got sad there wasn’t more.

Anyways, onto the actual review.

First off, I really like the characters and how you describe their connections to each other. A brother who fights for his sister that’s said to be stronger than him because he tries not to fight when it isn’t necessary. I really love this.

Second, I really like how you wrote the fight scene. It gave me feelings in places I didn’t know I could feel.

Third, everyone has room for improvement. Even though I love this, there’s almost always a way you can make it better. Maybe after you finish another story or two, come back and check the little things like spelling mistakes or errors with your grammar.

Fourth, I love love love love looove the poetic side of the character! It puts a slight bit of comedy into the story.

And of course, WOULD. READ. AGAIN!

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Review ~Itz

Whoo! Finally! I’m here to give my opinions on this amazing work!

I know you said you went back and fixed a few things, which is amazing. No offense but, when writing digitally obviously theres going to be a lot of mistakes. And I make ‘em too so it’s all good!

I love the characters and how unique they are. If anything, I could detect a few clichés that were just completely rewritten into the characters personalities and I actually really like that. A few common scenarios turned, well, not so common.

The only negative thing I can really say about this work is that our main character was supposed to be new to HollowsVille and Magic all together, yet he seemed to know quite a lot for an amateur.

Other than that, it was amazing! Great fight scenes, a few funny moments, and an author who can portray things in a great way! Keep up the good work my friend!

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