Jaslyn

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Good plot, interesting characters, WONDERFUL execution

I loved reading this so much!! The transformation of Nina's self-esteem was incredible to read, and while I was rooting for Parker halfway through, I was very satisfied when Harrison and Nina finally got everything straight. The side characters were adorable - I especially loved Anna, Richel, Michelle, and Jane - but most of all, I loved Nina. Her selflessness and compassion really made me intrigued and her determination (as well as her changing attitude towards her parents and friends) developed amazingly. Even though I'm a little sad that Parker wasn't her final choice, I absolutely loved this story. If you're planning to add more chapters I'll be looking forward to them!!

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