It had me hooked quickly
I’ve got to say the first chapter was written excellently. The dialogue was witty and mature and smart with almost no grammatical errors.
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The 2nd chapter and on were a little disappointing only because their were many grammatical errors and misspelled words. Usually if a plot is good, the mistakes are easily overlooked. Sadly, because the first chapter was so perfect, it was hard to overlook the mistakes in the latter chapters. It was almost as if the story was written by 2 different authors because the mature wit and writing style disappeared after the first chapter.
Errors aside, this was a very good book. I was in tears and I chuckled. I would just recommend some serious editing to the author because it is an entertaining piece of work and you showcased a strong independent woman like I’ve not seen in a long time. Bravo to Cleo!