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The BEST

I’ve been engrossed in this book. It’s fast paced. It makes me laugh out loud and cry my eyes out.

There are little spelling and punctuation errors that I’ve noticed but the plot and characters are so strong that it doesn’t matter.

Keep up the magnificent storytelling!

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**Sigh**

I thought this was just going to be a fluff piece. I read it in one day. It was so good!
The romance was swoon worthy and the suspense had my stomach in knots.
There is grammatical errors but it didn’t hinder me greedily ready every word. The only thing I would offer the author is to delve a little more into the Elliott side of the story. You kinda kept me questioning what and why. Wrap up that loose end and this is an excellent book. You’re writing style reminds me of Linda Howard. She’s THE BEST. And you’re not far behind.

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This. Is. The. Best.

I am addicted to this book! The plot is strong with plenty of drama, emotion and suspense.
For those saying Reagan is weak for staying with her husband so long, apparently they don’t know what it feels like to be trapped and scared AND still love the s.o.b. Your characters are believed and relatable.
Please continue....I’m lost without this great read!!!

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Loved it!

This book was so good. It was emotional and gut wrenching. The plot was strong. The characters were strong, lovable and relatable.
Very good read! Just a few grammar and punctuation errors.

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Love it!

I’ve been waiting a long time for this update.
This story is so freakin good! The plot is awesome. And the flashbacks of their pain is like a gut punch. I’ve cried and I’ve rooted for a reconciliation but this is a hard thing to move past. It brings up some old wounds of my own but I love it!
Please keep writing! You’re awesome!

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Are. You. Serious.

Ok I’ve just got saythe plot line rocks. The character growth of Allie and Dean....what? You took two young people and matured them incredibly.
Once again, I laughed and cried and felt anguish. These characters are so freakin lovable but you draw us in and when they’re hurting we’re hurting for them.
I love love love how you addressed the children and their coping mechanisms. That real life right there, not some fluff piece where the children are “oh so perfect”.
Kudos to the author again!!!!
Read it now. Don’t wait a moment longer.

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Fuuuuk I’m sobbing!

I thought this was going to just be a kinky erotic fun read.
My goodness! It was way more than kink. It had humor and suspense.
It turned into a thriller then bam I’m crying like a little beeotch.
This was a great read! I love how the author uses so many adjectives to describe her characters. It’s a refreshing twist.
Read it now! Stop looking at other reviews! Do. It. Now.

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Excellent twist to a classic

This was one of the best fractured fairytales I’ve read.
It was funny, sarcastic and had dark humor.
You’re writing style was perfect. Almost no grammatical errors was found.
Superb!

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Very interesting read

The kidnapping of a loving wife and mother? I was intrigued. For awhile Jack was very persuasive and he kind of grew on me where I was rooting for him.
Did not expect the ending! I did not like the bonus section. Not to give anything away but mr black doesn’t deserve happiness.

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Love it!

This story is so good. I almost don’t want to find out who Elliot is.

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Excellent writing!

This is a great unexpected read. The love story aspect isn’t my cup of tea but I’m already invested in their story. The dialogue is superb. There’s hardly any noticeable grammatical errors. Your writing style is gritty and real, reminds me of James Patterson.
I’m eagerly awaiting an update.

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It had me hooked quickly

I’ve got to say the first chapter was written excellently. The dialogue was witty and mature and smart with almost no grammatical errors.
The 2nd chapter and on were a little disappointing only because their were many grammatical errors and misspelled words. Usually if a plot is good, the mistakes are easily overlooked. Sadly, because the first chapter was so perfect, it was hard to overlook the mistakes in the latter chapters. It was almost as if the story was written by 2 different authors because the mature wit and writing style disappeared after the first chapter.
Errors aside, this was a very good book. I was in tears and I chuckled. I would just recommend some serious editing to the author because it is an entertaining piece of work and you showcased a strong independent woman like I’ve not seen in a long time. Bravo to Cleo!

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Love love love

This book had great reviews so I thought “why not try it”. It was a little slow for me at first but then I got hooked and snagged. I couldn’t stop reading it, I finished in 2 days. Now I feel empty and lonely without it. This book was very well written. With editing I can see this being a best seller. There’s a few grammatical errors but it doesn’t take from the plot line.
I can’t wait for a sequel....I need to know what happens to Lou. I’m not a fan of werewolves. I’ve never read the other big one out there, but this is a MUST READ!

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So emotional!

This was unexpectedly good. I read erotica as an escapism and to live vicariously through the characters. I’ve also read a lot of M. K. Risen’s stories and she doesn’t disappoint but this one is very emotionally charged.
In erotic literature the goal always seems to be make the naughty scenes as steamy as possible but with these main characters, they’re so broken with so many layers and when the come together it’s not just steamy and passionate but it’s raw and emotional and you actually FEEL their hurt.
Omg! I totes loved it. Punctuation is off but like others said, it’s not too problematic because the storyline has you roped in. Just simple things like to and too, your and you’re.
I recommend this hands down.

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I’m sobbing

I wrote a review earlier but don’t see it....
I’m an emotional wreck. I couldn’t stop reading. I finished it in 1 setting. I felt her pain as if I was experiencing it myself.
Now hours later I’m still in a funk. The trauma stayed with me.
The book went at a good pace and had my attention from the beginning.
Bravo for captivating me and roping me in. I was hooked. Excellent read!

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This should be a NY Times Best Seller

This was a great read! Cleverly written...the humor....om gee! I laughed out loud.
Our heroine Ashley is an every woman with her insecurities and weight issues, how she uses sex to feel her self worth. I. Love. Her.
I cried my eyes out over her loss and cheered her on.
I was not bored at all.
There were quite a few grammatical errors but with an awesome editor I can see this as a best seller!
Bravo!

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