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By Simons S. Gordon All Rights Reserved ©

Scifi / Action

Chapter 1


In 2169 Serene City back in the 22nd century, a scientist named Dr. Joseph Ackerman, a bio scientist and his team discovered an asteroid that they got at a space station called Talon. But it was no ordinary purple colored asteroid, but a tracking beacon to the owners of it called the Dominants. An evil, intergalactic humanoid mutant alien beings bent on controlling the planets and galaxies in the solar system.

They were armed as well, the five of them in their spaceship called Conquest, which landed on Earth, outside Serene City. “The asteroid has landed here on Earth” Kathy or Nails of Death said, having dread-locked hair. “Excellent, Nails of Death. These blasted scientists took the asteroid not knowing it’s our homing beacon. We take it back, rule this primitive planet and enslave the inhabitants of this place” Headman said. “No problem in that, look at city, how it’s in ruins” Negotiator said. He said they get the asteroid and leave Earth.

“What are you, a coward, Negotiator?” Chaos said. “You’re a Dominant, remember? Rulers over everything and everyone” Rampage said, as he adjusted his tech to boost his strength and firepower. “No need for a nail manicure, these nails are made for killing” Kathy said. Just then, they saw overhead surveillance camera drones. “Activate invisibility mechanisms in suits” ordered Headman and they started to disappear. The drones went past them. “Let’s go into this city and control it” said Headman and walked forward. But they hitched a ride by stealing a hover vehicle, killing the occupant inside.

“Setting coordinates to track the asteroid in Serene City” Chaos said. “About twenty-five meters ahead” N.O.D. said, and proceeded forward, but threw the dead body on the street. A hidden security camera saw the whole thing owned by S.C.PA. “Look at this, sir” one officer said. “This doesn’t look good, another murder of a civilian by unknown murders” Sgt. Watson said. “Keep an eye on these five with our officers” he said, which they did. At Ackerman’s lab, his crew got the asteroid on the operating table. But it glowed rapidly, which they became curious. It’s really glowing for space asteroid, let’s cut a piece for examination” Ackerman ordered, and they got the tools.

Minutes later, they arrived outside the laboratory on Unity Road. “There it is, the asteroid is in there” Headman said, as they landed in front. But they saw the surveillance drones again. “Take them out!” Headman said, and they shot at them with the laser rifles, blowing them up. “That was easy” Rampage said and they went forward into building. “Security Alert, Security breach!” the automated telecom said. “Who are those guys?” one scientist said. “Don’t know, but they must coming back for this asteroid” Ackerman said. The Dominants proceed down the hallway corridor, when armed lawmen were behind them. “Stop intruders” the officer said. “You have murdered a civilian in cold blood and stole a vehicle which is in violation of Sector twenty six” he added.

“Let’s rumble with them” Chaos said. “Agree” N.O.D. said, and they went to battle with the ten officers. “Activate strength functions” Rampage said, and lounged forward, and took one of their guns and broke it. N.O.D. gave a deep impaling slash to one officer’s chest, leaving him bleeding out to death. “This is not good” one officer said, and they fell back in defeat. “Let’s move forward” Headmaster said. Using their super sight, they scanned the building to where the asteroid is. “That way through that door” Cole said and they proceeded to the door down the hall. “There it is” he replied, when the voice started again. “Stop right here you unknown presences” the computer said. That’s when they shot the com link to pieces with their guns.

“Shut up you blasted computer” Headman said, and went inside the laboratory. “They’re coming” one scientist said, as they moved to one side, terrified. “Move aside earth people, that asteroid is ours” Headman said. “Who are you guys?” asked Joseph. “We’re called Dominants, a race of humanoid alien descended from humans from Earth, conquering galaxies, planets” said Cole. “Really Cole, you had told them our history, that brought no fear to these earthlings eyes” N.O.D. said. “Let’s get out of here and get help” said Ackerman. But they blocked their exit. “Where you boys going? We need to chat more or see your fate” said Rampage.

The evil Dominants had murdered all the scientists beheading them with their swords. “So much for them” Chaos said. They went towards the asteroid to retrieve it. “Look at this asteroid, came from space from the Conqueror, our space station” Headman said. “Foolish earthlings were going to examine it by destroying to pieces” Rampage said. With the asteroid being the key to their power, it split up into five pieces and used it to power their guns, giving them deadly shooting power. “Destroy this place and let’s rule this planet” ordered Headmaster and blasted the place down, until it was destroyed. Then they fled the building.

“This is still not right, why kill those innocent scientists for the asteroid?” said Cole. “What’s with you, developing a human heart of compassion?” Rampage said, as they went on a destruction rampage of Serene, killing innocents in their path who opposes them. Peter and Meghan saw the news report of these alien invaders wreaking havoc in the vicinity and downtown core. “Oh Daddy, they’re causing trouble here and Mommy is elsewhere” Meghan said. “Yeah, Amanda, Brian, Farah and Paul are 160 years back in time. Hope to God these monsters don’t have any ideas to go back into the past, because if they did, it won’t be good” Peter said. Everyone was ordered to stay inside their home by police to be safe from these murderers.

Outside, the Dominants keep wreaking havoc on the streets destroying flying drones, taking out armed soldiers and law enforcement with super powers. “This is too easy, Headmaster. Not a real challenge here” said Chaos. Then they saw the virtual ad of two rebel criminals Saul and Victoria execution will be tonight at the Old Philadelphia prison. “Should we save these two humans from their end?” N.O.D. said. “Why not? They will be useful to us for now, later on we take them out” Headmaster said, knowing they don’t care for anyone else but themselves. So they headed to the prison to stop the execution from happening.

Old Philadelphia Prison:

September 9, 2169

19:49 pm:

Saul and Victoria were in the execution center in their prison jumpsuits under heavy guarding with armed prison guards as they hear their sentence. A virtual judge appeared in front of them speaking. “Saul Ebenezer and Victoria Crenshaw, you two are charged for your crimes in Serene city, ordering your followers to wreak havoc and destruction on our beloved city, taking a thousand lives. For this, you two face the death penalty by shock treatment. That’s all” the judge said and faded away.

The prison guard ordered them to move forward into the path of the center where the head braces for the shock death treatment they’ll receive. The execution was interrupted by noise of the door blasted open by a laser blast. “There will be no execution here” Headmaster said. “Stop these intruders” said the voice of judge who appeared again. Chaos destroyed the virtual halo camera with his blaster, and did battle with prison guards. Nails of Death freed Saul and Victoria from their neck braces. “Damn, you got very long nails, are they real?” Saul asked her.

“No time to chat, I’m known as Nails of Death because of them, long and deadly sharp” she added. “That girl can defend herself” Victoria said. All left the execution centre only to face guard bots in the corridor. “Gosh darn it, this prison is too well guarded, take them all out!” commanded Headmaster and they blasted right through them. Finally they escaped the prison. “Prisoners Ebenezer and Crenshaw escaped the prison, urgent red alert to SCPA” the downed robot said to the police station.

On the outside, they all disappeared by camouflage with the scenery so overhead cams don’t detect them. When the coast was clear, they all reappeared. Saul and Victoria wanted answers from these Dominants. “We’re called Dominants, a group of intergalactic humanoid mutants beings from space” said Headmaster, which he introduced himself as the leader. The others introduced themselves too. “So Headmaster, Chaos, Negotiator, N.O.D. and Rampage” Saul said. “What are your evil intentions, world domination?” Victoria said. “Of course and with your help we rule this city” Chaos said.

But Saul suggested another idea. “There are four cops from 2169, the time were in, are 160 years in the past that sent both of us back here” Saul said. They both showed them virtual digital files of my captain Brian Ferguson, Farah Ramirez, Amanda Reid and Paul Low. “So these are the earthlings that sent you here, so are you two going to your revenge?” questioned Headmaster. “Our old scientist boss named Dr. Jeremiah Stone heart built a time machine called JUMPS, a time gate at the Stone Heart labs in the downtown area” said Victoria. “Hear that, boss. A time machine” Rampage said.

The evil Dominants can use the time machine to go back in time to rule the past and ruining by enslaving everyone leading to controlled corrupt future with them as the rulers. But decided to plant the time travelling mechanisms on their spaceship Conquest to travel back in time with. Not if Brian and his team stop them from achieving their goal. “Let’s tell our master Doom star were going back in this planet’s time period to rule and destroy it” said Headmaster which they did. With the time travel technology on the Conquest, they soar high in space and teleported to 2015.

“Well, I got Brian and Farah’s old military battle suits, just finished adjusting them so they can disappear and camflouge with the scenery, also ingrate with VICES and RICKS their computers” Wiseman added. What Wiseman didn’t know they stole the time travel technology and place on their ship. “Wiseman, Headmaster and the Dominants had came in here and stole the time travel technology to place on their ship to travel in” JUMPS said.

They wanted to travel to 2015 which Jumps adjusted the coordinates to. “2015, here we come to destroy the past and rule it” Headmaster said. “Go back like this in our soldier wardrobe with super powers” Rampage said. They know all will change clothing once in 2015. “We all have time travel tech on our ship” Chaos said. When the coast was clear from the intergalactic law patrols looking for them by SCPA in space, the Conquest teleported to 2015. The war begins.
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