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la Historia de Kimberly y Tommy

By Kimtom All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Action

Chapter 1

Después de entregar su moneda de poder Kimberly viaja a Florida todo era perfecto en apariencia, pero ella tenía una gran tristeza al no poder estar con el amor de su vida Tommy Oliver, cada noche recordaba todos sus momentos juntos y pensó que no era justo que el sufriera por ella, y que debería enviarle una carta diciéndole que estaba saliendo con otra persona, así el buscaría a alguien con quien estar y ser feliz. Días después envió la carta a Tommy, se  imaginaba la reacción que iba a tener Tommy  y se arrepintió de lo que había hecho aunque no hizo nada por remediar su error. En Angel Grove Tommy a leer la carta sintió como su corazón se partía en pedazo y dolor profundo invadió todo su cuerpo, solo quería estar solo sus amigos trataron de ayudarlo pero fue imposible su dolor era demasiado inmenso, corrió hacia el parque donde muchas veces había estado con Kimberly Hart su hermosa como él le decía, mientras tanto en Florida Kimberly lloraba desconsoladamente y pensaba ojala algún día Tommy pueda perdonarme. Por otra parte Kat la sucesora de la pink ranger original se acercaba a Tommy en busca de darle consuelo poco a poco se fue ganando el cariño de él, ella quería que Tommy se olvidara de Kimberly y fuera solo de ella.

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