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New Life...New Story

By Susan Wood All Rights Reserved ©

Scifi / Action

Prologue...

In the Galaxy... Far away; a new region was born.

After the explosion of the unexpected Super Nova... Nothing was left, however the last part of humanity survived.


It was no big thing, the nucleus of the plant had the power to create a brand new dimension. However it had to be activated by the power of Yern. Yern was the long lost power of Air, Water , Soil, Gas. The last time it was seen...100 years before the explosion where everything died. This was the last hope for a new beginning...But for some reason the plant regrown and activated to create a new dimension. We will never know why...

Suddenly where nothing was left; yet there was another big explosion from the plant. This the new dimension...How we know it now.

Galar is our mother, our creator, our survivor. The power created, air ,plants, soil, animals and us...We are the Tule region and our master is the one to be first on Galar , his majesty Dajarr Vozar. This old wise man died 2,930 years ago. He lived till 120 years old.He was an amazing man that was always loved and respected.Once a year his ghost can be seen and asked 1 question. The question always has to help the humanity and not to be taken for your own goals. His work was followed by his grandson...now the new king of Galar. Hyden Vozar.

However Hyden is a disrespectful and a horrible man, he rises all the taxes and executes people at will...he has his own mind, he is a selfish monster that never listens to anyone. Which furthermore leads to wars and life loss. He gone mad after his Fathers and Mothers death in the Yusan Dimension.

He is a disrespectful brat and no one dares to stand against him. You see he became King at the age of only 5...this gave him power from very young age and he was never tough to control it.

Is there anyone out there that can stop this terrible mess?

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