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Elf: Great dtory. Good I dea. However, i found it was gap in part which confuse me. Pov change so fast spme part so I didnt know who are they talking. End rushed. Feel like I just read places of story. People act out of xharacyer. Story stretched . Some oart I have to take a break from. Book.
Nehal Gautam: so far so good... lemme finish first
Sreeahila Retnadhas: App forcing me to write one 🥵