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Origin's

By Ormise All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Action

Blurb

In a world knocked into war five unlikely people become stronger, faster and better then before, they become heroes to this world; this is their Origins!

Meet Quantum Ice

In a world unlike our own, five unlikely people are about to have a wake-up call like no other; but before we begin I shall take you to a place I know so well.. Who am I.. I am Zachery Quinn and I am the first hero! I am the hero of Ice!

It began like any other day; It was Monday morning in my home city of Korrn, me and my twin brother were job hunting like we always do on a Monday, when it happened. A flash of light came from the local power plant; and before I knew it a shock wave sent me and my brother hurtling through a shop window.

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When I awoke the city had been decimated; it stood in ruins, draped on what used to be a wall of the shop rested a skeletal corpse that wore my brothers clothes. I stumbled out the shop leaving behind the corpse and my past life. I stood confused in what used to be a street that I walked down many a time. My eyes caught on the bodies that rest in the street. Many children not older then 3. With a chocked sob I tore my eyes away and back to the body that rested in the shop; my brother. My rock, with a scream that could shatter windows snow started to fall, crystallized tears fall from my eyes; as I leave behind my former name. I take on a new name, a new identity; something that matches my new power and my new look. I become Quantum Ice; and at the same time I make a promise to myself. I promise to become a hero, to protect the people of the world.

That is how I became me, that I how I became a member of the Origin's. My story may not be long, but I'll be glad to share more information with you all.
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