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can never hide

By Annie Gilchrist All Rights Reserved ©

Action / Romance

Chapter 1

Jay is standing in this very dark path with just a little path to follow t get back to the road, he is standing with a long sharp double edge kitchen knife, he’s looking at it covered in bright red blood, the thought popped in his head why a kitchen knife? A pen knife would be better he though as It could fit in your pocket than leaving it in the ground for anybody to find it!

He slowly closes his eyes to not panic as he realize that he has touched the handle and his finger prints will be on it, so he can’t just drop it back on the ground who knows you will come across this path and discover the bloody knife, the police will probably get involved and dealing with the police again is the last thing he wanted or needed with his history.

As he shuts his eyes being in this dark path with the bloody knife his mind drifted back to the night that changed his life forever!

He remembers he was standing in a middle of a big park with 4 bodies lying with bloody wounds and he looks around quickly to see if anybody is around to see what happened.

Back at the present time Jay put the bloody knife his inside pocket of his like green jacket then zipped it up and made sure it was it wasn’t going to fall out or stab in the stomach, as he just about to start to make his way back to the road he hears the leaves rustling and sees a light of a torch coming towards to him.

Jay feels this thing hitting his leg he jumps thinking there should be more lighting on this path, he bends down to feel what kept hitting his knee he felt a something of fur then something licking his hand,

I look in to the light coming my way I hear a women shouting “Rocco” I instantly recognize the voice instantly its Jules my girlfriend walking her dog,

The surprise on her face her eyes nearly pop out her head with suspicion as to why I was in a dark path alone standing doing nothing!!

Her tone as “what you doing here” jay raises a eyebrows after a few minutes jay takes a deep breath and replies “just went for a walk to think ” think about what? Thought popped in to her head but refrained from saying it out aloud as she didn’t want to push it as she just moved in to his house he shares with his family, there’s an awkward silence as jay know Jules know something was up but still never said anything and nodded “I will see you at home I should go before Rocco takes himself for a walk” jay nodded with never looking up at Jules he hated not being honest with her as he knew that she wouldn’t keep secrets from him but keeps telling himself it’s for her own safety.

as jay is walking home cauious of the knife still in his pocket he knows he isnt being 100% honest with jules, and everytime he things about how that conversation would go he gets a stomach ach as he really likes her and dont want her to end their relationship as soon as she discovers what he is and what he is capable of!!.

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