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Poison

By Natty123xx-Natalia_Szczepan All Rights Reserved ©

Action / Fantasy

Blurb

Life seems normal, but boring. What if one dream can change it? One dream, one feeling and only one chance. You don't know what to do, when you have to leave your family and run for your life. Two girls, big adventure and fighting for their life. Will they be able to save everyone or will they lose their lives by trying?

Chapter 1

The army was coming towards us. There was no time to waste. We needed to run. Nicole went ages ago to find a potion to stop all of it. There was no time to think about a plan, we needed to run.

"Jenna they’re coming!" when I heard my name I knew what I have to do.

There was no time to pack our stuff. We needed to go. Go now.

"Vanessa, do we have any time to escape them?" I asked my friend.

"We’ve got about 5 min and if we not going to run we will die." Vanessa knows, she never been wrong about telling how much time is left.

"Listen to me now, we don’t have a time so I’ll say it only once. If the army’s going to come here, do everything what they’ll tell you to, even if you wouldn’t like it just do it. I promise that I’m going to protect all of you. No matter what, don’t let them see that you know who they really are." It was my last words to my family. I hope they’ll be okay. I’m going to find a way to stop all of it.

I couldn’t say anything else, the army was near my house. I’m leaving my family there, alone, with no protection. I feel so bad because of that, but they’re safe, as long as they’ll do everything what the army will tell them to, they will be safe.

I opened the window and jumped out of it. While Vanessa was jumping, I went to see if the army is here. I went behind the house. I saw them. The army was scary. Seeing them made me shiver in fear. The army was made of monsters so frightening and cruel. It was the most horrific thing I have ever seen. I felt sweat drops run down my face and shivers down my spine. I gasped for air as they moved closer and closer.

Is this how my life will look from now on? Will we always have to run away and hide like cowards? I believe that the world could be changed and I won't stop till I'll help making progress.

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