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By SootynEcho All Rights Reserved ©

Romance / Adventure

Chapter 1 - Prologue

"Lexi, I am in love with you" The teenage boy held hands with the redhead who had dirt and blood all over her
"You can't be in love with a freak Finn. You're dreaming" She responded at him. He then grabbed her sweaty hands and looked into her fiery amber eyes
"Lexi, I am not dreaming, you're different and unique to all the other girls. I love you Lexi, even after months of you being here, it feels like I have known you forever" He started to hold her hands tighter not wanting to go. She sighed and looked at the ground covered in rubble.
"I have to go Finn, me and my sisters have to get out of here, it's best for all of us, best for you" She sighed and removed her hands from his and walked to her sisters who stood on the tarmac which has clumps everywhere. They looked at her worried and concerned. They stood uneasy wiping the sweat from their forehead and smudging the dirt on their features of their face. She looked at her sisters and held their hands tightly. The sweaty palms made it hard for them to hold hands correctly. She looked at Finn and smiled slightly. She and her sisters closed their eyes. She felt warmth within her body. It started to emit from her body. The power was getting stronger and stronger. But something was wrong. She felt shaking. She opened her eyes seeing everyone look at her, nothing was shaking but she could feel it. She looked at her sisters whose bodies seem to start to disappear by the second. She frowned at them and tried to speak but nothing was coming out of her mouth. She turned her head towards the young boy who confessed his love to her, he started to disappear. She tried screaming but she couldn't. Lexi looked up seeing a tall large building breaking away from the bonds of the structure holding it up. It was falling towards all of them. Her. Her sisters, Finn and the rest of the public. Removing her hands from her sisters, she tried to move or teleport but she couldn't. The building was falling too fast. Everything went black.

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