Our Wonderland

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Summary

Something bad happened to Kira and she thought that Suicide was the answer, but Raiden showed her a wonderland.

Genre:
Adventure / Romance
Author:
bloodykira
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
1
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
13+

Why ?

- Why bad things always happen to the good people ? Why ?

I was screaming like hell, nothing was like it should be and I was getting out of the control.

- Hey Kira, I know it's not easy I know...but, just calm down please or you getting us both killed.

I knew what was he talking about, my power...my stupid power could get us both killed if I get out of my mind...

- What if it happend to you Raiden ? Don't say that you wouldn't scream, cry or being psycho.

He didn't say a word, in fact he wanted but I putted my finger in his lips and said.

- No, just leave me alone.

But he didn't, he was stubborn in other times I liked that stupidity in his eyes but know I couldn't take it.

- You have me, you know you can relay on me right ? We were comarades a thousands times!

- Yes Raiden, comarades, partners in war but besides that we are nothing else.

I was about to leave that strange room that he choose to spend the night.

- Where are you going ?

- Someplace else, you should understand.

- I should, but I don't want to.

This time I really didn't care I putted my coat on and run away from that spooky building.

" Plaza Hotel" , such a unpleasent place, I thought.

I didn't knew where I was going, car flashes was running all around me and I only wanted to jump into that corridor of lights.

"Suicide" such a strong word about what I was going to do...

My body was warm like summer but my heart was a cold iceberg, it could drown a hole new Titanic.

- Kira! Wait.

But it was too late I was already falling into that show of lights and before crashing I heard a marvelous orquestra...I was in Heaven.


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