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By grwriter All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Adventure

Chapter 1

Fast asleep having the same dream again... I've had this dream ever since I was young.

I'd tell all my friends when Im this age, I'll be walking the Walk of fame, taking pictures with all the star.

Friends laugh 

Molly woke up 

Kate ( Mum): MOLLY WAKE UP ... QUICK" 

Molly:" oh right oh right ... im coming"

Kate was going in to the bathroom

Downstairs Kate was on the phone crying 

Molly:" Mum" she asked " are you ok? whats happened ?" concerned 

Kate:" I have to to go, Ill call you soon" she said putting the phone down

Molly went over to the cupboards to get some pop tarts to cook

Kate:" leave that a second" she said 

Molly:" mum you're worrrying me  now, is everything ok?" 

Kate:" it's Nana , she has passed away" 

Molly burst in to tears 

Kate:" we have to be strong because we have to tell your brother" she cried 

Molly:" when" crying 

Kate:" last night, im sorry"

Molly:" want me to tell Zac? its going to be harder for you" she said 

Kate:" no it has to be me, i need to be strong" hugging Molly

Zac had just walked in from coming back from his recruitment 

Zac:" whats happened?" he asked worried 

Kate:" we have something to tell you" she said wiping her eyes

Zac:" what is it?" he asked getting worried 

Molly:" sit down" she said 

Kate:" it's .. your na..." taking a deep breath " its... na.." she just burst in to tears

Zac:" what is it is everyone ok ?.. tell me ?" worried 

Molly:" nana has died" she cried 

Zac broke down, he was closest to his Nana, she helped him to decide what to do 

Zac took it hardest and just got up and left 

Kate:" ZAC" she shouts 

Molly:" he need's time.... we all do" 

Kate nodded and burst in to tears again

Molly hugged her.



It was the day of the funeral, everyone was here , 

Kate stood up at the front and read a letter that was left to her on the night her mum died



 So Kate, your reading this, I know im not with you and the kids in the flesh but Im still here, listening to all the moaning you do.

everyone chuckled 


But back to me... this letter is for me to tell you all what I think

Tom my dear loving husband , I love you I always will, Ill be by your side all time.

Kate get a new bloke will you about time, your still young go have fun 

Kate smiled and continued 

Zac and Molly I will  miss you deeply 

Zac stick to what we talked about ... dont know if you said anything yet but to be on the safe side kiddo 

Zac smiled 

Molly:" what she on about?" she whispered 

Zac:" tell you and mum tomorrow"

Kate continued:" 

Molly, those girls who laughed when you said your going to meet the stars all of the walk of fame, I know you are and Ill be up here when you do with you.

Kate was crying 

Zac got up and finished off 

As for the rest of you,

why are you here! 

I probably didnt see half .... 

Zac looked at Kate who looked at Zac and mimed finish 

Zac finished 

Have a drink on me 

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