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Curse Of The White Smoke -Part 1

By Susan Wood All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Adventure

How it all began...

Dear Diary, My name is Moana. Moana Felicía, that is my real name. From my old family When I was younger I belonged to a happy family,my real family died in a tragic accident one day. I was out walking in the park with my nanny. There was a gas leak at the house and everything exploded. Gone. Suddenly there was a house and the next moment there was rubble and my parents were no longer there. After that I got put into a care home, I was only 5, it was terrifying. I was so scared and I missed my family terribly. I cried most nights. Then a couple of months later I got adopted by a rich family they also adopted a little boy called Leo he was a good friend....

Leo and I got on really well. He had also suffered a tragic loss. His parents had died in a car accident. Leo was 6 and I was still 5, Leo was also a very smart boy. He almost felt like a brother to me. We would play rope, skipping,dolls,pretend wedding all day.We ever very shocked and really extremly happy when we got adopted together. We got adopted by a really rich family The Richmonds when we got there we were in a big shock. The Richmonds Family lived in a grand house and they had alot of servants and maids. The place was flooded with them. The Richmonds were a very rich couple. Filthy rich. Along with there great riches, came there full and pure greediness. They always wanted more and more. This family never felt as mytruly beloved family. I miss them terribly.

I am actually re-living this memory. I’m writing this 5 years after I got kidnapped. It was a terrible ordeal. I am writing this so I remember my life. So I remember how it felt before... Before I became different. My life feels backwards now. Things have changed. I don’t age, I cannot go outside until it is dark, or use potions in the morning but it hurts me. There are so many draw backs. It was a different life back then, a different time.


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