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Rip Gone Wrong

By Tori L. Ridgewood All Rights Reserved ©

Thriller / Adventure

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Adam thought he was going for an easy snowmobile ride to Quebec and back again, but looking back from his hospital bed, the only thing easy to see were the mistakes he'd made along the way. Told by a social worker to record everything that happened to him in the frozen bush of Northeastern Ontario, Adam faces the consequences of each choice he made to stay alive and get home again. But is he telling the truth?

You said . . .

You said I should record what happened in detail. I already told you the gist of it, but now I’ve got a choice between a pad of paper and a pen, or a computer, and it’s like a whole high school of English assignments rolled into one. I better get some kind of class credit for this. Maybe I should talk and you write this down for me?

Worst day of my life. You think you’ve ever had a bad day? Let me tell you, it’s nothing compared to mine. I mean, I guess I was lucky in some ways. I did survive it, after all.

My name is Adam, and this is my story. I’m going to start it in the middle of a rip, because that’s where stuff started happening and the rest of it’s pretty boring.

And if you don’t know what a rip is, then maybe you’d better read something else. I’ve been told I have to explain it. Okay: a rip is a ride on a snowmobile. Got it?

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