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"My Best Friend's Lover"

By Myra Elga Bond All Rights Reserved ©

Action / Adventure

Chapter 1

Note: The first chapter 
is written in Fb Tac group this one is just a draft of it. 
Chapter :2 “MBFL”

On the other hand, Sagato secretly spying his son using his mirror kind tv. He was observing his son’s condition. He’s staying in the magical world of sorcerers. Apparently, he had been in prison for breaking the rule. Clef who was the great wizard leader of that magical world. Under his leadership the world of sorcerers were at peace and harmony. Until Zech heard the news about his best friend. That event ignites the flame and leads to war of sorcerers.


Clef was always alert to his surroundings so when an enemy attacks, he would feel its presence. 

Meanwhile, Zech consult his right hand Treize about his plan.

The adviser suggest him that its better to use a mortal to sabotage their target. Zech listens. Finally he agrees to send an assassin headed by Heero Yuy.


Meanwhile, back in Mortal World. Eagle had already been discharge in the hospital. Mr Vision was deadly serious  upon fetching his son out then driving him home. Eagle did his usually routine. 

He doesn't bother about his father's attitude. On the way home, Eagle stared outside. His father were observing him in silence. 

"Will you quit studying me?"

He mumbles irritated.

Mr. Vision smiles.

"Focus on driving father."

He ordered coldly.


When they arrives home, Eagle open the door and swiftly got out of the car. Then urgently, he heads to his bedroom. 

Mr. Vision shook his head and sigh. The next day, Eagle stay in his room till evening. 

Mr. Vision knock at his door. Eagle ignored it. Unti the phone rings. He answers it. 

He instantly blush when he heard the voice on the other line. It was Lantis. 

Lantis ask him about his condition. He felt warm. Hours later Mr. Vision returned then his father suddenly opens it. Eagle got irritated. 

Being annoyed, he cast his magic accidentally. A harsh magic roam in then flew his father violently and knock him on the wall. Seeing that, he was shock  then forgot about his phone. Urgently he approach his father. Slowly it landed on the floor. 

Eagle panicked. 


Eagle urgently rush to find his phone to call an ambulance. But to his surprise, he saw the man again. 

Slowly he lift his face until he already staring at the man. It was Sagato again. He smiled at him then glance at the man who was lying on the floor. He runs toward him then kneel to beg the man to heal his father. 

Sagato doesn't answer. Instead, he gazed at the victim's body . Slowly, it floats while glowing. Sagato close his eyes. Eagle quietly watch him. After that, he slowly opened his eyes. While Mr. Vision's body slowly, falls down until it's fully healed. 

Sagato gazed at his son then nods. 

After that, he vanish in an instant. Eagle cried in happiness.

After that, Mr. Vision announced that he was grounded. 

Eagle pouts but he was happy. 


One year later, Umi return to their apartment holding a baby boy in her arms. She knocks at the door then patiently waits for her husband to open it. To her surprised, it was Lantis who open it for her. Umi glared at him. Lantis nods then sign to her to come in. 

She entered the house. There she saw Eagle peacefully sleeping in their couch. The baby glance at his mother then to his sleeping father.

"Dada! da! da!"

The baby squirms then tried to reach his father. His mother took him to the bedroom. 

"Da! Da! Da! Da!"

The baby mumbles. 

Umi try to keep him quiet until.

"WAAAAAHHHHH!!!! Da! da!"

Umi breast feed the baby but he refuse.


Eagle heard the noise then urgently rush upstairs. There he saw his wife and son. 

"He's hard headed like you."

Umi uttered. Eagle smiled. He took the baby in his arms. 

The baby stops crying then instantly laughs.

"Oh! your so adorable." What 's he's name?"

Eagle asked.

Umi smirked. 


She replied. 

"Oh! that's nice."

Eagle said. Then he resume playing with his son.


After two years, Hikaru delivered a cute baby boy and name him Trowa. Quatre was two years older than Trowa. The older kid was very fond at he younger one hence they play with each other like they were at the same age. 

Meanwhile, Umi finally divorce his husband and marry another. His name was Ascot. He is a production assistant.

Eagle congratulate them. To show that he wasn't bitter anymore, Eagle ask his ex wife if he could visit his son.

Umi agrees hence every summer, Quatre visits his father 's house.

Quatre grew up as a spoil brat. When he was with his daddy, Quatre experience a slap or spank by his father more often. 

Being a disciplinarian Quatre slowly learn a lot from him. Being with his daddy makes him feel happy.

The contract continues until Quatre reach 18 years old. 

He decides to stay at his father's house and totally abandon his mother and step father. 

Slowly his life changes.

He becomes a responsible role model son.

Mr. Vision his grand father was very proud of him. Eagle nods and smile at his son. 


Later on, Trowa grew up to be a handsome young man. he gain his father's attitude and posses his mother's characteristic . That is why he become a team captain of the soccer team. Because of that, Quatre admire him. 

When Trowa reach the age of 18, he decide to live on his own.

On the other hand, Heero start his mission. He carefully entered the Magical Wizard World.  He swiftly dodge the secret traps  along with other hazardous things. surrounding the whole place. Heero was very pro at these except he hadn't any magic. He heads towards the prison until an hour later he reach the prison barracks. 

Sagato was busy staring at the mirror  while Heero began to unlock the knob. 

Small sound captures  Sagato's attention  hence he shift his attention to the door. 

Then he patiently waits. 

Minutes later, the door opens revealing a young guy with chocolate hair. 

Sagato stared at him then smiled. He greets him. 

The guy ignored it. He gesture for him to follow his actions. Sagato was puzzled. He began to doubt the guy. 


While Sagato was doubting Heero's patience starts to run out. So he decides to grab the man's arm and drag him out. They cat walk passing the hallway  until they arrive in front of the gate. A few minutes later the gate slowly opens. 

Heero waste no time.He grab the man's arm then swiftly runs out before the gate closes. 

After their victorious escape, Heero phone Zech 

then drag Sagato somewhere safe. 

Meanwhile, One of Clef's apprentice sense that some one opens the gate. She immediately check the prison barracks. 

To her surprise, one of the prisoner is missing. 

She used her magic to warn their people to be alert due of Sagato's fleeing. Clef felt the warning and was astound of what he founds out. 

He call an emergency meeting to talk to others regarding of the prisoner's escape.


After meeting, Clef announced to the people of MWW to be alert at all times. On the other hand, Sagato had already talk to Zech Marquize. He suggested  that they should build a place where immortal and mortal can peacefully lived. 

Sagato agree. Then he temporally bid good bye to his friend informing him that he had to see his son.

Zech allow him to go. He vanish in an instant. 

Note: next chapter would be somewhere else. 

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