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I heard my name getting called from downstairs.
“Just a minute!” I yell out my door. I finish up my makeup and throw on my new dress. I threw my hair up in a bun and smirked in the mirror.
“Perfect!” I mumbled. I threw on my socks that go up to my knees. Then threw on my heels.
Then, I went downstairs, stopping at the bottom, and saw both my dad and his gorgeous girlfriend. But then, I took another glance to see a boy behind them. I glanced him over and practically melted inside. He had them perfect muscles, that set jaw, and everything a girl could ask for. ‘What are you doing?! He probably already has a girlfriend.’ I silently scold myself.
“Hey, dad? Um.., what’s going on?” I asked, my voice shaking a bit. The boy smirks and I cowered back. I don’t know why, but the shyness I’ve worked so hard to hide for the past years is showing through.
“This is your new step-brother.” My father said, seeming a little nervous and glancing at the boy out of the corner of his eye.
“You see, I and Katy have thought about this for awhile and we’re...getting married. We’ve been together for months now and well...” He said, trying to finish the sentence hurriedly.
“W-What?!” I started shaking my head.
“But you can’t I mean y-your...” I was at lost for words. I glanced over at Katy, practically seeing my entire world crumbling. It’s not just about the boy I had practically worshiped at first sight... It’s something else too.
“S-sorry, but I’m just a little... c-confused. Why are you t-two getting m-married?! W-why?! And w-why he has to b-be my s-step-brother?! I mean, he’s...he’s...” I trailed off, my throat starting to close up a bit.I could tell my father and well new mother we’re upset about my reaction, but honestly this is their fault.
“I...I mean we...” My new mom started. I looked at her, then I glanced at her son and bit my lip. He smirked at me.
“So will I get to know my new sister or no?” He asked, smirking. My dad cleared his throat. “Yes.” I glared at him, and my dad jumped.
“Leave. Me. Alone.” I said, then nodded my new brother up the stairs. I took deep breaths to calm myself down on the way up. I wasn’t just ready to have a new mother. I just never wanted a brother who was 10 times hotter than me. He was dreamy. No more than dreamy. He was perfect. I just wish this wasn’t what it was. I didn’t like the thought of having a new brother. We walked into my room and I closed the door. I looked at him and my eyes widened he was going to attack me.
“So” he slammed me against my bedroom wall. I then sighed lightly. I looked at him than his muscles. They were so tight holding up right next to me making me stay right between him and the wall. It was hard not to look down to his shirt and see his shirt tight against him. He looked so stunning. My eyes widen again.
“Um” I bite my lip then he smashes his lips to mine and I couldn’t help but kissed back. He bit my lip hard. I let out a soft and gentle moan. Then pulled away but he had to run a hand up my dress on my thigh and gave it a hard squeeze. I couldn’t help but bite my lip harder.
“Stop biting that lip of yours or you won’t be able to get rid of me and then I’ll have to bang you to death.” he chuckled looking at my lips. I blushed and tried to push him away.
“And what is that post to mean” I glared at him. “One you’re my brother and two maybe I’m taken.”
“I doubt it. I mean look at you yes but trust me. You’re just too shy to get a man. You’re all dressed up for a night out with the friends and that’s that. Plus maybe even a little man finding” I looked at him. Then he winked.
“How did you know?” he just smirked
“Just a lucky guess baby” I grunted and got out of his arms.
“Well we will not be doing anything either way and to be honest I do need to get going so...” I got cut off by him kissing me again and rougher that time laying me all the way on the bed. I let out a soft moan. He kissed down my cheek to my neck and placed a hot kiss on his neck. I pushed him off me as hard as I can. He sighed.
“How’s this. If you come back with a guy I’ll give you some space once in a will, but if you don’t. Then you’re all mine” he smirked. I blushed and nodded.
“Deal!” I growled and got off the bed. “Now get out I’m leaving and I’m going to be late meeting my friends so you owe me.”
“No, I really don’t” He just smirked. I scoffed and walked out and drove to be with my friends. We hung out at a club and I met a few guys. One caught my eye. He looked perfect for making my ‘new’ brother jealous. I had to get him off my back for a will. This would probably be the only way. We headed to my house and I got pinned to my bed. I let out some soft and hard moans. My dad and his mom were gone so I could do whatever.
“Are you all alone baby?” The random hot guy asked me. I nodded my head then giggled.
“Oh my brothers home but I want to make a point to him so he’s ‘not’ home right now” I winked at him. He smirked and started to take his clothes off. I did as well. Once both our clothes were off I quickly grabbed some of the protection I had hidden under my bed and begged him to put it on. He nodded his head and did as I asked. He then slides himself in me. I just let out a loud moan and he started going fast. After a few moments, he was going harder and faster all at once. It was almost like inhuman. I was screaming and moaning off the walls. I knew then that my ‘brother’ would hear us.
Later that the man had left and I threw on one of my oversized shirts and a pair of my panties. I walked out of my room and ran right into him.
“Impressive. You actually got a man to do it with you!” He chuckled at me. “Maybe next time that man will be me” he winks at me.
“In your dreams buster brown” I giggled about to walk down the stairs to go to the kitchen when he pushes me up against the wall and looks down at me.
“Don’t underestimate me. I’m going to get you in bed even if it’s the last thing I do” he growled. I blushed. I really did want to get in bed with him so badly. But with our parents getting married and him being my brother. Its just not right to do it. I had to stop this. Even though I knew I wouldn’t last living a week with him. I will have to get thru it.
“We just need to be careful ok. Our parents are engaged and we are going to be siblings. And to be honest. I do need some space to myself” I smirked “and some food right now”.
“Deal!” he let me go and I went to go get some food finally.
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