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THE MYSTERY BEGINS!!

By postaga All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Adventure

Mellisah’s Future Part 1

There was once a girl here on earth called Mellisah. She was raised up in a single parented family, that being her mother. Ever since she was born, the lifestyle of her family had never changed. They were very poor to an extent that they did not even have a fully finished one roomed house. They slept in a room without windows and it had pores on the roofs which allowed water inside the house when it rained. She had accepted the situation and had full hope that one day, the situation shall change. Luckily, some years later, they were able to have a two roomed house and another separate five roomed house in their compound. She began to realize that indeed nothing in life is hard if hope and faith are within a person. Life here on Earth was fun and enjoyable because Mellisah and her family felt the comfort everyone around the world could feel. Meanwhile, in planet Uranus, the ruler of that planet was planning to send his daughter to earth in order to pay Mellisah a visit. He instructed his daughter, Mellisando, that she should look all over the earth planet until she finds her and that she must make sure that at the end, the mission was complete and achieved. She left and hoped to achieve the mission because her father promised to increase her powers if she manages to complete the mission. Mellisando had a thought that somehow, the girl she is sent to go and look for is her twin sister but that was just only a thought she wasn’t sure of , the reason being that she once overheard her father speaking of it. Her father was the one who knew everything, but he dared not to tell mellisando as he believed it was not the right time to do so. He only sent her to go on the hunt without explaining to her in detail, why she has to complete the mission. Mellisando was only sent with the instruction that she was supposed to look for the girl mellisah with certain characteristics. Back on earth, mellisah was always proud of her mother because she took her as her role model because of the certain traits that she possessed. Mellisah does not know anything about mellisando or the ruler of Uranus nor does she know anything about the planet in general. She only knows of the name as she heard it in one of the lessons at school. She only knew of her mother and relatives. This is how mellisah and mellisando came to know and meet each other..

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