Candice Hall would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Der Rat Story: Der rat hunter's

By Candice Hall All Rights Reserved ©

Children / Humor


It's a funny story of two rat brothers who soon discover that their town has no more cheese, the older brother suggests they go on a shirt to travel to another country to find cheese. ON the ship they bump into their older sister who helps them find cheese on the ship.


It all starts out in a small town of Fish Hoek in Cape Town, two grey, scruffy looking rat brothers Sam and Dean live there and only live for one thing, cheese. Every day they go hunting for cheese, and all through the day eat as much cheese as they can find. After months of cheese enjoyment, it soon has to come to an end, the rat brothers discover that their town is running out of cheese, what can they do, where do they go to find cheese again?

One day the rat brothers Dean and Sam are sitting in the park under an oak tree eating a large piece of cheese between them. ‘Mmm, dis is der best cheese ever, what you say bro?’ Sam asks his older brother while munching on his side of the cheese. ‘Yeah bro, this is the best cheese ever, there’s nothing like it.’ Dean says

agreeing with his baby brother. ‘You right bro, you can’t get good cheese like dis anymore. Tell me Dean, what’s gonna happen when we do run out of cheese?’ Sam asks Dean. ‘We’ll get more, what else Sammy.’ Dean says munching on his side of the cheese. ‘But what if we can’t, I hear dat cheese is so expensive now dat no one can afford it anymore.’ Sam tells Dean. ‘Hey listen Sam, we’ll find a way to get more cheese, trust me, we’ll never run out of cheese, okay?’ Dean assures him. ’Really hope you right Dean, ‘cause wifout our cheese, we’ll starve to deaf.’ Sam says to him. ‘Hey Sam, have we ever run out of cheese before?’ Dean asks his naive brother. ‘No, but…’ ‘But nothing, relax bro, we will always have cheese.’ Both rats continue enjoying their large piece of cheese.

Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

trippix1963: Not really a big surprise at the end, but it's pretty well written and fun. I liked the characters - they were more developed than in some successful published books I've read. A few typos but I've seen that in published books in the last few years.

75sandwiches: A great fantasy story (that I really hope is still ongoing) that includes:-A forgotten middle child-Forgettable pronunciation-A dude in need of souls-Threat of possible nonexistence-Eternal doom???Please, please let this story be on going. This is too good to stop at three chapters. The tone is s...

fritzkie: a. The setting of the story is so nice. The events are arranged, the place, and the time. The setting of the story is appropriate and this story is interesting to read.b. The author used the first person point of view. Because when I read it, I feel the emotions of the character in the story. I u...

Paige Cunningham: Holy shit I love this book! 😂😂😂 I’ve never laughed so hard, been so frustrated, and wanted to cry in so many chapters all at once and have been genuinely confused. I literally threw my phone at one point (dramatic I know but you can’t blame me!) for those who love corny, cheeky, cliche romance te...

Cristi C: Love the idea behind the story. I had a lot of fun reading it. Quite a bit of editing needed but overall it was a good short read. I believe the author could expand certain areas to make it mesh better. I will say Bobbie is the best character and in a way the parents too.

More Recommendations

lailachupp04: THIS NEEDS TO BE PUBLISHED I MUST MUST MUST SHOW THIS BOOK TO EVERYONE I KNOW!!!!!!I WANT TO HAVE A COPY OF IT SO BAD!!! your book was amazing and so interesting especially describing Maggie's life it reminds me of my life

latashashetters: I absolutely love this. Really page turner! But it definitely needs work, there's a lot of misspelled words and along with name mix ups when 2 people are conversing in the story. Other then that I love it and wish it was longer!

{{ contest.story_page_sticky_bar_text }} Be the first to recommend this story.

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.