Our Shoes

By Aubrey All Rights Reserved ©

Children

Blurb

We often hear the quote, "We all have so much to gain by walking in other people's shoes."Kerry Washington. Every character wishes they could walk in another's shoes, only to realize, maybe they don't....

Alana

"Hard days are the best because that's when champions are made."-Gabby Douglas

She stared, her emerald eyes empty, watching the mobile she had made of seashells go around and around. Over and over. That's all she did most days, watch it. There was not much else that she could do. She had Leukemia for as far back as she could remember, which was not that far, since she was only six. Actually, she was six years, three months and twenty-eight days old. In the duty of watching the mobile, she must have drifted off to sleep, because when she woke up, her parents were sitting on the edge of her bed. Looking up at them, she recognized the pale, almost lifeless eyes staring back down at her.

Almost a year ago, when they believed she was clear, she got to go home. She was so excited to finally be able to go home. She had spent countless hours propped up on the hospital pillows surfing the web on her mom's laptop. Looking at pictures of homes and wondering what hers would look like. The unusually warm April smacked her in the face as the hospital nurse wheeled her out to her parents car. The checkout had taken so long, but when they were almost out of the lobby, a nurse came running towards them. "You have to stay here!" She yelled, you're not clear. Tears filled her heavy eyes. As her wheelchair was turned around, she caught sight of a boy walking through the lobby. He was starstruck in his flash sweatshirt. She wished that she could be in his shoes........

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Willow: So sad ahhh! I cant believe youd do that 😭😭😭 poor husky

Barry Litherland: This is an excellent novel, perfectly pitched for its target audience. The narrative is fast moving, the dialogue crisp and the characters interesting. It was gripping even for an adult reader. I would recommend a thorough and close edit to reveal the full potential of this very good book.

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Aly S: I have loved it so far. It’s mind opening about how each person is different and has their own demons. Please update soon!

VyaghriniLightning: The way the characters evolve throughout the story is great. My favourite parts are in the farm. Oubaas and Trina are my favourite characters. The writing style is very relflective of Monica's shy simple and shy persona. The only draw-back was the ocassional places where there was no space betwee...

Aidan Lewis: Could use a better hook if this is your original book

fluffytae11: It was simple breath taking, the details, the plot, the character, the setting, everythinf was too beautiful, I could image the painting, I could imagine her walking away, lots of things WHICH came to me as a vision, this book is too good, it definitely needs more attention

Jay Orion: Hi Bria,I read the entire story of your first book and I have some things to say.For the good news. Your story is very well written. I like the descriptions, dialogue, and excellent technical writing skills. Your blurb certainly has caught me and the wonderfully written prologue.Now for my critic...

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