Untidy land - a childrens bedtime story No 1

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Summary

What happens to untidy children !

Genre:
Children / Fantasy
Author:
oldgimmer1
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
6
Rating:
4.0 1 review
Age Rating:
13+

Beginning

Were you an untidy child?

Miles Harper was - his mum's favourite saying to Miles was -

"If you don't keep your room tidy, you'll end up in untidy land one day my lad" !

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Scherize-Michelle Van Wyk: I loved this story but I feel like it could have been stretched out more. Like how they fell in love, how her journey went with her brother, the 3 weeks they where together before going to her town etc. I think it would be a fantastic read if the story was more detailed. But in general I loved it

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Kenna: I love the plots, the characters and the pace the story is progressing in. The only confusing thing however was the fact that the kids were once mentioned to be in college first and then school I think it needs some editing done other than that I totally loved it. I was expecting some mushy teach...

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carmenvansittert: Not perfectly written, but I am really enjoying this series. Cannot wait to see what happens next

CP: So hooked, read it so fast, can’t wait for the next!

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Calliope: The plot was genius, and I adored the dark plot twist the epilogue- it was brilliant. I loved this, and I cannot wait to continue reading Ellie's story.

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