Chapter 1
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Ray,a 10 year old girl was very upset by her parents behaviour. She scored the third highest mark in her school on public exams but her parents want her to be first in whatever she does so they compared and scolded her. She was really upset and started to cry"my parents are not happy with what i have scored they are always comparing". She shared her sadness with her mother. Her mother felt very bad and shared this with her father. Her parents planned to take her to a outing. They let her to decide the destination but she dint. They took her to a beach and a that moment she forgot everything and started to play with sand. Her mother requested her to take path in small games which where there again she was the third person to win a little toy. Her parents said that they were so happy for what she has done . Ray felt vey happy. My parents accepted what i did !!!!!hurray.
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Zenpen: I really liked the book. There were some pretty funny parts like when she actually burns him lol. IThe thing I like most however was that Damon didn't change for her and her for him like most Bad boy stories. Instead they respected each other for who they were and that right there was the biggest...
Crow: 'Among a thousand sorrows I stand alone.': This is my first review for anything I have read so far and I must admit I have only read the first two chapters at the moment, but everything works for me: the dialogue; the characters; the images; the humour; the pacing; the building of a place in my mind. If 'grandma has cooked a supper that h...
Deleted User: I loved the amount of careful detail you provide in the narration; it provides a clear mental image and sets the right introspective mood for the story. Love your writing voice - it's very evocative, and the flow of the story kept me reading. That said, some paragraphs are a bit long; if you spli...
Yinda Akins: I liked the plot a slot. This short story was more so a dramatic slice of life into a seemingly normal family. It was so easy to empathize with the characters, i didn’t require a long novel to understand why the characters are the way they are. Look forward to reading more stories from you :).