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The Girl From Ohio

By SophisticatedWoman89 All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Drama

Burgundy Sheets

I awoke. The same burgundy sheets covering me, protecting me from the dirty streets of Ohio. I looked across at the glowing alarm clock. Realizing it was 5 am, i ran down the mauve stairs. I bumped into my brother Timothy. 

"Jess, you need to wake up. Wake up Jessie."

I didn't understand. I was awake surely. But then terrible Timothy threw two tumbler of tap water at my tresses of chocolate hair. I suddenly awoke. But this time for real... or was it?

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