Entangled Temptations

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Chapter 4

Chapter 4

I stood in Max’s room, well OUR room for a moment, dumbfounded. I couldn’t believe that I agreed to this crazy proposition! The fact that this man was peeling away my layers like a blooming onion should’ve had me running for the hills, but the way he makes me feel is on a whole other level. I felt wanted, secure, sexy; I may not be able to trust him with my heart, but I could trust him with everything else.

I stand at the foot of the bed, replaying everything that happened between us there and got a little hot. Max walked up behind me wrapping his arm around my waist and kisses me where my neck & shoulder meet.


“You thinking about it too?”

“Thinking about what?”

“How hot last night was? How many times I made you come with my hands and my mouth?”

“Well I wasn’t at first, but I am now.”

His hand slowly crept underneath the waist of the yoga pants I was wearing, past my boy shorts, and right on to my pussy. I opened my legs just a little wider for him to enter. Just when I thought that things would take an interesting turn, he nibbles my ear for a nanosecond and then releases me.

“You know, I’m getting pretty tired of you teasing me.”

“Oh yeah? Because I love it. I love how mad you get, how pink in the face you become and how flustered you are since you can’t get your way.”

“You know, if it’s going to be like this, I can always get my room back. I made sure to check that you know.”

Max laughs a deep and sexy laugh at my comment. He steps away from me and I turn my head to try and look his way.

“Oh is that right? But then you would never know what I have in store for you now would you?”

“Well, you know the saying, ‘curiosity killed the cat’…”

“Yeah but what you didn’t know is, ‘satisfaction brought it back’...”

“Oh my God, did you just make a corny ass joke?” I laughed in disbelief.

He walked up to me and popped me on my ass and then wrapped his arms around me, “Are you making fun of me Kaliyah?”

I groaned when I felt the dull sting from his hand, but moaned when the pleasure started kicking in. I rubbed my ass against his groin, ensuring to tease him a little.

“I would never Max. I was just simply asking a question.”

He turned me around and threw me on the bed as if I was a mere rag doll. His aim was perfect as my head landed on a pillow. He wasted no time literally ripping my pants off of me. I just quirked my brow.

“Don’t worry Kay, we’ll get you some more later.”

I didn’t say a word, but he knew. I stopped myself from giving a cheesy grin, so I focused on what he was doing. He continued on to my boy shorts; instead of being a savage this time ripping my panties, he handled them with care as if they were the most delicate lace. He crawled up my body, and kissed me so deeply, that if we had kept on kissing like that, I would’ve come right then on the spot.

He pulled away, unaware he was gyrating against me in tune with how he kissed me. He gets off me and rolls onto his side.

“Okay, before we go any further….”

“But I like going further.”

“Trust me, I do too, but there are some things I want to ask. So let’s play a game okay?”

“Ugh, I don’t like where this is going, but I’m game. I guess.”

“Okay, so this is about your unspoken desires. How about, for every truth you tell me about your desires, I’ll take something off, and for every lie you tell me, you put something back on.”

As much as I didn’t want to disclose my desires to him, I did want him naked a little more. But the fear in me wouldn’t allow me to open my mouth. It’s not that I was afraid that he would somehow judge me for what I want, but the fear from my past always creeping up to try and correct me. So all I could do was nod my head and pray that he would accept that.

“I’ll accept that nod only because I can only imagine how difficult this is for you. But please just trust there’s a reason for my asking about this.”

I could only muster up a small whisper, “Okay.”

“How about I give you a headstart.” He said with a cocky smirk that showed one of his dimples. He got up and proceeded to shock the hell out of me and take his pants off.

“You know most people in this situation would’ve started easy and just took off their shirt.”

“I’m not most people, or have you forgotten already?” He said again, with those dimples peeking out, “Okay, so your deepest darkest desires: GO.”

I took a deep breath still aware that I was very naked below the waist. I tried not to focus on that so much so I looked at the ceiling. Then muster up the courage to look Max square in his eye.

“Okay, they are all pretty much dark but let’s start with what I’d like to do with and to you.”

All Max gave was a raised eyebrow to the revelation I had just given him. He patiently waited for me to continue, but then he lifted his hand and started rubbing my upper arm. Not in a seductive, flirty way, but in a soothing “I’m here for you” way. That immediately made me feel immensely better to open up to him.

“Well first, I’d like to go down on you in public.”

“ ‘Go down’? What are you? 12? I need you to use adult language.”

I rolled my eyes at him, I knew he wasn’t trying to chastise me. He was trying to still get me out of my shell but it still felt like he was rebuking me.

“Okay, fine. I’d like to be somewhere in public while I’m sucking your dick. The very thought of possibly getting caught turns me on. In fact, I’m getting wet just thinking about it.”

Max slowly moved his hand from rubbing my arm to my creeping it down my stomach, and dipped his finger into my belly button, tracing it down my pleasure trail, and lightly placed his heavy hand on my pussy. I started breathing heavy, closed my eyes, and said, “Wait. You’re supposed to taking something off.”

He chuckled and moved his hand, “So it seems.” He pulled the t-shirt off his back quickly, then laid back down on his side to face me. “Please continue.”

“Well after go-- I mean after I finish sucking your dick, I would like for you to fuck me in that public place.”

“So you don’t want me to come in your mouth?”

“I mean you can, but not for my fantasy of fucking in public.”

“Okay. I got it. What else?”

“Um, are you forgetting something?” I asked, looking at his undershirt.

“Oh yeah.” He rolled over and got up, took his undershirt off, and threw it clear across the room. “Are those the only fantasies you’ve got Kay? Come on.”

“So you know how I told you I’ve always had fantasies of being with a woman? Well, I’d like to make out with a beautiful woman in front of you, perhaps turn you on.”

“Oh, there would be no need for you to be with another woman for you to turn me on. If you couldn’t tell.” He looks down at his groin. He’s not lying, there he was, standing at full attention.

“But I have to admit, it would be sexy as hell to watch you.” He says as he takes off his socks.

“Since we’re on the topic of you watching, I’d also love fuck her.”

“Holy shit Kay, where have you been all my life? I know this is bad timing to say, but your fiance was a tiny man for repressing that in you.” He said trying to adjust himself. I guess he must’ve gotten a little uncomfortable standing at full staff.

“I guess you’re almost out of clothes,” I said cheekily, “but don’t worry, that one can be a freebie.”

“I hope you only have one more left since all I have are my boxers.”

“Yes this is the last one, I promise. I’m sure you already know seeing as how you can read my body like braille. I would like to have a threesome. It can be either gender, I don’t care, but I’d like to do all of these with no reservation, no qualms, and most of all no guilt or shame as though I’ve done something wrong.”

“Kay, please understand, when you’re with me, EVERYTHING we do should be guilt and shame-free, and I’d never make you feel otherwise. And your last fantasy? Holy fuck. Of course, I’d be honored to even be a participant in that, but if I had a preference, it’d be with a woman and not a man. I don’t want to share you with another man, at least not yet.” Max said as he lifted his hips and took his boxers off. I had to swallow all of the drool that was collected in my mouth, otherwise, I’d be choking on it.

“His body, I swear is so fucking sexy.” I thought to myself.

“So you’re completely nekkid.” I awkwardly said trying to make light of this situation.

“Yeah, and you’re not,” Max said as he climbed on top of me. “Don’t worry, I’ll stay completely on the outside, I promise.”

“What made you get a nipple piercing?”

“I’ve always wanted one. While I may have to compose myself on the outside while I’m working, I am completely free when I’m away from the medical field.”

“Sounds like you know how to balance work and play,” I said trying to distract myself from the naked sexy man laying on top of me.

“I do, and I’m trying to get you to understand it’s okay to deviate from social constructs. You are a grown woman who is successful in what she does. Don’t let society, your family, your job, or whatever make you unhappy because you can’t express yourself the way you want to or because you can’t be who you truly are.”

“I don’t know why no one else has put it the way you have. But when you say it, it makes so much sense.”

“Maybe someone already did, but you weren’t in a place to be ready to hear it.”

“You’re right Max. You’re absolutely right.”

“Of course I am. Now, about these fantasies? Is there like a timeline on this?”

“Not quite sure what you mean.”

“I mean, belleza,” Max said as he started kissing my neck and collarbone, “with these fantasies, is it like one a day or can it be a cluster of things?”

I moaned as he started sucking on my soft spot behind my ear. “No, I’ve decided to leave that entirely up to you.”

He lifted his head and gave me a 1000 watt smile. You would’ve thought I had just given him the keys to the kingdom. I guess in a way, I did.

“Oh are you in for a treat little one.”


“Yeah, but let’s deal with this first.” He said as he looked between, and watching his precum leak out a little.

I started moving hips in rhythm to let him know I was ready. He must’ve sensed it because he reached under the pillow that I was laying on and grabbed a condom.

“Did the condom fairy leave you a condom under the pillow or did you just know that you were getting lucky?”

“I just always like to be prepared, so I place condoms all over the place. I wouldn’t want to ruin the mood.”

In a way, he had a point, but still, I could feel myself getting jealous just thinking of how it could’ve easily been another woman here besides me.

“Don’t worry Kay, I only lay out condoms for the women I REALLY like. If I don’t like you, I don’t waste my time.”

“Okay, what is up with you knowing my thoughts?”

“Like you said, ‘I can read you like braille’. Plus everything you’re thinking is written on your face.” He said as he tore the foil on the wrapper.

He placed it by my knees and proceeded to place light kisses down my torso. He started at the dip in my throat, working his way down to my breasts, stopping there to show both of my breasts the attention they needed. He circled his tongue around my areolas, and lightly sucking my nipple. Then he did something that almost made me jump out of my skin, he bit my them.

“Oh my God! What the fuck Max?” I said looking down at my bright red nipples, still wet with his saliva.

He just smirked up at me and proceeded to work his way down my torso placing kisses underneath my breasts, then kissing down to my stomach. He stopped at my belly button and dipped his tongue there. I did the same thing to him, that he did to me. I grabbed his hair and yanked his head up.

“Max, if you don’t want it rough, I suggest you stop it.”

Max chuckled and said, “But Kay, don’t you know, I like it rough. In fact, let’s see how rough we can get later. As for now? I’m dying to get inside your pussy, but there’s something I have to do first.”

I just closed my eyes and moaned loudly. “Holy shit this man and his words.” I thought to myself. I didn’t move my hand from his head as I needed SOMETHING to hold on to. He gave me a moment to try and compose myself as much as I could, but then he continued on kissing both sides of my hips. Finally, he made it on to my pleasure trail and hitting the front of my pussy.

“Fucking hell Max, that really isn’t necessary, I’m wetter than Niagara Falls.”

“This isn’t for you, this is for me. You thought I was playing when I said you tasted sweet? Now lay back and enjoy.”

He got right in front of my pussy and took a long slow swipe from the bottom of my opening all the way to the top of my clit. I pulled some of his hair at the root. Oh my fucking God! This feeling never gets old, and I’m trying like hell not to scream so loud. His mouth hits a particular spot on my clit, and I break.

I scream at the top of my lungs at the searing pain I just received.

“What the fuck Max?! Do you have a fetish for biting?!”

“No, but tell me what you felt the first time I bit you?”

I pulled the pillow from underneath me and put it over my face to scream. This man was going to be the death of me. First, he bites my nipple, then he bites my clit. But both times, after the pain, I was on the edge of ecstasy, and that’s when it hits me. I remove the pillow and look Max in his eyes. He hasn’t moved from the spot.

I smirk at him, knowing that that was EXACTLY what he wanted me to feel. “You’re a dirty bastard who doesn’t play fair,” I say to him with a playful tone.

“So what did you feel then?”

“The only way I can describe it is, it felt like my uterus took a flip. After the pain dulled away, it was such pleasure, it only made me wet more.”

He smirks up at me, “Good, that’s exactly what you’re supposed to feel Kay. That means I’m doing my job right.”

After he said that, he resumed eating my pussy like it was an all you can eat buffet. I gushed and it didn’t take me long to come after his ministrations. Afterward, he took the condom that was by my knee and started to take it out. I stopped him and asked, “May I put it on you?”

Max smiled and handed over the wrapper. I gingerly took the condom, hoping not to foil this sexy moment. I scooted closer to him so I could put it on him; I took the condom out pinched the tip, and began to roll it on him and thought of something naughty.

“I’d like for you to come in my mouth afterwards. It’s only fair since you’ve tasted me and my essence. I’d like to do the same.”

Whatever I said in that sentence must’ve pleased him because his dick seemed to grow a little more in girth and length.

“Kay, if you don’t hurry up with that condom, I swear to God, I will fuck you right now. Condom be damned. I know I’m clean and can only assume you are, but fucking hell, I’m ready now.”

I started to lay down on my back but Max stopped me.

“Oh no, I don’t want boring right now. Prepare for me to be a little rough.”

I swear this man will kill me with either his words or his mouth in general.

“So tell me, how do you want me?”

“On your hands and knees and at the edge of the bed.”

I proceeded to get into that position and then he grabbed me at the root of my hair and pulled. “Oh rough you say….damn.” I thought to myself. He yanked my head up and his head was above mine, so he could kiss me. Mouth over mouth. “Damn if this isn’t a sexy ass kiss.” I thought. It was at an awkward angle, but I didn’t care, I’d let this man tie me into a pretzel knot at this point.

Max pulled away from the kiss and pushed himself into me, no warning, no easing. Again, I felt that pleasurable pain of him hitting all my walls, I swear he was up in my uterus. The tempo he set was rough and hard. With one hand in my hair and the other hand on my hip, holding on for dear life like he was riding a bucking bronco. The way his manicured balls were slapping at my clit made everything even the more erotic. I was in such a blissful, erotic space in my head, that I felt like I was floating. Next thing I know, I felt a hard slap, and instantly I was back in my body. I felt another slap on the other cheek, then he rubbed the pain away. I moaned at both smacks while he drilling me like an animal, never losing his tempo.

Somehow, I managed to keep with how hard he was going, throwing my ass back whenever he plowed forward. It was a miracle when I was able to squeeze out, “Fuck Max! If you keep going like this, I’m going to come!”

He chuckles, and says, “Good that’s the point. Otherwise, it would be really odd afterwards.” He says.

I can feel myself getting close, and I’m trying to draw this out but Max won’t let me. He hits a particular sweet spot and then I’m done for. I feel my world shatter, my eyes go fuzzy, and I scream out. It takes me a moment to gather myself and Max has stopped moving. He’s still inside me and I can feel his pulsing veins. It’s only a wonder that my elbows hadn’t collapsed.

Max begins massaging my scalp, and I swear I’m ready to pass out.

“You still with me belleza?”

“Barely. You keep massaging my scalp and I’ll completely be out.”

“Okay, now that we’ve dealt with your orgasm, let’s deal with mine. Get up.”

He pulled himself out and I got up.

“I’m going to lift you up and I want you to put your legs around me.”

Without thinking, I put my arms around his neck as he lifted me. This almost felt natural with him, this intimacy. He walked us to the wall and placed my back against it. He lines himself up with my opening, and as he pushes his way through, he kisses me slow, long, and deep. I’m distracted on what I should actually focus on: his kisses or the way he’s fucking me in rhythm with the way he’s kissing me.

With my hand at the back of his neck, running my fingers through his hair. He’s got one of his hands cradling the side of my face, and the other on my ass holding me up, while we’re kissing. When we stop kissing, he changes up his tempo from slow to a brutal pace, and he’s sucking places on my neck that would absolutely get me hot if I wasn’t already.

“Oh fuck Max, I’m already ready again!”

“Good, are you with me?”

“Yes, always.”

“Well, I want to look you in your eyes when you do it, so stay with me okay? Don’t close your eyes.”

As I climb that hill to get to the place where I am the most free, I remember that I wanted to taste him. I gasp as he hits that G-spot and the next thing I know, all I see are stars before my eyes, and I’m coming. I lick my lips, hoping that he understands what I’m trying to convey. Apparently he understands and lets me down slowly. He takes the condom off as I get to my knees.

He starts to jerk himself off as I suck on the head, and it doesn’t take long before he comes in my mouth. With sweat running down his forehead and his torso, I look up at him in eyes, and next thing I know: rope after rope of his essence in my mouth, and I have to say, he tastes like a mixture of strawberries and almonds. I swallow everything he gives me.

“Fuck Kay, you’re such a dirty girl and I love it. I can see this is going to be a rather interesting two weeks. Let’s go shower together and see what the day holds for us.”

I get up with a smile, rather proud of myself, taking what he had to give me, LIKE A BOSS. I sashay my way into the bathroom to get ready for our shower together, feeling for the first time in my life unashamed. I guess I am learning a few things that Max is teaching me. I take a look at myself in the mirror, noticing the little red spots on my neck that Max gave me, getting wet all over again. Thank God I was getting ready for a shower.

Max turned on the faucet and waited for me to get in.

“Kay how about we go to a club tonight? Let’s have a little fun.”

“Uh oh, that sounds like trouble.”

“Don’t worry, it’s good trouble I promise.”

“Okay, are we going to actually have some fun?”

“Oh, you have no idea little one.”

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