Entangled Temptations

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Chapter 5


We took a nice long shower together, washing each other up while getting dirty and when we finished, we dressed pretty quickly and were ready to sightsee. I made sure to grab my camera, cause you never know when one could be inspired for their artwork. We didn’t want to stay out too late because we were going out of the hotel to have a late dinner and then go out dancing in some club.

Not planning something all the while being a willing participant was something new to me. I always had to have control over everything that wasn’t work-related. So not knowing what we were doing, to where we going began to make my teeth itch. But I felt like I was trying to become a different version of me, a “YOLO, and do whatever the fuck I want” attitude.

“Do you have everything you need?” Max asked as he walked up behind me and kissed my neck.

“Yeah, I just need to grab my wallet and my camera. Never know what I might be able to photograph.”

“I hope you aren’t suggesting you need your wallet to pay for something.”

“Well, why wouldn’t I need my wallet? As good looking as I am, I do need money to pay for things.” I said to him cheekily, but the only thing that met me was a stone face.

“Kay, I asked you to stay with me. Surely you didn’t think that you would have to pay for things while you are with me.”

“Well yeah, Max. I can’t expect you to pay for everything on my behalf. That hardly seems fair. I mean what are you getting out of this, other than myself who I’m sure is a pain in your ass half the time.”

“Kaliyah, it truly has been my pleasure from the moment I saw you fall to your knees just being in your company until now and even beyond that I’m sure. Just please, humor me in this? And don’t fight me because you won’t win.” He said just holding me tight.

When I think about it, what would I be fighting him on? My pride? My wallet? My ego? It didn’t make sense, so I did what any woman in my shoes with her head on straight would do.

“If you are that adamant about it Maximillian,” I said to him teasingly.

He turned me around and gave me the deepest kiss that would’ve disintegrated my ovaries if I had any leftover.

“Who says we need to go out and sightsee today?” I groan, “there’s a sight I see right now that should be considered the 8th wonder of the world.”

“Haha. At some point, we do need to get out of this room.”

“We will, tonight. Remember the club?”

“As much as I love fucking your brains out, I also want to learn more about you outside of fucking you.”

“Why? I’m not that interesting.”

“I beg to differ. Think of it like this: the quicker we leave this room, the quicker tonight will come.” Max said with a smile, bringing his panty busting dimples out.

About 30 mins later, we ended up going to the Seville Cathedral. I was able to take some artistic shots for my website, and some personal candid shots of Max for myself. After we toured the Cathedral, we sat down at a nearby cafe.

“Kay, tell me are you enjoying yourself so far?”

“I can honestly say that I am. You remind me of my friend Ayana; she makes me think of things from a different perspective.”

“Good, because tonight I’m going to push your boundaries like you wouldn’t believe. I know you’ll enjoy it, but it will be out of your comfort zone.”

“I trust you, Max. Otherwise, I wouldn’t be here with you right now. I don’t know why and I can’t explain it.”

He leaned back in his seat, rubbing his goatee, almost contemplative.

“Penny for your thoughts?” I inquired.

“I’m thinking how I’d like to get in between your legs right now, slip my hands underneath your dress, and watch your cheeks turn pink as I play with you.”

I had to cross my legs to overcome that feeling he just gave me.

“Well, why don’t you?” I teased.

“Because you aren’t ready for that yet, but when I finish, you will be.”

“It’s getting late, why don’t we go back to the hotel and get ready for dinner?” I said wanting to change the subject.

We got up and made our way back to our room. I wanted to check in with Ayana and tell her what happened after we got off the phone.

“Max, you go ahead and get ready, I want to talk with Ayana a little bit.”

He gave me a nod, then gave me my privacy. I stepped out on his balcony and made the call. Ayana almost immediately picked up.

“Hola mami! Now, THIS is a decent hour to call. What was up earlier?”

I rolled my eyes at her comment, “So you know how you’re always telling me to be more spontaneous?”

“Oh my God. You didn’t go off and get married or something did you? Cause you always go from one extreme to the other.”

“No, I didn’t go and get married. Jesus! No, I decided to spend my two weeks here with someone I just met.”

“Who that hot guy you were telling me about?”

“Yeah, one and the same.”

“Can I get a dick pic? Or at least what he looks like?”

“No, you can’t get a dick pic! Jesus Ayana! I might be able to send a pic to you later. Listen, I got to get ready, but I just wanted to touch base with you. Love you chica.”

I hung up the phone, with the anticipation of tonight. I got out my sexiest dress, which was a loose black bandage sundress which was sheer around my midriff, and the skirt of my dress. The only place that wasn’t see through was around my breast and my ass. However, to take it a step further, I decided to forgo wearing underwear. “Never know what Max has in store,” I thought to myself.

It didn’t take me long to get dressed since I had already had done my hair from earlier. I made sure to keep it in the top knot on my head. I stepped out of the bathroom feeling like a million bucks.

Max whistled and said, “Damn. I can’t wait to have you tonight.”

“Why wait? There’s a perfectly good bed over there.” I said gesturing to the queen size mattress behind me.

“Because good things come to good little girls who wait.”

“You’re such a fucking tease.”

“Good. Are you ready to go and have the time of your life?”

“Yes, I am.”

And with that, Max put that heavy palm on my lower back and led me out of the room.

“We’re going to eat out of the hotel tonight okay?”

“It’s your night. I’m just along for the ride.”

We get into a cab and about 10 mins later we arrive at the restaurant. There was a balmy breeze in the air, and I was falling in love with Spain. Making sure to lay claim to who he was with when we got out of the car, Max placed his hand back on my lower back, like it always belonged there. I was amazed at how the architecture looked Moorish but with a modern take on it. I almost wished I had brought my camera.

“Tiene una reserva señor?” The beautiful hostess asked, to be honest, she took my breath away.

“Sí, bajo el nombre de Quintero.” Max rolled off his tongue flawlessly.

“Sí señor sígame.”

We followed the hostess into large ballroom like area. It was open at the ceiling, almost like a dome, and a large fountain in the center of the room. It was like nothing I’ve ever seen before. Max pulled out my chair for me to sit, and then sat next to me.

“This is a beautiful place Max, how’d you find out about this place?”

“It came highly recommended from the front desk. It pays to know people huh?” he said with a wink.

“Now will you tell me what we are going to do tonight?”

“After we leave here, I’m going to take you flamenco dancing. Seville is synonymous for it.”

“But I don’t know how to dance the flamenco.”

“So? You’re going to let that stop you? It’s all about what you want to do. I told you tonight, I’m going to push you, and I meant that, IN ALL ASPECTS.”

Instinctively, I wanted to sulk and throw a slight tantrum, but I gave Max all control of planning today, so I had no choice but to trust him. Our conversation flowed over appetizers and our entrees. Max wasn’t playing when he said wanted to push me in all aspects because he wanted to feed me from his hands. Normally, I would’ve said “no thanks” and went about my business, but it was all about trying new things and throwing caution to the wind. I have to admit though, having him feed me from his fingers was all types of tantalizing.

“You keep sucking my fingers like that Kay, and I’ll have them inside you before you know it,” Max growled. “Don’t ruin the fun before we can even have it.”

After dinner, he didn’t even bother to order us dessert, which I was thankful for because I ready to get started. We left the restaurant and walked to the club, which surprisingly wasn’t that far from it.

Even before entering, I could hear the loud rhythmic stomping and the beautiful Spanish guitar. I could feel the beat thumping inside me.

“I’m not going to lie, I’m a little excited.” I squealed.

All Max said was, “Good.”

We got a table close to the dance floor and watched another beautiful woman dressed in an elaborate red dress, glide across the floor. I wanted to concentrate on her dance steps, but across from us was this stunning woman with the complexion of a deep almond milk. I must’ve been staring too long because Max noticed. Without saying a word, he got up from our table and walked around the room to her. I started to panic. I didn’t know what he was doing, but this was definitely out of my comfort zone. About 5 minutes later, they both came back to our table.

The woman sat down next to me, and Max across from me. She leaned in close and smelled of sweet plums.

With a deep French accent, she said, “Hello. My name is Anais. Please forgive me for being so forward, but I couldn’t help notice you. You are absolutely stunning.”

I blushed at her compliment because I could truly say the same to her. I extended my hand out to her and said, “Hello Anais, my name is Kaliyah, but you can call me Kay.”

I took a peek over at Max, and the only thing I could read off from him was concentration.

“So Kay, tell me are you here on holiday?”

“Yes, and yourself?”

“Actually I’m here for work, but I wanted to have a night off.”

“What exactly do you do Anais?”

“I’m a model.”

I looked her up and down and saw her physique. She was shaped liked Ashley Graham with her curves. “How fitting.” I thought since I was a photographer.

Max began to chime in, “So Kay, Anais here tells me she’s looking for a little fun tonight. Are you down for it?”

I gave a coy look to Max, not knowing this was his plan all along.

“Sure, who am I to stop it?”

Anais looked at me, then licked her lips. “The owner is a friend of mine. There are some privacy areas up top where we can still watch them dance if you’d like.”

I nodded my head and Anais got up from the table, both Max and I followed suit. We went to the back of the room and climbed up a flight of stairs. Security stopped us, but Anais leaned in close and said something that I couldn’t hear. It must’ve worked because the next thing I know, the guard stepped aside and let us through.

When we got to the room, it was almost like a big glass cube. People could see through the walls. “So much for privacy,” I said to myself. But then again, this is what I wanted. There was an oversized plushy couch for all of us to sit. Anais sat down first and patted the seat next to her.

“Come sit Kay, I won’t bite. Not unless you ask me to.” Anais invited.

Reluctantly, I walked over to her and felt stiff. Anais turned her body so that she could face me. She took my chin and leaned in. I could feel Max’s eyes on me, practically undressing me, but he didn’t move from his spot. As soon as her lips touched mine, I felt a twitch in my pussy. Anais pulled away, looked me in my eyes, and then looked at Max. It was almost like they had spoken to one another without even saying a word. She gave him a small smile and then looked at me.

“I have to be honest, I’ve actually never done anything like this before. Don’t get me wrong, I’ve been with men and I’ve been with women, but never at the same time.”

I gave a small chuckle being able to relate to her somewhat.

“Don’t feel bad, I’ve never been with a woman. It’s only because of Max that I’m even here now.”

She looked at me and said, “Same here. I mean I noticed you and thought you were attractive, but I would’ve just went back to my hotel room and got out my vibrator.”

Max then moved from his spot and moved closer to us on the couch. Anais once again embraced my face and asked, “May I?”

I nodded my head fully aware of what it could hopefully escalate to, not giving a care to the fact that people could look in the room. Anais once again leaned in and softly touched her lips to mine. This time, she took a swipe with her tongue, and she tasted exactly as she smelled. Wanting more, I moved in closer and put my hand on her neck. On the third swipe of her tongue, I was fully intoxicated on the lust of her and Max. I faintly heard Max say, “Enough!”

I pulled my head back still full of fuzzy thoughts and drunkenly looked over at Max. He had this intense look on his face, and I knew his control was about to snap.

“Why don’t you come over here and join us?” Anais asked confidently.

“I think I will, except Kay, I need you to get up so I can sit in your spot.”

Without thinking or reacting, I obeyed and got up from where I was sitting, almost waiting for his next command. He sat on the couch like a king would sit on his throne. Regal and almost cocky like. With his arms stretched atop the couch, he looked at me.

“Now Kay, I’ll leave it up to you how you want to do this. Just remember people can see through. I want you to come over here, and unzip me.”

He then focused his attention on Anais and began kissing her neck. I knew I had a decision to make and either way Max would be fine with it. However, this was a fantasy of mine, and I didn’t know when I would ever get another chance to play it out. I looked around, watching my surroundings. I noticed that no one was really paying attention to me and what was going on in this particular room.

I moved closer to Max and dropped to my knees. He seemed unphased as I was unzipping his pants, but I could tell he was very interested in what I was doing. Even though the room was vibrating with the rhythm of the dancer downstairs, all I could concentrate on was the sounds of Anais and Max kissing. If I had to be honest, it was the hottest thing I’ve yet to lay my eyes on. Very aroused and turned on, I placed all my focus on taking Max out of his pants.

Before I could even put my mouth on his dick, he stopped kissing Anais and gestured at me with his finger.

“Come here, Kay.”

I sat up on my knees and leaned into his face, he roughly took the back of my neck and slammed his lips on me, hard. I had never felt a kiss like this. He kissed me as though he NEEDED to kiss me before his last breath. This wasn’t a romantic kiss, it was a kiss to DOMINATE me. He let go of my neck and proceeded to kiss Anais. I went back to his dick and swallowed it whole like I hadn’t even eaten earlier. I wanted to try something different, so I made it sloppy. I must’ve been doing something right because I heard him moan. Right when I almost got him to explode in my mouth, he stopped me.

He looked at me and simply nodded his head. Then I heard him faintly ask Anais if she’d like to come to our hotel room and continue this there. Anais looked at me, licked her lips, and said, “Absofuckinglutely.”

Max adjusted himself and put himself back into his pants. He stood up and took my hand. I looked at Anais, and just knew I needed to kiss her again. This felt so surreal because the very thing I wanted to try out, this man effortlessly made happen. No matter what happens after this trip, I will always hold what Max was teaching me in the highest regard.

What I couldn’t say in words, I leaned over and kissed Anais with a force so passionately, thanking her for allowing me to live out my fantasy with her. I grabbed a little of her hair at the nape and said, “Let’s go have some real fun.”

I wasn’t sure if I wanted to take control of Anais or let Max direct the scene. I just knew I felt giddy over this. Max led the way out of the club and hailed us a cab. Again with me in the middle, Anais had placed her hand on my knee and began to move it up closer to my pussy. When she reached the top of my pussy, and her hand met nothing but skin, she gasped.

“Damn Kay, you’re so fucking sexy. No panties? I wish I would’ve known sooner.” Anais whispered in my ear.

I turned my head to her and said, “Well now you know. What are you going to do about it.?”

The cab was the size of a regular van, so Anais got to her knees in front of me. She began to trail kisses from my knee to the crease where the top of my thigh and pussy meet. Anais looked up at me and said pleadingly, “Can I get a taste before we get to your hotel?”

I opened up my legs, as far as my dress would allow. I leaned back so that she could get a little more access, she took a long swipe at my clit, and I about jumped out of my skin. To keep myself distracted and not make any noise in front of the cab driver, I sucked on Max’s neck, HARD. He moaned so hard, I almost made him cry out, instead he just readjusted himself.

Anais looked up at me and simply, “Mmm. You taste like honey.”

She got off her knees and into her seat. Meanwhile, Max took my hair in an almost brutal fashion, and whispered roughly, “I’ve been holding back Kay, but tonight I’m gonna show you just how I can REALLY be.”

I leaned in closer to him and licked his lips and whispered back, “I look forward to it.”

We finally arrived back at the hotel with rushed anticipation, knowing what was going to happen. I took Anais’s hand and led the way, Max just followed. When we reached the front desk, Max stopped and asked for a bottle of champagne to be sent up to our room. He then joined us while we and a few other people were waiting for the elevator. We got on, and Anais began to caress my face. Being in an enclosed space, in full public view, I began to blush.

She leaned in close and said, “Don’t worry about them. Focus on me and Max. Pretend like no one else is watching.”

That was all she said before took my face and passionately kissed me. This whole experience was new to me and erotic as hell. All I could think was why hadn’t I done this before now. I was so distracted, that I hadn’t even realized that Anais had managed to slip her hand up my dress and was perilously close to sticking them in my panties.

Max whispered over to us, “Okay ladies, let’s save this for the room because we’re attracting some serious attention.” Pointing his head over in the direction opposite of us. There were 2 guys in sheer awe of us, with looks of jealousy on their faces at Max. I even heard one mumble, “Damn what a lucky fucking guy.”

We finally got off the elevator, and into our room. Almost as soon as the door closed, Anais started undressing, but Max stopped her. With both of us standing side by side, Max leveled us with a look and said, “Okay ladies, this is how this is going to go.”

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