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There are two kinds of embers: the kind that flares into flame with the barest encouragement, and the kind that is prodded too hard and extinguishes, lingering only as smoke, the dark memory of better days. I am the fading ember, the memory, pushed to crumbling. And change, though attractive, is as ephemeral as smoke. ---- An expansion of my short story "The Solution." ---- ****Please consider whether a story featuring discussions of suicide, mental health difficulties, poverty, and other similar themes is a safe choice for you.****

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Chapter 1: On the Roof

What do you do when you’ve decided, irrevocably, that this is not the life you want to live?


Easy to say. Easy to believe too, while hope is a bright ember.

Except there are two kinds of embers: the kind that flares into flame with the barest encouragement, and the kind that is prodded too hard and extinguishes, lingering only as smoke, the dark memory of better days.

I am the fading ember, the memory, pushed to crumbling. And change, though attractive, is as ephemeral as smoke.

So, what do I do?

I discover the answer one night, alone in my dank apartment, the smell of must and mold coating every hair in my nostrils:



It turns out the remedy is as obvious as two plus two, if less elegant.

In the newborn hours of April 1st, I make my way to the roof of my building. Ironic? Probably. Personally, I’ve never had much patience for irony. I will make this quick. No lingering, no giving away objects or sudden professions of love. My only requirement is that it’s a private spot. I can’t stand the idea of using a bridge that has statistics attached.

On the roof, it is warm, which is nice. There are stars, as many as a few dozen, and that is nice too. I allow myself a long pause, taking in the night. I am making sure. Only the image of smoke comes to mind—curling upwards, happiness and hope disintegrating on the breeze. There is the suggestion of feelings that should be attached, but only for things that are already dead. The future is dirty ash.

I step up and onto the edge. Below me is a narrow alley, dirty, but yes, private. I like the idea of resting for a while undisturbed. I reach my toe over the edge and begin forward motion.


My foot stumbles into blank air and my stomach jumps as if gravity has already taken hold of it. My arms pinwheel, seeking balance and finding it only after I am sure they won’t. It is counter-productive, of course; falling is the goal. But suicide is about intention and I’ll be damned before my last inch of control is snatched away by an angry voice.

And it is angry. Not surprised to find me up here, not frightened at what it might witness. Just unapologetically pissed off.

“Find your own fucking roof,” it continues.

I step carefully down and turn. The woman standing there is as slim and dark as the shadow cast by a lamp post. Her hair is sheared into a do-it-yourself pixie, and she wears cheap bracelets in a stack that reaches nearly to her right elbow.

Indignation rises in me, filling the void where I’d searched for feeling and found none moments before. Life is made of lines: for promotions, for water fountains, for traffic lights. For Saint Peter’s gate, I expect. And here was this woman, honking her horn the second the light turns green. The sense of privilege, the presumption inherent in it, makes me burn.

“Fuck you,” I reply. “Wait your turn.”

The woman stares at me strangely, bangled arm crossed over her bare arm crossed under her breasts. She is no less angry, but she is maybe a little surprised.

It is only then that I realize a normal person would have stopped at the first interjection. That a normal person wouldn’t want a turn with their foot dangling over a roof edge. That we are offended for the wrong reasons.

We are the same, and we both know it. It is intimate and exposing, an invasion of privacy far worse than the tearing of clothes.

“Look,” she says finally when the moment fades. “Just do your thing. I’ll wait.” She waves dismissively toward the edge, and it is that which sends my burn into a boil.

“Like hell,” I spit. “I’m not going to let some privileged bitch watch.”

She averts her eyes upward. She is standing close, close enough to push me if she really wants to press the issue. She grips her own torso tighter as if to hold herself back.

“Fine,” she scoffs. “Have it your way. I don’t mind an audience.” She uncoils and makes to push past me.

I grab her bare arm in one hand, fingers meeting around her flesh. She jerks forward, animal desperation culminating in an animal snarl.

“Fuck off.”

“Find another place.”

“Genius,” she says sardonically. “A truly original idea, but I’m afraid it has to be here. Call me sentimental. What’s your excuse?”

“I live here.”

“If you want a show, hanging is better.”

“Now there’s an original idea.” I match her mocking tone.

“How you kill yourself…it makes a statement. Unless you can tell me yours, get out of my way.”

She moves forward with undisguised intention, but she is a waif, and I still have hold of her arm. She pulls up short when the tug hits her shoulder. She slashes out with her other hand and grazes my shoulder, my jaw, with blows I barely register. I could hit her back, but it seems a pitiful final act.

Outdone, she breathes carefully, calming herself in a way I am not yet ready to be calmed. Anger has pierced through me like a thick spear, carving a hole through my middle. I am a shell and this woman is keeping me from peace.

Under my hand, the woman shifts; I feel her muscles turn from coiled steel into pliant clay. Her expression grows warm as she stares up at me. She smiles.

“Please?” she simpers, dragging charm up from the depths like a sword drawn from a sheath. “I already wrote my note and everything. I promise I’ll be quick.”

That burning again, that indication that I will always be a second thought. I can’t let her go first. I can’t.

“Together, then?” she wheedles.

I think about it. Really. Together is different than watching or being watched. Together is very close to comfort. Together is like being together. Longing bounces like a pinball inside me, echoing in that cavernous space, searching for a place to settle. I understand with very little emotion that if I had found the comfort of togetherness, I might not be seeking solace from the pavement.

I shake my head.

“Jesus Christ, you’re stubborn,” she curses, all pretense evaporated.

Without warning, she collapses to the ground and breaks my grip. She sits, cross-legged and cross-armed, with her back pressing against the ledge of the roof.

I am left standing close to the edge. Below, far below, the alley waits. It promises relief. When I hit, the pinball will rest, satisfied. It is what I want. I’m tired. So tired.

“This is one hell of a Mexican standoff,” the woman complains.

I can’t share this. But I am too petty to let her have her way.

There’s nothing left, so I sit next to her. The wall is cool, and the stucco clings to my hair. She will undoubtedly take an advantage if she finds one. I leave my arms uncrossed so I can grab her if I have to. She tests me twice, adjusting subtly and even twisting her torso. The next time, she lunges upward, and I clamp a hand onto her thigh, pinning her.

“No.” I bark. She is not going to win. She is not going to infect my last moments with her audacity.

“You are really going to ruin this for some god damned ego trip?”

“It wouldn’t be ruined if you hadn’t shown up.”

“I should have just pushed you when I had the chance.”

We sit. We breathe. It is exhausting.

Eventually, I can no longer stand the silence, the sensation of being alone in a crowded room.

“What was in your note?” I ask.

“Piss off.” She stares straight ahead.

“Why does it have to be here?”

“Why won’t you go away?”

“I live here.”

“But you don’t want to. Clearly.”

“It’s a shitty place.”

“Yeah. It is.”

Her resignation barely shows. The tension that turns her body into a tuned wire doesn’t touch her voice. The desperation that transforms her into a panicked animal is only obvious because I have been transformed too. Time is passing. Too much time. The approach of tomorrow is unbearable.

“We need to figure this out.”

“I didn’t come up here to problem-solve.”

I want to laugh but can’t find the proper mechanism.

“You’re the one holding us back.”

I know. I wonder why.

“What was in your note?”

“Goodbye, Cruel World.”

She looks at me. Her eyes are brown. Her witticism doesn’t light them up. They are empty.

“You’re not just trying to save me,” a statement. An understanding.

I manage a wheezy scoff. “I came up here to jump off the roof. If I thought I could save anyone, I wouldn’t start with you.”

“The note’s for my sister. She’ll miss me.”

“Will you miss her?”

“I’ll be dead.”

It hadn’t occurred to me.

“Your turn,” she says. “One fact.” Her gaze is devoid of curiosity.

I think. It takes more energy than I have left to sift through the past, to look for one fact that doesn’t tumble into three more. I have to grasp for any chain of logic like a sailor yanking up an anchor.

Finding my answer is like learning the real lyrics to a verse you’ve stumbled over for years: obvious and disconcerting.

“I tried.”

I hear emotion in the words and feel my knuckles scrape against the floor as my hand curls into a fist.

I wait for her to comment. Instead, she continues.

“I made a promise.”

A beat. She makes a go-on gesture with her hand that is somehow sarcastic.

“I hate the daytime. It means I’m supposed to be out of bed.”

“Fuck ’em,” she says. “Stay in bed.”

My lip twitches. I think it’s a smile. I move the muscle again, just to feel it.

“Tonight is the anniversary,” she continues.

“It’s not going to get better.”

She sighs and the bellow of air is immense. “I tried too.”

The words are quiet. The rest, when it comes, is even softer. I listen like a priest assigned to death row.

“My best friend used to live here. When we were little, we would play hide-and-seek in the lobby. She died.

“I tried to keep going but…. I promised myself that if I tried to make it, really, honestly tried for one year, it was okay to quit.”

Her eyes close. “If I’m here, I’m connected to her again. I just want to be connected.”

We sit. We breathe. I consider what she’s told me but don’t look for an escape hatch. It’s her sinking ship, and she already knows the blueprints.

After a long while, she quietly murmurs, “Your turn.”

I open my mouth and now I am the one on my knees. My confession, when it comes, comes as a surprise. As it leaves my mouth, I hear my motives put into words for the first time.

“I can’t keep up. I’m behind. In everything—relationships, accomplishments, money. I can’t find solid ground, let alone an advantage. I can’t even live in this place anymore.”

“This shitty place.”

“This shitty place. Soon I’ll get kicked out. I’ll be on the streets. People will watch. Point.” I listen to my own clarity, and at last identify the most important link in the chain, the one directly attached to the anchor. “If I wait until tomorrow, it will be another day that I can’t afford to eat.”

I say it and realize that the sky is beginning to lighten, the stars fading out. We have spent so much time silently seething that tomorrow has already arrived.

“I’m so sick of being judged,” I admit reluctantly. It is hard to say. Hard to put those words in the air only to feel them settle at my feet on the rough concrete of the roof.

“Me too.” She places her words down gently so that they sit next to mine.

I look at her. “Together,” I almost say, but we are not friends. If anything, I like her less for sitting here with me, for making me understand, for being like me when the world is filled with an infinite number of possibilities.

She reaches down the front of her shirt and I am taken aback by the resurgence of my resentment in full, sickening force. The motion makes me notice how low her black tank-top is cut, reminds me of options that do not exist for me. I recoil, my face twisting.

Her hand comes out of her shirt, fingers clenched. She rests it on her lap.

“Neither of us is jumping tonight.”

“It’s not tonight.” I am trying to be cruel, but the effect is marred by surprise. She’s given up. Somehow, I am disappointed.


She opens her hand. In her palm, sitting meek and small, is a green paper bill. It is curled in on itself as if afraid to show its face. I see a one and half of a zero and my mouth goes wet.

“I brought it with me in case I had to bribe someone to get up here.”

She moves her hand so that her palm is hovering over my lap instead of hers.

I draw back. I remove my hand from her thigh. I am more distrustful of this gesture than of anything that has ever come before it.

“Take it,” she hisses, as vehemently as any curse.

It is the bite in her voice that makes me do it. The lack of sympathy. The exasperation because she hasn’t won. Cruelty is a language I understand.

I pinch the bill with two fingers and transfer it to my own palm. I stare at it with reverence. I feel the weight of it and the warmth. I still cannot see the full number. It doesn’t matter. With money in my hand, I feel a thought creep into my head, worming in slowly. It grows, filling me, pushing my anger to the side, quieting the pinball of loneliness that has pummeled me raw. It is a balm, a shady tree, the relief of a flood of tears.

I can eat today.

“I guess it doesn’t matter,” she looks around the roof as she says it. I can see the memories floating across her hollow eyes. No thought has made her full. “What’s one more day?”

Laboriously, she pushes herself up.

“You know I hate you, right?”

I know. I hate her too.

“You’d better figure it out,” she growls. “This is my place. If I see you up here again, I’ll change my mind about murder.”

“I understand.”

She looks at me dubiously. She turns away, but not before I see the dawning panic. The sky is gray now, instead of black, and I see it clearly.

I watch her go, marveling at the pain I’ve caused. Marveling that in my life of no consequence, I’ve caused anything at all.

Another thought comes, as invasive as the pinball and twice as alluring: maybe I can eat tomorrow, too.

The slim, dark woman leaves me alone on the roof. She takes the stairs.

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