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That day I thought you were mine I was so happy to see you I skipped up your steps with a huge grin on my face.
I was heading toward your room I just walked in without knocking, I thought you loved me until I saw you under the covers with my best friend you were in the middle of doing it with my own best friend.
I threw the promise ring you gave me a year ago on graduation on the ground and ran out of your room not looking back.
You came running after me and grabbed my wrist, “Bella wait,” but I pushed you down.
“I thought you were mine!” I screamed.
“I thought you loved me!” I said still screaming pounding on his chest.
But it didn’t matter he didn’t feel it, he put his finger under my chin and lifted it and wiped away the flowing tears.
“I do love you and I always will.” He says, looking into my eyes.
“No you don’t otherwise you wouldn’t be screwing my best friend!” I say slapping him.
“I thought I loved you and I thought you were mine but I was wrong.” I whisper walking away.
“But I do love you and I will always be yours.” He yells back.
I flip him my finger, “Go to hell.” I say.
“Bella are you really going to break up with me?” He yells.
“Are you kidding me, you cheated on me with my own best friend for I don’t know how long.”
“We only did this a couple of times Bella, it’s not a big deal.”
“Oh look who’s talking, my once best friend the person I trusted most, more than my own family!”
“You think this isn’t a big deal, what about your fiancee Scarlett, huh did you think about that.”
I took my phone out of my pocket and took a quick picture of them and sent it to Charles, her fiance.
“You better not dare.” she says reaching for my phone.
“I’m going to ruin your life just like you ruined mine.” I reply hitting send.
Instantly there’s a beep beep coming from Scarlett’s phone.
She takes it out hesitating and swipes up, by looking at her face I know instantly who it is, Charles.
She shoves her phone in my face.
“We need to talk.” I laugh bitterly.
“He’s still wants to give you a chance.”
“My word against yours, who do you think he’ll believe.”
I slap her and slap Cole while I’m at it.
I glare at them both before turning on my heel and leave.
Once I’m safely in my car far away from them, I let the floodgates open.
“I thought you were mine.”
Hudson: Your story was fantastic Erin! The Rising Sun was one of the first stories I read on Inkitt, and I have to say I don't regret the three to four days I spent pouring through the story.Probably the biggest strength I see in your writing is your characterisation of Eliana, Oriens, and the rest of th...
Grapes Are Juicy yes!!!: I give this novel FIVE STARS ! This novel is worth reading from the beginning to the end! The plot and conflicts in this story are very smartly integrated. The language facility is a little odd , but i guess this was done on purpose, given the novel's set era. Other than that, this should definit...
christylynnr5: This was beyond amazing! I loved this book. The characters seemed so real. It was amazing how the author let Zak and Kaylees personalities slowly change. This story was very sad and eye opening. It could teach some people a very worthy lesson. It was a great combination of romance, mystery, and a...
Giuliana Cassetta: My face is full of tears, I never cried like now with a book or even a movie. I loved every single chapter. I truly don't know what to say, I'm out of words and my eyes hurt from crying. Such an bittersweet story, it's so wonderful. One of my favorites for sure. Keep it up!
mullikin902: Do not start reading this book unless you have enough time to finish it in one sitting, because you will not be able to put it down! Superlative! Addictive! Deliciously wicked characters you can't get enough of. Impatiently waiting for the sequel!
263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...
ynez2005: I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!!Though you really need to make another book,more Princesses!!! Whoooo!!!Girl Power!!!Mabey it could even be Devona's BFF???That would make it even better!!!Plus can you pleeease make Akki come back,together with Thea and Authur amd the whole family is back!Other th...
JONANNA: As an avid reader it is not often I say that about a book. The plot is what was different and the twists where unexpected. This book is defiantly a page turner and enjoyable read. I can't wait to reread this novel after a little editing to finish off the shine on this wonderful novel.
Jennifer Sibley Jannise: So, I originally read the book because my daughter asked me to. However, I read it in 2 days and thoroughly enjoyed it. It is well written and thought out. If the author writes and publishes any more books, I would definitely read them.
Ruby0h: Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...
catd69: Karim is a very talented writer. When I started reading his journey it took me into the book and I was in the story till the end. I've never felt this way with any other writers stories. If you want to read a gripping adventure, this will be the one book I would suggest you pick.
maewilde25: I liked this, though it dragged on for over 200pages and heaven knows I did not expect the plot twist in the middle. David being Cristiãn. I was wondering when he would show up and didn't know he was there all along. it looks like there should be a sequel, please let there be a sequel. I know the...
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...