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That day I thought you were mine I was so happy to see you I skipped up your steps with a huge grin on my face.
I was heading toward your room I just walked in without knocking, I thought you loved me until I saw you under the covers with my best friend you were in the middle of doing it with my own best friend.
I threw the promise ring you gave me a year ago on graduation on the ground and ran out of your room not looking back.
You came running after me and grabbed my wrist, “Bella wait,” but I pushed you down.
“I thought you were mine!” I screamed.
“I thought you loved me!” I said still screaming pounding on his chest.
But it didn’t matter he didn’t feel it, he put his finger under my chin and lifted it and wiped away the flowing tears.
“I do love you and I always will.” He says, looking into my eyes.
“No you don’t otherwise you wouldn’t be screwing my best friend!” I say slapping him.
“I thought I loved you and I thought you were mine but I was wrong.” I whisper walking away.
“But I do love you and I will always be yours.” He yells back.
I flip him my finger, “Go to hell.” I say.
“Bella are you really going to break up with me?” He yells.
“Are you kidding me, you cheated on me with my own best friend for I don’t know how long.”
“We only did this a couple of times Bella, it’s not a big deal.”
“Oh look who’s talking, my once best friend the person I trusted most, more than my own family!”
“You think this isn’t a big deal, what about your fiancee Scarlett, huh did you think about that.”
I took my phone out of my pocket and took a quick picture of them and sent it to Charles, her fiance.
“You better not dare.” she says reaching for my phone.
“I’m going to ruin your life just like you ruined mine.” I reply hitting send.
Instantly there’s a beep beep coming from Scarlett’s phone.
She takes it out hesitating and swipes up, by looking at her face I know instantly who it is, Charles.
She shoves her phone in my face.
“We need to talk.” I laugh bitterly.
“He’s still wants to give you a chance.”
“My word against yours, who do you think he’ll believe.”
I slap her and slap Cole while I’m at it.
I glare at them both before turning on my heel and leave.
Once I’m safely in my car far away from them, I let the floodgates open.
“I thought you were mine.”
Alex Reltin: This is a great story! I love how well you go into detail and emotions of Capri, and Mel. You have amazing dialogue and overall it's just a thrill to read!The only critique I could find is that some of the paragraphs should be separated. For example:-"If Nia would have just let me take the car an...
RodRaglin: Sounds like an interesting story, LesAnne.Here are some things you might want to consider when you revise this draft."Show don't tell." You've probably hear this before and wondered what's the difference? Well, the difference is as a writer you're telling your reader what's happening rather than ...
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jaslynnash2015: I absolutely loved the story from beginning to end and I loved following each of the characters throughout their journey! Very captivating although there were a few grammar errors, but very captivating still! Can't wait for book 2!
Jordan Young: *ALERT FOR POSSIBLE SPOILERS* Where to start? I don't know how to sum up this review, this story was absolutely sensational. Brilliant. Flawless. I loved every single bit of this story, it is truly amazing. I read this story in fifteen hours, it is magnificent. I loved everything about it, the p...
Sandra Estrada: I loved every minute of it and I thank my lucky stars that brought me to the story, it's been a whirlwind of emotions, plot twist after plot twist but I never got tired of them. Abby and Kade's story is a hard one to understand but once you're submerged in their story and love, you can't help but...
Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...
LouiseJ2: I enjoyed the detail you went into with regards to the case. It made the UNSUB appear believable. The crisis in the middle of the story was my favorite part, very dramatic but not over the top. I feel like sometimes pairings can be overdone but I liked that some of the relationships were a little...
FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"
Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."