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That day I thought you were mine I was so happy to see you I skipped up your steps with a huge grin on my face.
I was heading toward your room I just walked in without knocking, I thought you loved me until I saw you under the covers with my best friend you were in the middle of doing it with my own best friend.
I threw the promise ring you gave me a year ago on graduation on the ground and ran out of your room not looking back.
You came running after me and grabbed my wrist, “Bella wait,” but I pushed you down.
“I thought you were mine!” I screamed.
“I thought you loved me!” I said still screaming pounding on his chest.
But it didn’t matter he didn’t feel it, he put his finger under my chin and lifted it and wiped away the flowing tears.
“I do love you and I always will.” He says, looking into my eyes.
“No you don’t otherwise you wouldn’t be screwing my best friend!” I say slapping him.
“I thought I loved you and I thought you were mine but I was wrong.” I whisper walking away.
“But I do love you and I will always be yours.” He yells back.
I flip him my finger, “Go to hell.” I say.
“Bella are you really going to break up with me?” He yells.
“Are you kidding me, you cheated on me with my own best friend for I don’t know how long.”
“We only did this a couple of times Bella, it’s not a big deal.”
“Oh look who’s talking, my once best friend the person I trusted most, more than my own family!”
“You think this isn’t a big deal, what about your fiancee Scarlett, huh did you think about that.”
I took my phone out of my pocket and took a quick picture of them and sent it to Charles, her fiance.
“You better not dare.” she says reaching for my phone.
“I’m going to ruin your life just like you ruined mine.” I reply hitting send.
Instantly there’s a beep beep coming from Scarlett’s phone.
She takes it out hesitating and swipes up, by looking at her face I know instantly who it is, Charles.
She shoves her phone in my face.
“We need to talk.” I laugh bitterly.
“He’s still wants to give you a chance.”
“My word against yours, who do you think he’ll believe.”
I slap her and slap Cole while I’m at it.
I glare at them both before turning on my heel and leave.
Once I’m safely in my car far away from them, I let the floodgates open.
“I thought you were mine.”
Samantha Speed: There were several punctuation, grammar, and missing word problems but it did not detract from the story. This story was very well done, enjoyable, and had an interesting enough plot. It took a while to finish. This story is not complete. I love it, but I want to see another book or have more cha...
263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...
SandraHan1: This story is very descriptive, with vivid scenes from the very beginning, which made for a good scene setting. I love the symbolism in names, such as “Naysayers”, “Hadd”, etc . The story itself is revolutionary, intriguing, emotional and exciting. I was very pleased to see that there is a happy ...
christylynnr5: This was beyond amazing! I loved this book. The characters seemed so real. It was amazing how the author let Zak and Kaylees personalities slowly change. This story was very sad and eye opening. It could teach some people a very worthy lesson. It was a great combination of romance, mystery, and a...
ernbelle: When I first started this story I was a little unsettled by all of the information that appears in the prologue, and wasn't sure if I would continue. However, I am very glad I did. The plot was very well thought out and really interesting. There were not any page breaks or markers to acknowledge ...
annie08c: I really like this story, I can relate to it a lot and with how she feels, the boyfriend and the events that happened but I'm a little bit younger. It was really good plot, really liked how you stuck to the topic and you had a new title for every chapter making me guess what's going to happen. Ma...
Ruby0h: Overall I thought your story was really good! It drew me in right away and kept me interested as the story progressed. I loved the character of Kayla being inserted into this story, and the way she affected and shaped the life of the original story into something totally new and interesting. I lo...
Flik: Hi! ^.^ huge fan of yours on ff.net! When I saw the note about this contest on The Way We Smile, I couldn't help but rush over here, create an account, and vote! XD Seriously love this story and would recommend it to anyone! :D best FT fanfiction out there. Amazing story, amazing concept that wa...
emmaneal74: I loved this booked. Would definitely buy it when published and read it again. The story flowed in such a way I just couldn't put it down. I was never confused about the characters or their roles in the story which can happen sometimes with so many lead. I'd recommend this to anyone wanting to r...
maewilde25: I liked this, though it dragged on for over 200pages and heaven knows I did not expect the plot twist in the middle. David being Cristiãn. I was wondering when he would show up and didn't know he was there all along. it looks like there should be a sequel, please let there be a sequel. I know the...
Stephen Warner: To start off, I am thoroughly impressed. The writing style is somewhat unique, and the plot seemed to move at a nice and steady pace. However, I was not expecting this to be a vampire book! I am usually not one for novels about vampires, but I was pleasantly surprised! You wrote with such grace a...