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I smiled as Blake planted a kiss on my cheek. I swear we were the happiest couple alive, nothing could ever separate us. We were standing outside on a warm summer night, looking up at the stars.
"You're beautiful, ya know?" Blake's deep voice lingered in my ear, causing me to blush. He had his arms wrapped around my waist with his gentle hands on my huge stomach. I gently rubbed the top of my stomach, smiling.
"I know, but did you know you're the most handsomest man that I have ever met?" I said in reply. He chuckled, which I felt the vibrations on my back. I was about eight months pregnant with our little angel.
We were going to name her Mika Ann Chaser. It was absolutely perfect. Blake rested his head on my shoulder as we stood outside, feeling a warm breeze brush against us.
"It's getting late, Rose." Blake said. I sighed and slightly turned around to face him.
"I know, Blake." I said with a huge smile on my face. I wrapped my arms around his neck and leaned in. Blake did the same. I felt his soft lips against mine. I swear you could see sparks flying. Once we parted, I smiled looking into his blue eyes.
"So, let's go in Rose." He smiled while turning and sliding the side door open and allowing me to walk in.
mrh: This interesting take on the Harry Potter series fascinated me from line one on. I am in love with this tale and its characters and cannot wait to read the next chapter. I look forward to more soon.When can I expect the next chapter? I am so excited to read it!
Warchief: The biggest problem with the Harry Potter series is that it's all from his point of view. So we never really get to see or understand events from other peoples perspective. I think that they would be more than a few people that want to know what happened at Hogwarts during that last year.As far a...
tyleroakleyfan: thank you for writing this story I loved it. it was great I enjoyed every minute of it I couldn't stop reading you did a fantastic job. Thanks for killing ron he was starting to piss me off. he was being a dick. I love that you made it a gay love story its about time someone did. love it great job.
Lea Sutherland-Doane: I love this story and it hurts me that it is on a cliff hanger. Please write the next story fast so I can enjoy more of your wonderful writing skills. Your writing skills are amazing and I cannot wait to read the sequel, I promise that this is the best book I have ever read and I love it will al...
Ben Gauger: Kudos go to Liz Aguilar, author of To Have And to Hold a fast-paced, gripping, adrenaline rush from start to finish, one of perhaps the finest pieces of writing I've ever read, in particular because of its' telenovela-like feel, May she continually find success as an author. Bravo my dear, bravo!
263Adder: Okay so I adore this story. I only knocked one star off plot for historical inaccuracies because I'm a bit of a stickler for that. The ending broke my heart though, considering you already changed history couldn't you (SPOILER) change it a bit more and have them together!!!! I want an alternative...
Tiffany Thomson: This story is not something I would normally pick up and read but I'm so glad I did, I wasn't able to put it down and my husband was yelling at me at 3am to put it down and go to bed (just waited for him to doze back off before picking it back up) I really hope Natalie brings out another book eit...
M.L. Bull: Hello, Aalia!Your story compelled the emotional pain and struggle of a teenage girl very well.. The imagery was also convincing and well-written, showing the different personalities of your characters and their actions. However, I do think that many of your sentences are too lengthy and could use...
ga1984: I really enjoyed it! Characters were deep and plot was pretty complex. A bit on the violent side but it doesnt detract from the story. Very dark but situations make sense. Ends kinda abruptly and later chapters will need some editing work. I'm assuming there's more in the works?
FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"
Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."