This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.
Bell is ringing, indication of closing ceremony, an ordinary routine of the daily school.
Packed of elementary children walk out from different classrooms, and some of those kiddies approach their waiting parents, relatives, or friends. Among them a boy, happy while showing his paper as he speaks to his father, “I’ve gotten a high marks this day father. Look at my papers.
“See all ninety six and above dash A.”
Some of the people who recognize this boy want to cry.
Almost of his classmates can’t do a thing but stare.
Not even a word his father replies.
“Father, I keep my mark high. Mother told me when I’m grown successful like you, I can buy anything I want. Including a car for you.” Couldn’t help but being happy, the boy runs to the playground.
He sits to one of the chair. He has took out papers, paste, and scissors from his bag. After he has finished creating a flat helicopter, he hovers this above his head. “Look, father. Trug tug tug tug. You want a helicopter?”
Outside the fence while carrying her parasol, the boy’s mother wants to cry. She goes near to his son and she speaks, “How’s your day with your school.”
“Mother!” The boy runs and hugs her mother. “I’m fine. As always, I receive good marks.”
“That’s good then…
“Let’s go home, I’ll cook you a good meal.”
“Okay! Okay. What about father?”
“Don’t worry.” She smiles as she wipes some tears on her eyes. “He’s always watching on us.”
The boy packs up things.
He and his mother chat as they walk in the pathway going home.
Nicole_Jackson: Must read for all romance lovers. Very well written for a first time novelist. This story was absorbing and entertaining, it was deeply enthralling and kept you captivated throughout the whole novel. Definitely hope there is a sequel. Highly recommended.
RodRaglin: Your writing is very good, Rachel, but remember you also have to entertain the reader and in that regard it's a bit sparse in action and dialogue.Consider when revising...When starting a new story always consider your protagonist's Goal - what they want; Motivation - why they want it; and, Confli...
Alex Rushmer: Chapter One: Not much is happening in this chapter, but I was absolutely fascinated by the depth of your character development. I love how you just sat there with the reader and explored Eddward. Usually, that sort of thing gets boring very fast, but this was actually really cool! He's so unique ...
shanmukhapriyab: The Book is really good and worth a read. I really loved this book and I read it about 3 to 4 times. It has the right amount of everything needed for a book. I am a big fan of this book right now and I have recommended this book to my friends. Keep writing.
PaulSenkel: If you like Arthur C. Clarke's Odyssey, especially The Final Odyssey, then you will probably also enjoy this book. I definitely did.It does, however, address a more adolescent public than the above-mentioned book.I enjoyed the story and finished it in a few days. The overall situation on earth an...
romboili000: As I read this book it made me realize the importance of trusting big God. And believing that you can love even when it feels impossible. This story definitely has made me what to become a better person in Christ and just life. So thank you that's all I have to say because you wrote this story so...
ryder: This is an excellent read. From beginning to end the author showed his creative and imaginative writing skills. Twists and turns, surprises, humor, and sorrow: This book has it all. I strongly recommend this book, and I am already recommending it to my friends.
abbiekelly18: I was hooked quite quickly like I am to other books but I liked how this was a biker gang and she had ties to another biker gang. Overall it was good but I didn't like how Jax was nice and then suddenly horrible to Amber. There is grammatical errors which normally makes me stop reading but I kept...
Prime Rabel: Love the writing and explaining the whole world was simply magnificent. The writer kept the pace up and was eager to finish this novel although it ended so soon. Would be waiting and love to read its next part. Thumbs up to the writer for such a great peace and taking me back to medieval times of...