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By hudamohamed All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Drama


' i want to know you"


After a period of silence between them,she tried to collect the pieces of herself again and says to him ..
“Do not be sad of your mother, she loves you as much as you love her ..
He said indignantly ..
“..she does not like me, who loves honestly do not go around ..
Tears in her eyes again as she tries to calm him down saying ...
“There are conditions stronger and bigger than people..
He said angrily ..
“People invented circumstances to find an excuse for Neglect their beloved ones ..
a tear dropped from her eyes, she says angrily ..
“Do not be so selfish.. you aren’t the only one who feel the love .you aren’t the only one who sincere, she also loves you , but we know that God loves us all more than people so calls us again because he longed to see his loved ones ..we have to leave someday also don’t be selfish with your love nor grievance her love , she care about you, caring for you and i’m sure about that , ... if you want to see her really badly, touch your heart with your hand
She grabbed his hand and placed it on his chest where the heart beats and she tried to drawn a smile with difficulty.. said..
“Do you feel that pulse ... she is living there inside you ..she is where you have possess her in.
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