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I'm Still Breathing

By XoxEmmaxoX All Rights Reserved ©

Drama / Romance

Blurb

Hunter stares at me wide eyes, full of hope, full of love. His words playing in my head. The silence wasn't awkward it was peaceful and it let the room fill with our love for each other. A picture plays, water splashes over my face, the sea water stinging my eyes, the air being cut off, my breath shortening. I gasp when returning to the room. Hunter stares at me wide eyes, full of fear, full of worry.

Prologue

(Riley’s POV)

Looking out across the lake, watching the sunset behind the city, I see the trees swaying in the wind. I’m wrapped in Hunter’s arms as we are sat on the soft grass, knowing that no one can take this moment away from us.

“I’ve got something for you.” Hunter whispers into my ear. He takes a small box out of his jacket and places it into my hands. I take off the lid and find a necklace. The chain is silver and the charm is a small red diamond.

“It’s beautiful.” I say, Hunter takes the necklace out of the box, lifts up my blonde hair and places it around my neck. “Thank you.” I smile and kiss his smooth lips. Hunter lays back on to the grass with me laying across his stomach.

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