Criminal Intent

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A night to remember

The man that they recognised as Juan walked towards them, he wore an open-necked shirt and a pair of cream trousers. He smiled at them as he approached.

“Ladies! Welcome. So glad that you made it.” He said.

They pulled closer together and smiled at him, Hannah had a stinging retort ready but thought better of it, she didn’t want to get the evening off to a bad start, instead, she just nodded.

“I am Juan.” He said. Then, he swept his arm around the room.

“And this is Miguel, Rafael, Alejandro, Xavier, and finally, my little brother, and Gabriella’s little brother, Sebastian.”

The girls nodded at each of the men as he named them, and with their eyes on Sebastian, Juan continued.

“And it was Sebastian’s eighteenth birthday yesterday. And one of you is his present!” He announced.

The others murmured their approval, whilst Sebastian looked a little embarrassed. Juan looked at Hannah.

“So please, introduce yourselves.”

Hannah gulped and glanced at Louise.

“I, er, I am Hannah.” She mumbled.

“And I am Louise.” Her friend added.

Juan smiled. “Good to meet you Hannah, Louise. And now, if you care to go into the other bedroom there,” he pointed to a white door leading off the main room, “you can get undressed, and ready for the evening.”

He was calm, and not forceful at all, and it was said in such a way that if they moved to the bedroom, they were agreeing to whatever they had in mind for them. The two friends looked at each other, their eyes agreed, and they walked towards the room.

Inside the room, which was much smaller than the room that they had just left, there was a double bed, smaller than the one in the main room, as well as a small dresser, and a single wardrobe. They looked at each other.

“Did you see the size of some of those guys Louise?” Hannah gasped.

Louise nodded. “God, yes! The black guy who opened the door to us, he was massive! Are you sure that you want to go through with this Hannah?” She asked.

Hannah looked at her as she pulled her dress up and over her head, she laid it on the bed.

“I do, how about you?” She asked.

Louise had also pulled her dress over her head, she was braless, and she looked down at her breasts. “Look! My nipples are like bullets! I’m so turned on right now! That’s bad isn’t it?”

The two girls looked at each other and laughed.

When they walked out of the room, they were holding hands and as they stepped into the bigger room they stopped. All six guys were now dressed only in their boxers. And as the two girls looked around, it was obvious that every one of them was ready for action, and most of them packed huge bulges.

Hannah put her hand on Louise’s arm and pulled her against her as Juan approached them both.

“Ladies! Look at you! You are both so beautiful!” He said.

He called over to his brother, Sebastian, who walked over to him and stood beside him. The young guy looked incredibly nervous. He was around five-ten tall, had straight, black hair that fell to below his ears, and with the typical olive-skin tone of the region, he looked fit. His body was toned, as befitting an eighteen-year-old, and he wore black shorts, which bulged at the front from his erection.

Juan put his arm around his brother.

“Time to choose brother, which one?” He asked.

Sebastian scanned his eyes over them both and then smiled at Hannah. “Her!”

Hannah squeezed her friend’s arm tighter, and let out a soft moan. Louise glanced at her.

“You okay?” She whispered.

Hannah nodded. “Yes.”

And ladies, before we start. I hope that you are both on contraception? Because none of us will be wearing condoms.”

The two friends exchanged glances, they hadn’t expected that, and as they looked into each other’s eyes, it was obvious that neither of them was going to change their minds. They nodded. “Okay,” they said in unison.

Juan led Sebastian over to them and nodded to Hannah.

“Take him in there.” Nodding to the spare room. “And be nice to him.” He said.

Hannah took a breath and held out her hand. Sebastian took it and she led him into the bedroom. As they left the main room, she could hear the other guys talking over each other, arguing over who was going to go first with Louise.

She closed the bedroom door behind them and turned to him.

“Hello, Sebastian.” She said.

He smiled he was so nervous, she found that cute. She cleared her clothes from the bed and then stood in front of him.

She slid her hands around his neck and looked into his eyes, they were a deep, dark brown, but so seductive. She kissed him. He moaned and pulled her against him and their bodies pressed together as he pushed his tongue past her lips and into her mouth. She felt his hands fall onto her bum, pressing his fingers into her flesh and forcing her against his hard bulge.

They parted, she looked at him.

“Don’t you think we should get you out of those shorts? It’s only fair, after all, I am naked” She smiled.

He nodded and quickly stepped out of them, revealing a hard cock, dripping pre-cum. She looked down, he wasn’t huge, about six to seven-inches, but it looked so delicious. She lifted her eyes to his.

“Sebastian? Are you a virgin?” She whispered.

He looked embarrassed again and looked away. She turned his face back to her.

“It’s okay.” She whispered.

“I’ve been with a woman, just now, had sex.” He said.

She smiled. “Well, tonight, you will.” She said and led him to the bed.

She climbed onto the bed and he followed and she lay down whilst he knelt beside her and looked down at her body.

“You are very beautiful.” He said, his accent adding to the excitement that she felt.

He leaned over her and kissed her again, and as he did she heard a piercing cry from the other room, she could only imagine which of the guys had penetrated her friend causing her to cry out so loudly. Again, this only served to turn her on even more. She wrapped her hands around his neck and moaned.

“Are you going to fuck me, Sebastian?” She whispered.

He looked into her eyes. “I want to lick you first.” He said softly.

She moaned and spread her legs, she let go of his head and let her head rest on the pillow, as he moved down her body and lat between her legs.

He may have been a virgin, but he knew how to give oral sex. She was soon writhing and moaning as his lips and tongue worked their magic on her pussy. She could feel the juices flowing out of her as he tugged and nibbled on her sensitive clit and pushed a finger inside her. He finger-fucked her as he licked and sucked on her, taking her closer and closer to her orgasm.

She grabbed at his hair, wrapping strands around her fingers and pulling them, forcing his mouth harder against her pussy as she wrapped her legs around his head and squeezed it tight.

“Oh, fuck! YES!” She cried.

Arching her back, she thrust her hips up, lifting her bum from the bed as she ground her pussy hard against his mouth.

“Oh, fcuk! Ahhhhh! I’m coming!” She cried.

She pulled hard on his hair and began to buck and jerk under him as her orgasm swept through her body, consuming all of her limbs as she thrashed around and then squeezed her thighs tightly around his head as she moaned softly as her orgasm slowly passed and began to subside.

She released his head from her thighs and he lifted it, she looked down at his face as he emerged from her thighs. His mouth was smeared in her juices, and as she breathed hard, she smiled at him.

“Wow, you certainly do know how to do that Sebastian.” She said.

He grinned. “The girls in my village like it.” He said.

She smiled. “I bet they do, I bet they do.” She sighed.

He crawled up her body and knelt between her legs. She looked down and watched as he stroked his cock a few times, then he looked at her.


She nodded and watched as he leaned over her and guided his cock between her thighs. She moaned when she felt the head brush against her wet lips. He fumbled around, pushing, prodding. She reached down and parted her lips, his cock brushed against her fingers before finding his target. He sighed and looked at her.

She pulled her hand back and held his arms. He stared into her eyes as he pushed forward and she felt his cock spread her opening and then slide inside her. The expression on his face changed, he closed his eyes and moaned, a smile spread across his lips as he felt her warm, wet pussy cling to his shaft as he slid slowly inside her.

He groaned when he was inside, all of his cock was buried in her pussy and he looked into her eyes. She smiled.

“There. You like?” She whispered.

He smiled and nodded. “I like.”

She moved her hands and pulled him down onto her and her fingers dug into the cheeks of his bum as he started to move inside her, slowly fucking her. She lifted her legs and hooked them behind his thighs as she gripped him and started to move against him as they started to fuck.

He moaned, groaned and sighed as he worked his cock in and out of her. She clung to his bum as she pushed back, meeting his thrusts, causing her to cry out and yelp as he thrust deep into her.

She held him tightly in her arm as he started to increase the pace and intensity of his thrusts as he got into his rhythm and began to pound into her. She lifted her legs and locked her feet behind his back as he lifted himself off her, supporting himself on his locked arms and slammed into her, looking down at her face as she cried out and gasped.

“Oh, god! Oh, yes!” She cried.

He muttered something in Spanish as he began to thrust faster, it was obvious that he was close to coming. She gripped her fingers around his arms and dug her nails into his flesh.

“Oh, fuck! Yes, Sebastian. YES!” She cried.

Again, he muttered something in Spanish then he thrust hard, causing her to squeal, and then she felt the first spurt of hot, sticky cum shoot into her and she moaned, closing her eyes as he continued to spurt into her. His cock jerked and twitched as he fell on her, cum oozing from his cock and into her.

She wrapped her arms around him and held him as he emptied himself into her. And when he was done, he panted and pressed his face into her neck as she stroked her fingers down his back.

He lifted his head and looked into her eyes.

“That was beautiful Hannah.” He whispered. “Thank you.”

She smiled and kissed him. “Happy Birthday.” She grinned.

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