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The graduation ball - Louise’s story

The four friends met up in the bar and soon they all had a drink in their hands and they looked around the room. There were lots of guys in tuxes and women in evening gowns, and prom dresses of all shapes and sizes. Jewels of all sparkling sizes some real, glittering pinpricks of fire along most of the ladies, and a few of their men!

It was a mixed event, where the graduating students were present, along with some of their parents, most of the tutors and staff were also present, some with their partners and wives. It was a tradition that everyone would mix for one last time before they all went their way out into the big wide world.

The two members of the group who were in the spotlight were a both a little anxious and were calmed by their partners as all four of them scanned the bar to see if they could spot the people who they were looking for.

Louise hung onto Andrew’s arm as she sipped at her cocktail. Her mind drifted back to the first time that they had all sat down and discussed the latest news that the local pickpocket had been apprehended.

“He got careless!” Andrew said.

One must play to their victims vulnerabilities, as exposed to them, and not the opposite, in other words, try to create their own opportunities upon them! Or something to that effect.”

That statement led to a long discussion about pickpocketing and stealing in general and Andrew’s insistence that he could have done better.

“Prove it!” Said, Richard.

After a moment’s thought, he smiled. “Okay, I will.”

That evening, Andrew was set his first challenge by Richard.

“You have to get an item of jewellery from a female student by this time tomorrow.”

After a brief discussion, it was decided that the item should be a trinket, something of low-value, something that wouldn’t be missed, and certainly something that would not be valuable enough to be reported to the Police.

Twenty-four hours later Andrew grinned as he placed an elasticated bracelet with multi-coloured lettered beads attached. Louise picked up the bracelet and looked at it, “Rebecca?” She said as she read the name spelled by the letters.

He smiled. “Done!” He said triumphantly.

Hannah took the bracelet from Louise and examined it.

“That’s Becky’s! She’s in my law class! How did you get that? She asked, looking at him.

He grinned and explained that she needed some help with the internet connection with her laptop. Louise stared at him.

“So you went to her room?” She asked, looking jealously at him.

He sighed. “Nothing happened. I fixed her laptop and left, with that.” He said pointing at the bracelet.

Louise looked at him. “You know that she fancies you?” She said.

He shrugged. “I don’t know about that. All I did was fix her internet.”

Louise smiled at him and sidled up to him and slid her arm around his waist.

“Are you sure nothing happened? It’s kind of exciting that maybe something happened, maybe a kiss or a cuddle.” She whispered.

He smiled. “Okay. I kissed her. But I told her that you were my girl.” He sighed.

Louise smiled as she recalled the amazing sex that they had that evening, due in no small part to the arousal that she had felt when thinking about him with Becky. As the guests began to arrive they recognised fellow students and many of their lecturers and department heads who arrived with their partners. They were soon joined by many of their friends and the atmosphere in the bar rose until it was time to go into dinner.

It was a formal dinner held in the hotel’s ballroom, with beautiful food, excellent service, and of course, the traditional speeches by many of the staff members of the university. After the speeches, people drifted off and filled the two bars that were attached to the large room, The room was cleared and prepared for dancing along to the resident DJ.

The four friends made their way into the ballroom as it slowly began to fill. They found themselves a small table at the side and sat down and watched the others slowly drift in. It wasn’t long before the music turned up and people began to fill the dance-floor.

Louise and Andrew were dancing together and they spotted Louise’s target. It was one of her chemistry lecturers. Doctor Edwin Connelly was in his fifties and an excellent lecturer, she had worked closely with him over the years and he had provided many personal one-on-one tuition sessions with her whenever she struggled with topics. He was around five-ten,

He was dancing with his wife of twenty years, and they looked like the perfect couple. Both were quite short, he stood at around five-six whilst she could have been no more than five-one. The reason that he had been chosen as Louise’s target was that she had said over the years that she felt that Edwin had fancied her. She’d even made him blush a few times with her obvious flirting when she felt that it would help her grades, she was never sure whether it did or not, but she enjoyed it anyway.

They slowly manoeuvred themselves over to the couple and were dancing next to them when Louise glanced across to him. She smiled at him, and then at his wife. They stopped dancing and Edwin introduced her to his wife.

“Angela, this is Louise, she was one of my star students. I have great hopes for her.”

Louise smiled and shook her hand. She glanced at Andrew then back at Angela.

“Would you mind if I stepped in? I promised your husband a dance if I got the grade I wanted, I did, so I feel I owe him.” She smiled.

Angela nodded and stepped back, but Andrew stepped in and slipped his hand around her waist and guided her into the hold and they danced away as Louise slid her hands up onto Edwin’s shoulders as he slid his around her waist and they dance.

She could feel her fingers tremble, she was shaking. As they danced he made polite conversation, and as the dance progressed she slowly, but deliberately pulled her body closer to his until she was pressed against him. As she pressed herself against him, she laid her head against his shoulder and she knew that he would be able to smell her scent, it was strong and she had put plenty on.

It didn’t take long, she smiled to herself when she felt his cock harden in his trousers and press into her. She felt him move position, trying to move it away from her, he was aware too now. She held onto his neck and pulled him back against her, then she lifted her lips to his ear.

“Did you think that I kept coming to you for help just because I needed it, Edwin.” She whispered.

She couldn’t see his face, but she imagined that it would be covered in a panicked expression. He didn’t respond, so she ground herself against him and she felt his bulge press into her stomach.

“I think you knew why I came, didn’t you? Just as you know why I’m dancing with you now.” She whispered.

He lifted his head and pushed her back a little. She looked up at him, the best, little-girl lost look that she could do on her face.

“Louise. What are you doing? Your boyfriend is over there dancing with my wife.” He said.

She glanced over and Andrew was chatting away to his wife and from her viewpoint, they were both having a great time. She looked at him.

“Look into my eyes Edwin and tell me that you don’t want me.” She whispered.

He looked shocked, she could see his eyes darting left and right, worried that someone would be listening to all of this. She pushed herself against him again.

“Well?” She asked.

He sighed. “It’s not that simple. My wife…”

She sighed. “Yes, it is. I promised you that I’d dance with you if I passed with a two-one. I’m offering you more. We will never see each other again after tonight, this is a one-time-only offer, it expires tonight.” She said.

She watched as he looked around, she knew that he was weighing up his options. She leaned closer.

“Andrew will keep your wife occupied.” She whispered.

He looked horrified.

“He knows?”

She smiled and kissed his cheek softly. “I’ll be standing by the lift. You have two minutes.”

The turned and walked away and out of the room towards the lift.

She was stood talking to a couple of girls that she knew when she saw Edwin walk sheepishly out of the room. She made her excuses to the girls and joined him at the lift just as the doors opened.

They walked inside, the lift attendant asked for their floors.

“Six.” He said. She nodded. “Six.”

The attendant pressed the button and glanced at Louise, she blushed, she thought that he knew she wasn’t on the sixth floor.

They stepped out of the lift together, they walked along the corridor and when the lift doors closed he stopped and turned.

“What’s all of this about Louise? Are you serious about this?” He asked.

She slid up to him and slipped her hand around his waist and pressed her lips to his and kissed him. He moaned softly as he felt her soft lips on his. He had fantasised about this many times when they had been in his room at university, and now there she was, in front of him, kissing him.

“Does that answer you?” She whispered.

He turned and walked a few steps then opened the door. She followed him into the room and he closed the door behind him.

Her heart raced as she stood in his room and she heard the door close behind her. She looked around the room, towels and clothes were lying around, signs of his and his wife getting ready for their night out.

She turned around as he walked towards her, he looked extremely nervous as he looked at her.

“What are you playing at Louise?” He asked.

She composed herself and looked up.

“I’m not playing at anything. I knew that I couldn’t do this whilst I was still a student, but now that it’s over, well, here I am.” She said, sounding confident.

He lifted his hands and stroked his fingers across her bare arms, she sighed and licked her lips and tugged at his shirt. She pulled it out of his trousers as he slipped off his jacket and dropped it onto the floor. She worked her way up his shirt, opening the buttons as she went. She pushed his shirt open and slid her hands over his bare chest. He moaned as she slid her hands down his arms and unclipped his expensive cuff-links from the shirt sleeves French cuffs and pushed the shirt from his body.

She gazed at him, he was in decent shape, not the physique of her, much younger boyfriend but for his age, he looked okay. He slid his hands over her upper arms and let his fingers caress over her face, she moaned softly.

“You are so beautiful, Louise. I’ve always thought so, I can’t believe that you are here.” He whispered.

She moved closer and kissed him. Then she turned around and stood before him.

“Unzip me,” She whispered.

He reached up, his fingers shook as he grabbed the zip on her silk dress and slowly pulled it down. She heard him moan as he slid the zip down and exposed her bare back, she wasn’t wearing a bra.

He helped her slide it from her shoulders and as it dropped from her body he gasped audibly as it slid to the floor to reveal that she was naked, she didn’t have any panties on. She stepped out of the dress and turned around and stood before him.

His eyes scanned up and down her body and he stared with his eyes wide open. He stared at her pert breasts, topped with hard nipples and his eyes roamed down her body, her slender stomach, and down to her smooth, bald pussy. He’d never seen such a thing before, not in real-life. He sighed.

She smiled. “You like?” She asked.

He nodded. “Oh god, yes. You are beautiful.” He sighed.

She started to undo the buttons on his trousers and in seconds she had them open and pushed his trousers down his legs. He stepped out of them as she slid her fingers inside the waist of his underwear and slid them down. He moaned as his cock sprung free. She stared. His cock was around seven inches long, not as long as Andrew’s, but very hard, and already dripping pre-cum. She smiled, she knew that he wouldn’t last long once she got started.

She pushed him back towards the bed, he reached out and held onto her hips as he walked backwards. He sat down on the bed and she kept moving and pushed him back until he was laid on his back, his legs hung over the end of the bed.

She leaned over and stroked her fingers along the length of his cock. It twitched as she wrapped them around the shaft and started to slowly stroke it. She lowered her head and he gasped and threw his head back as she slipped her lips over the head and took it into her mouth.

He grabbed her head as she bobbed her head up and down a few times and sucked on his cock.

“Oh fuck Louise. You can’t do that! I’ll come.” He panted.

She lifted her head and smiled. “Well, we wouldn’t want that, would we? Not just yet.”

She climbed up onto the bed and straddled across his thighs. She pressed the tip of his cock along her slit, his pre-cum coated her lips, he stared down at her, his eyes wide in disbelief. She lifted herself and crouched above his cock as she gripped the shaft and pressed it between her lips. She bit her lip when she felt the head push her lips apart and then as she pressed it against her opening he gasped.

She moaned as she lowered herself down onto his cock and she pressed her hands against his chest to steady herself as she sat on him. With him inside her, she started to move up and down. He gripped her hips and looked into her eyes.

“Oh fuck! I don’t believe this! You are so fucking tight!” He groaned.

She leaned down and kissed him as she ground her pussy against his cock and squeezed her pussy tightly around him. He thrust up into her as she rode him. And as she knew it would, just over a minute later, after a lot of puffing and panting he cried out and thrust hard and she moaned softly as she felt his cum flow out of his cock and into her pussy.

She leaned over him and kissed him softly as his cock twitched inside her and he emptied himself into her. It felt like he had given her a huge load, she moaned as she felt the warm fluid ooze into her.

When he was done she lifted her head and looked at him.

“Wow. That was a lot of cum! Been a while has it?” She smiled.

He nodded. Still panting, his face was flushed. He smiled.

“Yeah. Me and Angela don’t have much sex these days.” He sighed.

She stroked his face and kissed his cheek.

“I’m sorry.”

She felt his cock softening. She sighed and sat up and then slid from him and knelt beside him.

“I should be going before your wife suspects something.” She said.

He watched her get off the bed and stand, he noticed a smear of his cum on the inside of her thighs and he smiled. She bent and picked up her dress, then she stepped into it and started to get dressed.

He watched her, and then he rolled off the bed and stood, his now droopy cock having lost all of his life hung limply as cum dripped from the tip. She turned her back to him and asked him to zip up her dress. When he had finished dressing her she turned and smiled.

“That was fun, Edwin.” She said.

She kissed him. He moaned. “I need to pee.” He said.

She watched him go to the bathroom, and as soon as he closed the door she bent down and picked up the cuff-links that lay on the floor and slipped them into her purse.

When he returned she smiled at him.

“Well, I think I’ll go first, Edwin. We shouldn’t arrive back together,” she said.

He nodded. She moved towards him and kissed him.

“Thank you, Edwin.”

He sighed. “No, thank you, Louise. I don’t know why you did it, but thank you.”

She turned and left the room and headed towards the lift and back to the others in the ballroom, her prize in her purse.

She smiled at the lift attendant as she stepped in. It was the same guy who had brought her up with Edwin. He caught her eye and they exchanged a look, but nothing was said. As she rode the lift down to the ground floor, she opened her purse and picked up and examined the cuff-links. They were beautiful, each had a large, blue sapphire stone surrounded by brilliant diamonds. They were worth quite a bit of money. She put them back into her purse and closed it.

‘He’ll never report them as stolen. He won’t admit to his wife that he was fleeced by a young grad student who used her body to distract him’ She thought.

She had been dubious about the plan when it was first proposed, but it had worked perfectly. She sighed, ’I hope that it goes as well for Richard.’

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