The Campfire

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Who were the mysterious couple at the campfire? What was in the mason jar? Was it all real?

Erotica / Fantasy
marsha rice
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It was an awfully warm night for being in the mountains, but we had a campfire anyway. It had been a very busy day; you always try to do so much while you’re on vacation. Denny dumped water on the hot embers while I stirred them. We have always been adamant about the fire being out before we turn in at night. I could still hear the voices of our neighbors through the trees, although they weren’t being loud. Sounds carry better at night and they seemed closer than they actually were.

I zipped up the tent flap behind us, I didn’t want to extend an invitation to any critters to join us inside. It was a small tent, the label said “four-man tent” on the box, I don’t believe them, only one of us could stand at a time. We took turns getting undressed, Denny had already started while I finessed the zipper. I waited ’till he sat on the sleeping bag and stacked his clothes by his pillow. He liked watching me undress for some reason, the more he paid attention, the longer it took me. Denny complained often that I wore more clothes to bed than I did during the day, but tonight was going to be the exception, it was so hot inside the tent that we both had beads of sweat on our foreheads. Tonight, was going to be all about sleeping in the nude.

We laid on top of the sleeping bag, both of us remarking on how stifling it was, thinking for sure we would be nothing more than rump roast by morning.

“Do you think maybe, just maybe, we could sleep with the flap open tonight? Please.” I begged, knowing that Denny prefers everything buttoned up, just in case we get some unwanted weather.

“I think that is a wonderful idea, I’m glad I thought of it.” He laughed while he unzipped the flap next to him. “In fact,” he added, “why don’t you reach over and unzip your side, too. Maybe we’ll get a cross breeze.” Well, it was a good idea, however, there was no air movement at all that night.

We didn’t expect the entertainment we were about to see. The woods weren’t real thick between our site and our neighbors’, and they were in the middle of coitus, as Sheldon would say. Their campfire provided us with enough light as to not miss any of the action. They were very nimble and uninhibited.

Denny was very interested in watching “Jack and Jill upon the hill” as was evident by him poking me in the butt. I don’t think I ever witnessed anything like that except in the movies, and we all know that is faked. Well, I’m here to tell you that porn in the flesh is something to see. When they were finished I looked at Denny and said that I was sorry, but it was too hot, I was too tired, and that he should roll over and go to sleep. I’m sure he wasn’t happy, but he kissed me goodnight and told me he’d see me in the morning.


The temperature cooled off enough during the night that we woke up feeling well rested. The sun was peeking over the nearby mountain, casting shadows through the trees. Denny woke up like any other morning, hard and ready. I welcomed him on top of me and we melded together as one. As we did so often, we peaked simultaneously, and enjoyed the moment. The sound of the leaves rustling in the breeze and the smell of fresh coffee, made the morning even more pleasant.

“Denny, we left the flaps open.” I whispered in his ear.

“Yeah, I remember, cause it was hot out.” He replied.

“Denny, the flaps are still open, and our neighbors are up.” I said.

“Yeah, so?” He asked rather stupidly.

“So, I think they are watching us, you dope.” My god, what wasn’t he getting. “Get off me and close the flaps, I need to put some clothes on.”


I made my way to the shower house and got ready for the day. Our timing was perfect once again, Denny was coming out of the men’s side just as I opened the door. We looked at each other and said, “I need food.”, at the same time. We laughed.

We made our way back to our campsite and there were two piping hot cups of coffee sitting on our picnic table.

“Good morning, neighbors. You look like you could use that. We’ve got bacon and eggs on the grill if you’re hungry, come on over. You are more than welcome.” Came the voice from beyond the trees.

I looked at Denny and he looked at me and I said, “What’ya think?”

“I don’t know, we don’t know them.” He said.

“I’m hungry, and he invited us, we didn’t ask. They are fellow campers, here for the same reasons we are. He’s just trying to be friendly. C’mon Denny, I’m starving and he just offered me bacon and eggs. You coming with me, because I’m going, c’mon.” and I grabbed the coffee and started to walk over.

“Okay, okay, I’m not going to let you go alone. He did say BACON, right?” He asked.

We introduced ourselves, told them where we were from and why we were there, how we found the place and all the normal small talk.

“Welcome neighbors, please sit and join us. Breakfast is just about ready. My name is John, but my friends call me Jack. Manning the grill over there is my better half, Jill.” He said completing our introductions.

I looked at Denny and could see by the look on his face that he was trying hard not to snicker. We extended our hands to him and thanked him for the invite.

“Jack and Jill? For real?” I asked. I was trying hard not to insult him, but the words just spilled out.

Jill came to the table with a skillet jammed full of sizzling bacon and the most delicious looking sunny side up eggs I’d ever seen.

“Don’t worry about it,” she said, “we hear that all the time. I keep trying to tell him to introduce us as Jill and Jack. That way it takes people a little longer for it to register and the conversation usually moves beyond our names by then. But, you know men, they learn real slow.” And we all laughed. “Please sit and enjoy. I always cook way too much for the two of us. And besides, you guys must’ve worked up quite the appetite this morning didn’t you?”

I could feel the embarrassment flushing my cheeks, “Oh, you saw us?”

“Well, it’s not like we are Peeping Tom’s, but your tent was wide open and you weren’t exactly silent. Sounds carry a long way in the woods. You certainly grabbed our attention, and I must say, you two sure are passionate.” Jill continued. “Now, don’t be embarrassed, being in love is a wonderful thing, embrace it. Now eat while it’s hot.”

“She can say whatever she wants, I enjoyed watching. It’s not often I get that kind of entertainment up here in the woods, with humans I mean.” Offered Jack.

“Oh, Jack, shut up and eat. You are going to make them think that you are a pervert. And they don’t need to know that you really are one.” Said Jill.

“It must be a guy thing, Jill, because I seem to be married to one, too.” I turned my face to Jack, and in between chewing, said, “Jack, I am happy that you enjoyed your morning show. Trust me, it was my pleasure.”

“I could tell.” He said and we all had a good laugh.

“Well, consider it kind of like a repayment for last night.” Chimed in Denny, who can never leave well enough alone.

Jill and Jack both turned to each other and let out a very loud belly laugh. “I told you not everyone was asleep yet, but no you couldn’t keep your hands to yourself.” Jill said.

“Oh, you enjoyed yourself, and you know it.” Jack added, “And it looks like our neighbors did too.”

“We certainly appreciate your hospitality. Never in a million years did I anticipate a breakfast like this, this morning. What can we do to repay you?” I asked, hoping they would have an answer, because I don’t like getting something for nothing.

“Well,” Jill hesitated and then said, “if you are serious, how about you two inviting us over for supper, you cook the food and we will bring the drinks. We do a lot of traveling and quite a bit of our time is spent with just the two of us by ourselves. We’ve really enjoyed meeting you guys. No pressure, it’s fine if you have other plans. And if the food is a problem, we have plenty of that, too.”

Denny shrugged and nodded in approvement.

“Sure, sounds like fun. We have things to do this afternoon, but we’ll be back around five if that’s okay with you.” I said. “Here, let me help you with the dishes.”

“No, no, no. Jack will help me. He has to earn his keep you know. You go about your day and enjoy yourself. We’ll see you later.” Jill said.


Denny and I spent the afternoon visiting a couple of old battlefields, he is into all that historical kind of stuff. I go along because I like being with him, and it’s fun watching him discover all of the places that he reads about.

I couldn’t stop thinking about our neighbors back at the campgrounds. There was something about them that seemed so familiar, yet so strange. I just couldn’t put my finger on it.


Jill and Jack came walking through the trees, ducking some of the branches so they didn’t get swatted by them, carrying three bottles of wine and a mason jar.

“Did you go buy steaks?” Jill asked.

“Yeah, we had to get food anyway, and they had a half of a cow that they were just cutting up in the butcher shop. I hope porterhouse is okay.” I could tell by the look on her face that it was totally acceptable.

“My favorite, and Jack’s too.” She said.

“Good, because it’s our favorite cut too.” Denny said looking up through the smoke of the campfire, “Nothing better that steak over a woodfire.”

The evening was one of the nicest we had spent in a long time. Jill and Jack had a lot of similar interests that we did and had been to most all of the places we have visited. We felt very comfortable with them.

Three empty wine bottles lay next to the fire, we mistakenly added a few beers to the mix, when Jack pulled out the mason jar.

“Home brew.” He said.

“Oh, I don’t know, my head is already spinning.” I said.

Denny grabbed the glass out of my hand and said, “Sure she will, we are on vacation.”

“Wine, beer and whatever that is, just doesn’t seem like a good combination, but what the hell. Cheers!” My words didn’t come out as clear as I had intended, but I got my point across, that is if I had one.

Oh, it was soooo good. It went down smooth, sip after sip. All of a sudden I didn’t feel tipsy anymore, more like I was floating. The woods felt like dreamland.

“Let’s go to the beach and gaze at the stars.” Jill said.

I suddenly realized that the sun had set long ago. The canopy of the trees was so thick at the campsite that you couldn’t see the sky even during the day. We picked up our glasses and strolled down the lane to beach.

Jill and I stood side by side looking up at the brightest starlit sky I ever remember seeing. I was hoping it was real and not alcohol induced.

“That is amazing.” I said, “Where are the guys, they should see this too.”

The reflection of the moonlight glistened on the surface of the water like sparkly diamonds, mirroring the sky.

“We should go swimming.” Jill said as she dipped her toes in the water, “It’s like bath water.”

It was just as warm out tonight as it was last night, going in the water sounded like a fantastic idea. “Yeah, let’s go back and get our suits.” I said.

“Who needs them? Let’s go skinny dipping!” Jill said rather excitedly. In no time at all, she had pulled her top off and slid her shorts to her ankles. I was mesmerized by how beautiful she looked, standing naked in the moonlight. She resembled me a little, but her boobs were definitely bigger than mine. Denny had noticed them too. I could see him glancing a look her way every now and then during the evening.

“Come on, join me.” She said as she undid the snap on my shorts and pulled them down. I grabbed my top and yanked it over my head. Jill took both hands and cupped my breasts, “Mine used to look like yours, too, when I was younger.” She took my hand and pulled me into the water, it was like stepping into a bathtub like she said.

We played and splashed around like a couple of kids, “What happened to the guys?” I asked.

“You know men, when they start talking they can’t shut up, they are worse than they claim we are.” She said. “They’ll be here.”

Sure enough, just like clockwork, you talk about them and they show.

“Come on in, the water is great.” Jill yelled and turned to me and whispered, “Wait until they see our clothes on the ground. Which one will be naked first?”

“I bet they both will be pretty quick.” I said.

Jill looked at me with a wicked grin, “Dibs on the first one in the water.”

Without giving it any thought, I shot back, “You’re on!”

Jack and Denny both noticed our clothes at the same time. They were saying something to each other but we couldn’t hear them, they had turned their backs to us. Like two robots they simultaneously dropped their shorts, shooting the moon at us. We both laughed at their chalky white butt cheeks. Next was the shirts. Then they just stood there like statues facing away from us, they looked like twins from the back.

“You guys coming in, or what?” I yelled.

In unison, they turned and ran to the water’s edge. When they were knee deep, they both dove under. Denny is a pretty good swimmer and made it all the way to me underwater. Jack came up short by about five feet and took a couple of deep breaths.

“I would have made it when I was your age.” He claimed, “But you won fair and square.”

We all had a good laugh. I gave Denny a big hug while Jill and Jack were in an extended lip lock. We all floated around for a while, then Jack excused himself. He swam back to the beach only to return with the mason jar. He unscrewed the lid and took a big swig, handing it to Denny who did the same. It was then my turn, I put the jar up to my mouth and gulped two big swallows and handed it to Jill.

“What is in that, it’s so good? I’ve never felt like this before. What is it, some magic potion?” I asked, and Jack smiled back at me with a twinkle in his eye and said, “I’ll tell you sometime.”

“Never mind all of your hocus pocus potions.” Jill interrupted, looking straight at Jack, “What did you mean by he won fair and square?”

Denny looked over at Jack, smiled and said, “ I told him that I could beat him out to you guys, and he bet me that I couldn’t. The winner got to make out with both of you while the loser got to watch.”

“Okay, well, I called dibs on the first one in the water,” Jill said, “And since we were the first ones in the water, you both should just watch.” She opened the jar once more and drank. She handed it towards me and said, “Let’s make this a most memorable evening, shall we?”

I took the mason jar from her hand and drank the last mouthful, tossing the jar over my shoulder. We were standing in water just deep enough to cover our boobs, and I pulled her close to me. Her eyes closed and I leaned in and kissed her on the mouth, she didn’t back away. Our lips parted slightly and she pushed her tongue into my mouth. Our arms locked around each other, our boobs became one. The water made us almost feel weightless, our legs intertwined so that we could rub against one another. Our kisses got more passionate, I could feel myself getting hot, her reactions told me that she was too.

It didn’t matter at that moment that I had just met this woman this morning. Here I was having sex with her in front of my husband, and hers. I had never been with a woman before, but something about this just seemed right. And so wrong.

I was certain that we both achieved our orgasms at the same time. As we parted, the guys were now right next to us looking like a pair of lost puppies. I turned to Denny, and Jill turned to Jack, and we all started making out. Denny got real excited watching me with Jill, I couldn’t wait to mount him. Just then I felt Jill’s hand on my shoulder.

“Remember? I had dibs on the first one in the water.” She said.

“I think they both were in the water at the same time.” I said.

“But Denny was the first one to us, so he’s the winner, I got dibs.” With that, she guided me over to Jack, kissed him, then kissed me, and then planted a big one on Denny. He kissed her back very willingly.

Jack, gently took me in his arms, looked at me and said, “This, makes me the winner. If you’re willing, I’d like very much to kiss you.”

Just the way he said it, he sounded so much like Denny, he made it difficult to say no. Jack’s kisses were so soft and sweet, we kissed deeply and passionately. I could feel his erection growing against me. I squeezed my arms around his neck and lifted myself up, wrapping my legs around his waist. His hands slid down my back and under my butt. Jack raised me up enough to take my breast in his mouth. The sensation of his tongue flicking my sensitive nipple sent waves of nervous joy straight to my quivering pussy. It got more intense when he bit down slightly just before he moved to the other one and repeated himself. I quietly squealed in his ear as I had another mini-orgasm.

He lowered me down and kissed me again. He was now as hard as I had ever felt an erection get.

“Did I do that to you?” I whispered in his ear.

“Yes, it’s all your fault.” He said.

“What do you want me to do about it?” I asked.

“That’s up to you.” Jack said.

I couldn’t believe what I was about to do. I took a deep breath and went underwater. I opened my eyes. It was so dark that I had to feel my way around until I found his cock. I grabbed it with my fingers and started to stroke it while my mouth surrounded the tip. I sucked on it just a little and ran my tongue up and down the slit on the end. I could feel him throbbing in my hand. My lungs were just about to burst when I popped my head above the surface. I was panting for air. Jack picked me up by my elbows and I wrapped my arms around his shoulders once again.

He whispered in my ear, “Catch your breath.”, and gave me a big hug.

I kissed his neck, and with my legs back around his waist, I lowered myself so that I was riding on his ever-stiff cock. I rocked back and forth until he was pushing my lips apart. Any more and I was sure that he’d be inside me.

“You gonna let me do this?” I asked, almost beggingly.

“I told you that it is all up to you.” And he smiled. “You stop whenever you want.”

I couldn’t help myself any longer. I felt so comfortable with Jack, I just had to have him. I reached down and grabbed his cock. I stroked it a couple of times although he needed no encouragement, and pushed it up inside me.

“Oh, my god, you feel so good. Please, fuck me.” Jack must’ve been waiting for me to say that, because he took over and all I remember is thinking that I was in heaven. I stopped counting how many orgasms I was having, I was in extasy, and melted in his arms. The next thing I knew, Jack told me to hang on, he grabbed my butt real hard and with a couple of intense thrusts exploded inside me.

I was numb. I buried my head in his neck and hung on for dear life. I didn’t want to fall off in the water and maybe drown.

“I love you, Jack. Tell me that you love me.” I said. He didn’t respond. I realized what I had just said. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean…”

“Don’t worry, it’s just the home brew talking. It’s fine.” He said with the most calming voice. “I think we have an audience.”

I picked my head up and looked over to see Jill and Denny, arm in arm, watching Jack and me.

I reached out to Denny and said, “Oh, Denny, I’m so sorry. I just…” I started crying and couldn’t finish what I was saying.

He took me in his arms and told me there was nothing to be sorry for and that maybe we should go back to our campsite.


Denny kissed me goodnight and told me he’d see me in the morning.


The temperature cooled off enough during the night that we woke up feeling well rested. The sun was peeking over the nearby mountain, casting shadows through the trees. Denny woke up like any other morning, hard and ready. I welcomed him on top of me and we melded together as one. As we did so often, we peaked simultaneously, and enjoyed the moment. The sound of the leaves rustling in the breeze made the morning even more pleasant.

“Denny, we left the flaps open.” I whispered in his ear.

“Yeah, I remember, cause it was hot out.” He replied.

“Denny, the flaps are still open, our neighbors might see us.” I said.

“What neighbors?” He asked rather stupidly, “There’s no one else around here.”

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