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Green Eyes --- an erotic novel (sort-of)

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Summary

Alpha males, delicate souls, and a killer-psychopath hit it off in an impossible scramble for the last happy ending. When the tales of John, a shy college teacher, and clinically depressed Alex become intertwined in the sand dunes on Georgia Beach, a passionate whirlwind of gay eroticism, heartaches, murder and betrayal swallows them whole. As they both battle with their demons and Alex’s condition worsens, everything that they've previously held true to themselves risks falling apart. A tale of passion, lust and understanding.

Genre:
Erotica / Humor
Author:
MichaelAmpersant
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
54
Rating:
2.8
Age Rating:
18+

Prologue (Instead Of Chapter 1)

Readers, the first chapter of this story describes a casual encounter of three men in the dunes behind the gay beach of my town. It does so in overly graphic language—language that could discomfort or even harm some of you. I have therefore decided to replace it by a flat summary of the events related there, events that triggered the heartbreaking, murderous, but ultimately fortuitous story of the Green Eyes.

My name is John Lee. I live in Georgia Beach, GA, and teach French at Southern Georgia College, a small school 30 miles to the south-west near the Florida border.

I have issues. During my adolescence, I was diagnosed with bipolar disorder, a psychological condition characterized by difficult mood-swings. As I grew up, I became arrogant, shy, and homosexual, character traits that interact with my bipolarity. At my age—I’m 29 years old—I find myself in a downward spiral of disengagement, depression and neglect. I was outgoing and sexually active during my youth, but confine myself mostly now to my small apartment on the Davis Canal, where I—autoerotic efforts aside—play chess on the internet (losing), publish a blog (that nobody reads), and prepare classes (that students don’t care for). A side effect of my bipolarity important here has to do with my language. Although I am averse to power-point expressions (“going forward”), I myself use various forms of new-speak (e.g., “un” as an antonym-shirking prefix), idiosyncratic expressions (“said” as adjective, “wise” as post-modifier), and am given to awkward metaphors and abundant bracketing (()). My mother is French, my father rarely spoke when I was young (he did other things), and English is not my first language.

We’re in early July 2012 when the story begins. I wake up on a Sunday morning, feel the need for fresh air and decide to take a stroll along the beach. As I saunter past the gay section of said beach, I encounter a man of great physical attractiveness. He is roughly my age, but his most remarkable feature is a pair of green, mesmerizing eyes. We take note of each other. The man, let’s call him Green Eyes, is somehow indicating his readiness for an immediate exchange of bodily fluids. I follow him into the dunes. We undress for, and engage in, a sexual act. A third man appears on the scene, undresses, and joins. All three of us reach a climax in due course. Green Eyes re-dresses and disappears. In a surprising turn of events—surprising at least for anybody familiar with the anonymous behavior of gay cruising—the third man invites me to a party at the house of a friend later in the evening. So far, Chapter I.

Hold on. Bowdlerization of Chapter I doesn’t mean you can fool around. This is serious adult material. You’ll see.

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Andrea: J'ai adoré ce livre il montre le désir et l'attirance entre deux personnages même avec des différences.

Deborah Scarangella: J'adore vraiment ce livre hâte de continuer

Nora: J'ai tout aimé beaucoup de suspense

Manuela: Eine schöne und auch emotionale Geschichte war fesselnd und würde gerne ne Fortsetzung davon lesen

Stefanie: Absolut schönes Buch. Es hat tolle Charaktere und eine sehr schöne Geschichte. Der Autor hat es schön spannend und auch witzig geschrieben. Ich freue mich auf weitere Bücher.

Valentina: - me ha gustado como lleva la historia es rápido pero a la vez lento, y en si no encuentro fallas graves solo leves como a veces (yo creo por error del autorrector)las palabras no coinciden con lo que están contando. - se las recomendaría a mis amigas más cercanas porque son las únicas que conoce...

Martha Cecilia: Me gusta como kook va ayudando a jimin en susu inseguridades y su familia es lo maximo

maria: I disliked that it was short wanted more of it, loved the characters they were interesting, would have loved a little more drama but all in all was a great read would definitely recommend and would read it again. Thanks for sharing your book ❤️

Amy: Die beiden sind sooo süß zusammen.... und der Humor gefällt mir auch gut 😉 selbst Rita ist lustig 😂

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Amy: Toll geschrieben, sehr spannend. Danke dafür.

2jlynn: Enjoyed another great book in this series. Love learning the personalities of each individual that becomes apart of the MSMC. So much going on that if you don't have good short term memory, taking notes will make the books even better. Eager for the next book.

LaQuiche: Amazing for this slow build up to be so satisfying! Definitely a guilty pleasure!

Lizbeth: Este libro es muy bueno e interesante igual que la autor@ y todos sus libros anteriores la recomiendo mucho por que me encanta el trama de sus historias

eotero945: Me encantooooo. Amo el Kookmin!!

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