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Evie's Diary

By SerenBex

Scifi / Adventure

Dear Evie

OK... I just can't stop.

And I don't really want to.

I am officially dedicating this to ALL of you who wanted more. x

Disclaimer - I don't own Doctor Who. Sadly. But I do own Evie Song. She is MINE. :D

I really hope you enjoy this... it's different from the rest, but hopefully you're gonna like it! x

Dear Evie,

Happy 12th Birthday.

I couldn't decide what to get you this year – what do you give the girl who's already got three laser blasters, a hologram filter and a TARDIS at her disposal.

And no, you are not having a hallucinogenic lipstick.

So then I thought about that little stunt you pulled the other week - hijacking the TARDIS and leaving the Doctor and me stranded on Phentoon. Yes, I know you say it wasn't your fault and that the TARDIS just took you, but the Doctor is still furious. I think it's the thought that you successfully managed to fly his beloved little blue box without him more than anything else. That's the part of the whole situation that I'm NOT angry about!

Anyway after that, even I realised that you're growing up and I won't always be around on your adventures.

So I decided to get you a diary.

It's exactly like mine, but it's going to be all about you.

Use it well. And remember to write in it, child! I know what you're like!

All my love, sweetie.

Mum x

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