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i'll never turly leave you

By kie19931

Other / Romance

Chapter 1

25th September 1993

"You just going to leave her hear" Amy asked watching the Doctor carry the small child who turned 3 two days ago.

"Yes" the Doctor said he placed her down on the wet floor "She's lost but I will come back I promise her that" he moved the girls brown hair out of her face and kissed her "Don't stop believing Lilly never stop Lilly" he pulled out a TARDIS key on some string and placed it around her neck.

"Shall I call the police now?" Amy asked the Doctor he just nodded as he stood up.

The Doctor watched as Amy played her part the police picked up the girl who had woken up she look at the Doctor in the shadows her eyes wide with tears it was for the best he kept telling himself she'll be safe.

Amy stood next to him and watched as the time Lord started to cry he stood there watching the cars drive away with little Lilly innocent Lilly.

Amy and the Doctor walked back to the TARDIS in silent he unlocked the door and stepped in she closed the door and lent against it "What happens to her?" She asked in a small voice the Doctor passed her a news paper.

Girl found thought to be related to the murders of Mr. and Mrs. Jones the little girl who name is Lilly will be put into Sucre care.

There was a small picture of Lilly her long brown curly hair was down her big brown eyes piecing but she wasn't smiling but the key was still around her neck.

"Doctor" Amy was about to continue when he waved her hand to cut her off.

"She safe allot safer there than here"


Greg watched the young girl sleeping she still wasn't talking but she took a liking to him, he pulled a blanket around her then push his blonde hair back.

"What's going to happen now?" he asked James who walked in

"She'll go into care"

"Where the papers?"

"Sorry Greg"

"I want to take her home we already know she trust me and I have no one"

"Alright I'll get the papers"


"Here we are your new home" Greg said holding on to Lilly hand she looked up then back up at the house. "You can stay here as long as you want" Lilly blinked they started to walk forwarded when they got inside Lilly looked around then her eyes settled on Greg he smiled.

"Thank you" Lilly gently said Greg smiled.

"Want to see your room"

Lilly nodded and flowed Greg up stairs he pushed open a white door to revel a small room with a bed the walls were white but it was nice.

"We can decorated it"

25th September 2011

Lilly found it odd to back in London when she was seventeen she left her dad and went to college in south Wales, she spoke to her dad a couple of times but not much they had a huge augment before she left.

Lilly got off the train and looked along the platform to see if she could see her dad of she pulled her suitcase behind her, that's when she noticed her dad she almost fainted her dad was standing looking around of course he wouldn't know what to look for she dyed her brown hair into red it was still longer but his eyes settled on her she smiled as they both run to each other she dropped her suit case and threw her arms around him.

"4 years not even a visit" he said Lilly filched she knew she could of come back at any time.

"I know I'm sorry" Lilly said letting go of her dad.

"come on home it your birthday as far as we know" Greg held out his hand and Lilly took it and walked with him she stop when she heard a strange noise but somehow familiar "you got another one of those presents again" Lilly smiled she loved those.

3 hours earlier

"What he doing I mean he acting wired" Rory asked his wife Amy was just smiling.

"It her 21st birthday I mean well for her it but for me around two years and she still wears the key she never really stop believing I can faintly see her I mean again"

"Doctor what you are on about" Rory asked

"Lilly little Lilly read the screen" the doctor said "I be right back just got to leave this" he held up the blue box.

Rory walk to the screen, the screen showed a girl with long brown curly hair he the start to read the information "so the doctor saved her and placed her back"

"It was hard for him he want to keep her with him keep her safe but he thought Erath was safer"

"I see"

The doctor stepped out of the TARDIS and into the familiar street he walked along until he came to the house he kept watch on he smiled and placed the box down, then stood up and rang the door bell before running off.

Lilly walked into the house and sighed it was good to be home but she missed the adventure of South Wales new place, she felt Greg come stand behind her he lifted a strand of hair.

"Suits you" he said "I thought we could go out for a meal for your birthday then go and see Nan"

"Can we do it tomorrow tired from travelling" Lilly asked as she started to play with the key around her neck.

"Sure thing love" he said kissing the top of her head Lilly pulled away and picked up her suitcase and headed up stairs.

"Home" she said to herself as she opened the door it revelled the small bedroom which was now painted a deep blue with pictures of stars and planets on the wall and module planets hanging from the ceiling Lilly smiled she never wanted to change the room it felt safe. Lilly sat on the edge of the bed and pulled out her laptop.

Rory watched as the doctor returned with a smile on his face Amy was standing by the screen.

"She home" Amy said "I can't believe she remember in a sort of way"

"What can I say I got that sort of face and the bow tie" The Doctor said with a big grin

"Yeah right it to do with the key right" Amy said.

"Sort of tomorrow I will see her again"

"Right, why is she special" Rory asked.

"Everyone special every single one of us" The Doctor shouted before leaving a stunned Rory and Amy.

"Rory the doctor was to late her family died he promised her dad who was dying that he would look after her she was two he loved her but he said it was to dangerous and left her made her safe he kept an eye on her he keeping his promise" as Amy was about to carry the Doctor voice interpreted

"she was to young she was three when I left her I told myself twenty or twenty-one if I could change the time line then I would but I can't and I am keeping my promise"

"Right sorry" Rory said

"It ok"

Lilly lied on her back with a note book she hared her door open she looked up she saw her dad enter she smiled he sat down on the bed.

"I forgot to give you this" Greg said he handed Lilly a small box warped in the same blue as her walls Lilly sat up and opened it was a small picture of the galaxy Lilly smiled all these presents where pictures of stars.

"Another picture" Lilly said placing it on her desk she then turned to see her dad holding a letter she walked over and took it from him she was about to open it and stopped "can I open it on my own please"

"Uhh sure" Greg left Lilly sat on the bed and ripped open the letter and looked at it she had a big smile on her face.


It been long for you and only a couple of years for me know your older I can tell you who I am and kept the key on you and meet me if you want by big ben on 26th September 2011 13.00 happy birthday little Lilly hope to see you soon



Lilly lied down and smiled she wanted to meet the person who kept leaving her gifts but the name was a name of a charter she had in her stories she wrote but somehow didn't care.

The next Moring the rain was failing and that's what woke Lilly she sat up and turned over and looked at the clock it was 7.00 Lilly sighed and rolled out of bed she looked at the note and smiled she got up and dressed in a pair of skinny jeans and a blue jumper she tied her hair back and grabbed a bag she stuffed the letter in and purse she walked down the stairs.

Once down stairs Lilly grabbed her coat and umbrella she noticed her dads car was still there and decide to sneak out she quickly opened and shut the door it was wired he was usually in Lilly shock the thought out of her head it would take her two hours to get to the tram line then another 1 hour to get to her destination.


The doctor span round and look at his watch it was an hour before he got to Lilly he started to jump up and down Amy smiled Rory just watched and moved closer.

"Calm down you like a three year old on a sugar rush"

"Right sorry no not sorry 55 minutes" the doctor said as he carried one jumping "right you two go shopping I'm going to met Lilly"


Lilly stood with her umbrella up and looked around she fanced call her dad to see if he was ok that thought soon left as a man in a bow tie walk over to her she smiled and titled her head he stopped just in front of her.

"Hi I'm the"

"Doctor" Lilly said with a smile the Doctor looked at her she still had those brown eyes he loved.

"How did you know" he ask a bit shocked she smiled and covered him with her umbrella to stop him getting any wetter

"It Sunday and there hardly anyone around plus you smiled when you saw me" Lilly said the doctor smiled and hugged her "how do you know me?"

"Long story I promised you real dad I would look after you"

"I guess thanks" the doctor broke the hug and looked at her he smiled and looked at the chain around her neck he smiled.

"Um could we go to a cafe or something it cold" Lilly asked the Doctor just nodded.

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