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Stop! a tribute to Swiftpaw

By Ashleigh Bolton Taylor

Poetry / Drama

Stop

Don’t stop fighting!

Don’t falter

Don’t fall.

Brightpaw?

What are you doing?

Go!

Quickly!

Brightpaw! the dogs!

I’m too tired Brightpaw

I can’t run.

No! Brightpaw!

Get up! Please!

Fine

If you can’t get up

I’ll fight hard enough

For both of us

I got us into this mess

I’ll get us out.

I’m sorry Brightpaw

It’s my fault

We’re dying

It hurts so much.

The dogs

Their leaving

But my vision

Its going all fuzzy

Brightpaw!

I can’t breathe!

I’ll see you in Starclan

I hope the clans remember us

Swiftpaw and Brightpaw

Heroes.


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