Stop! a tribute to Swiftpaw

Summary

The last moments of Swiftpaw's life were horrible and bloody, but what was he really thinking as he fought the dog pack to his death?

Genre:
Poetry / Drama
Author:
LittleAsh.
Status:
Complete
Chapters:
1
Rating:
5.0 1 review
Age Rating:
13+

Stop

Don’t stop fighting!

Don’t falter

Don’t fall.

Brightpaw?

What are you doing?

Go!

Quickly!

Brightpaw! the dogs!

I’m too tired Brightpaw

I can’t run.

No! Brightpaw!

Get up! Please!

Fine

If you can’t get up

I’ll fight hard enough

For both of us

I got us into this mess

I’ll get us out.

I’m sorry Brightpaw

It’s my fault

We’re dying

It hurts so much.

The dogs

Their leaving

But my vision

Its going all fuzzy

Brightpaw!

I can’t breathe!

I’ll see you in Starclan

I hope the clans remember us

Swiftpaw and Brightpaw

Heroes.


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