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The Softness of Snow

By Harley101

Drama / Poetry

The Softness Of Snow

Storm of White

I'm sorry

I'm sorry I left you without saying goodbye

I didn't want to go!

But the Stars called and I had no choice

They said it was time for me

To join their ranks.

I never forgot you

I was always watching.

Star of Blue

My sister

It wasn't your fault

With fire in my blood

I chased the Shadows

Onto the path of Thunder

I didn't see the monster coming!

I'm so proud of you.

You bought me home

And raised my son

As if he were your own.

Claws of Thistle

I loved you

I could never see

What evil lay beneath

Kind words.

Until you tried to bring

Storm of White

Into the darkness with you

Our son!

I knew then

Only anger and rage

Lay in your heart

Thats why I felt no grief

No remorse

When the River tore you

Apart.

Storm of White, Star of Blue

I love you both

Fur of Snow.

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