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Ninja of the Leaf and Sand

By Shinigami

Action / Adventure

Down the Rabbit Hole

I signed as I walked out of the school I could hear all the other students whispering about me "hey isn't that the heterochromia witch" a girl whispered to the boy next to her "I heard she got one hundred on the test and has a IQ over two hundred" he whispered back to her, I tuned them out as i walked away signing once more 'i just wanna get back so i can watch Naruto with Mizuki for the hundredth time' i thought taking a short cut

 
after walking several feet I started to hear voices and footsteps coming my way, I stopped for a minute and listened "did you see that cute girl" a broad voice said then erupted in a series of chuckles 'i wonder if it's that gang they told us to stay clear of' i thought before running away from the voices "there she goes"a voice said I quickly looked back to see one buff guy and five little ones behind him before turning a corner and jumping over a fence 'i am so glad to be one of the fastest students at my school' i thought i heard a couple people drop to the floor but still heard heavy pounding behind me, quickly I looked behind me once more to see the buff guy right behind me, my eyes widened as i tripped and fear filled my stomach 'is it really going to end like this' i thought as a smirk found it's way to the man's lips i slowly felt myself fall in slow motion under me to see a black hole then everything went dark

When I opened my eyes I was in a dark abyss, I couldn't feel anything or see my own self "oi stop looking around like a dead zombie" a small voice chirped i looked to my left only to see a girl about twelve with red hair in twin curls, blood red eyes and pale skin, she was wearing a light pink dress with a red crop jacket held together by one button over it, white socks and red shoes i could help but stare at her eyes 'so pretty' i thought before snapping out of it "where am i" i asked she put her hands on her hips and smiled "my dimension" she said happily "exactly where is that" i asked "not that ally that's sure" she said with a hint of sass "my name's Bella" she said 'then what happened back there' i thought wryly "I'll be sending you to the world of ninjas where you will play a game of life or death you will be given the abilities to survive but it is not guaranteed that you will live" she said as i stared blankly at her 'and i was chosen because' i thought before quickly getting bored she signed "yuna akimura parts of your memories will be taken too"she said with a serious stare i nodded "so do not let me down and beat all the challenges" she said i nodded "good then good bye my trump card"she said with a sweet smile 'too sweet if you ask me' i thought "this better be worth it or-" i yelled when a bright light shined cutting me off and blacked out
 
I opened my eyes to see stars 'the world of ninjas could she mean Naruto' i thought rubbing my right eye sitting up i looked to my left to come face to face with a beautiful purple fox with red eyes and markings on it i tiled my head to the side and let my hair fall out of my face i smiled at it "hello there um can i touch your fur it's very pretty" i said in a high pitch voice 'wow I've never seen a fox like this before' i thought holding my hand out to it "child are you not scared of me" she asked i shook my head "why would i be scared of something so beautiful"i asked out of awe before looking into her eyes i saw a sudden flash of her getting attacked i frowned "is someone chasing you, i saw you corner by a group of people" i asked "wait you can see the future child" she asked i slightly nodded "then we must leave now" she said and picked me up when suddenly something flew past me and hit her in the shoulder i looked to see what it was 'a kunai this really is Naruto' i thought she let me go when the pain started to spread and quickly i turned around "are you okay" i asked not knowing what to do "the names Reina not you and do i look alright to you" she said getting up everything happened so fast i couldn't tell what had happened but manged to see Reina get cornered with all my might i ran towards her while she growled at me to stay back, i slid to a stop in front of Reina a foot before they hit her and closed my eyes after a few seconds a heard a someone say "save the child and don't let it get away" i opened my eyes to see me and Reina in the air about twenty feet off the ground 'cool' i thought as we landed "you fool you could have gotten yourself killed" she scowled i pouted in frustration "i couldn't leave you to die"i said quietly looking at the ground she huffed and turned around to growl at the men when i felt a strong arm pull me back i let out a yelp at the sudden contact as i struggled to break free i watched as the other men *cough* dog piled *cough* Reina my eyes widened and tears threaten to fall i watched in horror as one of the men prepared to stab Reina i held out my hand to her in hopes she'll make it 'please don't' i silently prayed "can you take the burden" she asked i nodded as tears streamed down my face "very well then" she said closing her eyes before the man got the chance to strike Reina, she started glowing and slipped out of their grip and towards my right eye i had only one thought 'how pretty' i thought before blacking out "now i will always be with you" i heard Reina say as i blacked out


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