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Twenty-First Century Magi and Djinn

By Shinigami

Fantasy / Adventure

Fallen Sisters

"yuna" said a girl with long red hair that turned orange at the ends, tan skin and purple eyes. she wore a light blue tank top with a dark blue sash, a white long sleeve shirt under, a black skirt and black combat boots as well as a dark blue purse, next to her stood a girl a few inches taller with medium length curly dark blue hair that turned light blue at the ends up in a high ponytail, tan skin, her left eye yellow while her right one was red. She wore a purple tank top with a dark brown jacket that had a gold star on the back and white sleeves, dark brown sweat pants with a gold star on the right side , purple sneakers and a purple backpack with a baton on the side of it. "yes kimiko" the girl with blue hair said kimiko stood for a second "can i go buy a new pair of shoes real quick" she asked yuna shook her head "you and your shoes" yuna said before walking away "a woman must have the perfect pair of shoes" kimiko said quickly catching up with her older sister "why are you asking me your only a year younger" yuna said before looking to the store beside them "besides i wanted to buy a new game that just came out" yuna added before entering the store "we'll meet in the center in one hour and do not buy any more that three pairs of shoes" yuna said and entered the store "hai" kimiko said before heading to a shoe store.


An Hour Later~


yuna looked around to see kimiko siting on the fountain with three boxes by her side, yuna chuckled before walking up to her "hey kimiko you wanna check out Halley's Comet" yuna asked kimiko looked at her "you mean the one that only comes around every seven-six years" kimiko asked yuna nodded "you bet" kimiko answered yuna smiled it took another hour to get to the cliff "look you can see the entire city" yuna said pointing with a huge smile on her face "wow" kimiko said yuna looked back up into the sky "look over there" she said pointing at the comet shooting past the moon "cool" kimiko said yuna nodded both watched with sparkles in there eyes "oh that reminds me bought theses" kimiko said holding two necklaces one was a purple jewel in the shape of a moon crescent surrounded by a gold lining while the other was a red jewel in in a flat circle with a gold lining in the form of flames in between both pieces was a clip "i want the moon one" yuna said kimiko smiled "good cause the suns mine" she said handing me the moon necklace yuna smiled and held the moon crescent up to kimiko's and kimiko held the sun to yuna's then they clicked them together before putting them on "okay lets go home now" kimiko said yuna nodded they turned around to see a wolf yuna put a hand in front of kimiko and narrowed her eyes at it, and took a deep breath when they heard a crack yuna looked at her feet to see the part of the cliff they were standing on was breaking "kimiko hold on" yuna said breaking the rest of the cliff and turned her back to the ground as she held kimiko in her chest, they both looked under them to see a magic circle

yuna opened her eyes once more to see them in space "where are we" yuna asked still holding kimiko "i don't know" kimiko said cling onto yuna then there way a sudden wind slowly pulling them apart "kimiko" yuna shouted gripping kimiko's hand as hard as she could "yuna" kimiko yelled tears streaming down her face, slowly their hands slipped and the wind carried yuna back in the opposite direction kimiko was carried both girls closed their eyes before blacking out.


Yuna's p.o.v.~


i opened my eyes to myself in a gigantic bed i stared at the white ceiling for a minute before shooting up "kimiko" i shouted, i took a moment to slow down my breath "ah your awake" a voice said i looked towards the door to see a man with tan skin and a muscular build. He had golden eyes and very long, purple hair tied in a ponytail. He wore floor-length purple and white robes, a white turban with feather decorations, and pointed red shoes he also wears a lot of jewelry, next to him was a woman with a large bust and blue medium-length hair. She wore a long off-white robe and a black hat that resembles a typical witch's hat. She had a red gem on a chain around her forehead and golden cone-shaped shells covering her ears. She also has clam shells on her chest instead of a shirt or other more normal covering. She also held a staff in her hand. 'they look familiar wait they look a lot like the characters from magi' i thought giving they one more over glance "who are you" i asked the man that looked a lot like sinbad bowed "i am sinbad king of Sindria" he said 'so this is magi' i thought i slowly nodded "and i am yamuraiha one of the eight generals" the woman said i nodded "may i ask for your name" sinbad asked i looked back at him "yuna" i said eyeing him warily "wheres my sister" i asked siting up straight "sorry but you were the only one found here" yamuraiha said with a look of sadness in her eyes i nodded 'so i was right she was blown some where else' i thought "your taking this better than i thought" sinbad said i nodded with a wave of my hand not really listening i signed before trying to stand up out of the bed only to almost fall flat on my face if sinbad hadn't caught me i steadied myself once more before walking it off "we're not done yet" sinbad said pulling my arm i gave him a pissed look "well i am i have to find my sister as fast as possible" i said glaring at him "I'll help you find your sister if you answer my questions" he said i took a deep breath "fine" i said quietly before siting back on the bed "okay tell me how you ended up outside the palace" he asked i gave him a confused look "i don't know i just remember falling and then waking up" i said bluntly crossing my arms, i noticed in the corner was my backpack and baton, sinbad nodded with serious looked on his face as he thought "okay I'm going to conduct a magic scan over your body just to make sure your okay" yamuraiha said i nodded a sphere of water floated above my head and started glowing before turning green then disappeared into butterflies 'why can i see the rukh' i thought blinking "finished your just fine" yamuraiha said i got the feeling she was keeping something, i felt tingling in my right eye "you make up the stupidest lies" i said narrowing my eyes at her, i watched as a look of surprise showed on both their face "your keeping something from me" i said venom lurking in my voice "you said you fell and then you woke, well your not the first" sinbad said i looked at yamuraiha "and it seems you'll have a fever cause it looks like you just got rukh" she said avoiding eye contact i nodded "who was the first" i asked sinbad looked at me and opened his mouth to speak


Kimiko's p.o.v.~


i woke and looked around to see a green plain "where am i" i asked before jumping up "wheres yuna" i shouted when a wave of dizziness hit me, i shook my head before walking to a door that appeared out of nowhere "what is this" i asked letting my fingers roll over the surface when it sucked me in, i let out a soft yelp at the force. I opened my eyes to see myself in a dark hallway i took a deep breath before walking i turned a few corners when i ran into a rat with four eyes i narrowed my eyes at it warily and it came charging at me i barely dodged and pulled out my hair spray i grabbed a torch close by and pressed the hair spray over the torch causing the rat to catch on fire "bye bye" i said and started running when i came to a wall "fudge" i yelled i started pressing my hands against the wall when one pushed in "yes" i said before continuing and came to a room with tree branches over the floor, i picked up a rock close by and tossed it on the floor i watched as it slowly started sinking "well can't touch the floor" i said carefully putting my foot on the branch before taking off and jumping across the branches to the other side when i heard footsteps i looked back to see several men three caught me eye the first one was a tall, well-built man with red eyes and red blood hair tied back into a little ponytail, a goatee, thin eyebrows, and a small black hat with a yellow gem in the center. He wore traditional clothes that signify his royal status, and a black cape. He had a sword, a hilt ornament on it and a metal pauldron on his right shoulder, which resembles a lion's head. The second was a thin man with very long, messy red hair tied in a ponytail and slanted pink eyes. He has acne scars on his nose and cheeks. He wears baggy robes bearing a taijitu symbol and the big dipper constellation, matching bracelets and a large earring in his left ear. the third i recognized as a character of magi but forgot his name having not watched the series yet. he was as a young boy with an androgynous aspect. He has long pink hair, short in the back and has three braids on his fringe, and pink eyes. He also wears a blue hat with a design on it that has golden wings, two long red veils and a white Chinese-like dress with a pair of shorts. He also wears two golden bracelets, each with a green jewel. I completely turned around when i saw on of the men about to step on the floor "stop" i yelled quickly jumping onto the branches, i carefully stood on the branches looking at them with a pissed off look "idiots your about to step into quick sand" i said sass clearly hinted in my voice "who are you" a guy asked i glared at him "you are in no position to ask my name right now" i said crossing my arms " if you wanna cross without dieing your going to want to cross the branches but if you wanna sink go ahead and be my guess" i sarcastically before turning around and jumping back to the other side and walking on


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