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All My Life

By Megan Rawlins

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Prologue

A/N: The idea for this story popped into my head when I was helping a friend with a plot for her first twilight story..she has a few other stories..and btw I am talking about familyguyfreak101 and she is my best friend/sister.

Summary: In this story James is brought back to life by Victoria with the help of an alchemist (not sure if I spelled it right), he can bring dead beings back to life. both being either human or vampire. And this is set after Edward leaves Bella in New Moon. my twist is that James, Vitoria, and Laurent kidnap Bella, but Alice sees this and the Cullens try and find her but never do. 70 years pass and Bella has a new coven, and later runs into the Cullens again. I know that this has been done plenty of times, but I would like to give a shot at it.

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"You...don't...want me?" (pg. 69 New Moon)

This just didn't make since. I thought that Edward loved me.

"I promise that this will be the last time you'll see me. I won't come back. I won't put you though anything like this ever again. You can go on with your life without any more interference from me. It will be as if I never existed." (pg. 71 New Moon)

With that he turned and ran through the woods missing every tree limb in his way. I couldn't understand. He didn't want me? I thought He loved me and wanted to protect me?

I ran after him blindedly. Tripping over every possible tree root that was visible above ground. I ran for what felt like forever. My good luck of not falling over anything was shortly lived. I tripped over my own two feet and landed on my face. I was still trying to register what had occured just minutes ago. I thought Edward loved me and didn't want anything to happen to me. I didn't blame him, his family or Jasper for that matter for what happened. If anything I blamed myself. It was me that smelt so delectable.

I stopped moving around. I thought that I had footsteps, maybe Edward had changed his mind and would tell me that he didn't mean what he said earlier and overreacted about the whole birthday fiasco. But who showed uup was not who I expected to see anytime soon. "I couldn't help myself- I tried to run." (pg. 449 Twilight) But in that split second his foot collided with my chest and that sent me flying through the air. I landed on my back. It was hard enough to knock the wind out of me. I couldn't form a sentence.

"Surprised Isabella?...oh wait, you prefer Bella."

"James, let's not play with our food."

Laurent? I was not expecting him. I had heard that he had decided to try out the vegetarian lifestyle with a coven in Denali, Alaska. Just then James was over me and I knew what would happen next. I just hope that my death would be quick and painless.

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A/N: So what do you think? this is a mean place to stop, but this is a prolouge. I want to guage your reaction on whether or not to continue this story or not. If so I will have to add this to my list of stories...I also have a Parent Trap story to do. (check out the Profile for more info). Again please review this, I would like to know your guys' thoughts on this.

*Btw I think that it's an alchemst that can bring the dead back to life...I remember seeing a charmed episode and a demon was using an alchemist to bring back dead people from the Charmed One's lives to fight them.

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