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DMS Life

By Fachy

Thriller / Romance

A secret no longer

Christyanna's(Me) perspective, June 01 2015(B-day) 8th period math

I really can not believe it as I have a 65 in math and the teacher gave me 0's on the homeworks we did while she was out even though I did all of it. She maybe just overlooked it or did it n purpose. Brianna was dazing off which I could tell it was because of Anthony since she always pays attention, so I asked her "Is it because of Anthony?" Brianna blushes and says "Yes it's because of Anthony" "Are U 2 in a secret relationship?" I shrieked Brianna says "Sssh be quite as we don't want anybody to know yet. "Ok I won't I tell anybody" I replied "Anthony and Brianna sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G" Ana-Maria shouts in unison. Brianna gets super embarrassed and puts her pawms on her eyes. "Shut up Ana-Maria. You don't know who Chrissy's cousin is" Zack screamed at her "Do you want me to tell the entire school that you have elf ears? then I suggest you shut up" Ana-Maria yells at him, "Why can't we all get along for once and a while?" Steven cried. "Yes please as it's getting annoying" Kaylee and Emely both spurted out, confidently "If you guys and the teachers weren't so annoying then maybe I would be nicer" Ana-Maria yells. "That's the last straw" Jack screams "I am sick of everybody arguing" the math teacher says in defense. Then the ELA and social studies teachers emerge from their classrooms to hear all of the commution, "What is going on in here?" the social studies teacher asked "I really can not take it anymore because of Ana-Maria" the math teacher frowns "What did she do now?" the ELA teacher asks, eager to know "Well, Ana-Maria embarrassed Brianna and everybody except Chrissy, Mark, Joe, Gabby and Anthony(Alpo) meddled in the argument" the math teacher says in dismay.

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