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Rebuilt! Fredbears Family Diner

By Terias Faldom

Humor / Action

Chapter 1

Fredbear's Family Diner: Chapter one

New Job rebuilt Diner

Jacob Fall is walking to the front door of a Large diner newspaper in hand. He looks at the massive building and gapes. "I knew this place is popular but why is it so huge?" He shakes his head. "I can't be intimidated now this is my best chance for a steady paying job." He steals his nerves and heads into the building. When he enters the first thing he sees is the animatronics on stage a neon sign flashes "Family Hour" and this is further indicated by both the original and Toy Bonnie, Chica, and Freddies being on stage. Many tables are filled with Families of two or one parents with 2-10 children. Most of them having pizza the diner's signature meal. Jacob Makes his way to the back office. In the office a tall man sits in a large chair, Jacob enters the office and the man smiles. "Hello sport what brings you here?"

"I'm here for the open security guard job."

"Ah yes, have a seat." Jacob nods and sits down in front of the owner's desk. "So, why do you wanna work here?"

"I really need a steady paycheck and my Grand-dad always spoke fondly of the original diner." The owner smiles. "Alright then What's your name kid?"

"Jacob Fall." The owner shakes his hand and gives him a temporary name tag and security badge and cap.

"Welcome to the Family Jacob, you can call me Jerald, Jerald Foster." Jacob smiles and shakes his hand happily.

"Thank you Jerald. Anything I should know for my first day."

Jerald stands and points down the hall to a small office. "That's where you sit during the night. During the day I recommend you get well acquainted with the Animatronics."

"Yes sir." Jacob walks into the backstage area behind the stages for the animatronics. The Originals and Toy animatronics have just now come off stage as Foxy and Mangle's Act is beginning, The first one to come over to him is the Original Bonnie.

"Hello, I'm Bonie what brings you here?"

"I'm the new security guard. Nice to meet you Bonnie." Jacob shakes Bonnie's hand. She smiles and waves the others over. "Hey guys come meet the new Security guard!" The others stand up and walk over to them.

"Heya Friend I'm Chica!" The Original Chica shakes Jacob's hand roughly. Freddy just gives him a nod and a smile.

"Nice to meet you too Chica." Toy bonnie Walks up and gives his hand a shake.

"Nice to meet you"

"You too but why are you a guy and your original is a girl?" Toy bonnie shrugs. Toy Chica shakes his hand.

"Nice to meet you."

"You too Toy Chica." Toy freddy just gives him a smile.

"Nice to meet you all. So….. Anyone else I need to meet?" Jacob asks looking around. Freddy nods. "Gold and Springtrap Are farther back. go down that hall and take a left you'll come across their room." Jacob nods

"Thanks Freddy will do. Good meeting you guys." He says over his shoulder as he heads to Golden Freddy's and Springtrap's room. When he gets there he sees Gold Slumped in a chair and Springtrap sitting on the bed sitting next to him. Jacob knocks on the door and they both lift up their heads to look at him.

"Hello you must be the new security guard." Gold says standing and walking over to Jacob.

"Yep. Nice to meet you" Jacob replies shaking Gold's hand.

"It's nice to meet you" Springtrap shakes Jacob's hand and goes back to sit on the bed. Jacob nods and goes back to the backstage, Foxy and Mangle have just come back from their performance and they are sitting with the others. Bonnie sees him and waves,

"Hey Jacob! Come meet Foxy and Mangle!" Jacob smiles and walks over to the group. Foxy stands up and shakes his hand.

"Good 'ay matey Nice to meetya." Foxy greets in a pirate accent. Mangle stands as well and shakes Jacob's hand.

"I be Mangle nice to meet ye." She says smiling in a similar accent to foxy. Jacob smiles and nods to them.

"Nice to meet you both, Is there anyone else I need to meet?" Freddy looks up from his book.

"Well who have you met so far."

"Well… All of you, Golden Freddy and Springtrap."

"Well that leaves… Marionette, Balloon Boy and his sister, Shadow Freddy and Shadow Bonnie." Freddy says counting on his fingers, Jacob's jaw drops.

"I never realized how many there are of you guys." The animatronics laugh. "So where can I find them?" Freddy does his best to stop laughing and answers.

"Marionette can always be found in the prize corner with BB and his sister, Shadow Freddy and Shadow Bonnie are usually helping out around the place I think the are filling in for a couple of sick waiters."

"Thank you Freddy I'll go meet them."

"Your welcome and hurry it's almost closing time." Jacob nods and runs out into the main dining area. He see's a purplish black version of freddy and bonnie taking the order of a young couple, he politely waits until they're done and walks over to them.

"Hi I'm Jacob the new security guard." The shadow animatronics smile and do a courtly bow and curtsey.

"Hello Jacob I'm Shadow Freddy, but you may call me Shade and this is my beautiful assistant, Shadow Bonnie"

"Call me Shada."

"Nice to meet you both. Now if you'll please excuse me I need to find Marionette and the Balloon twins." They nod and Jacob runs over to the prize corner, a well lit corner of the room with the Balloon twins handing out Balloons and Marionette handing out prizes to winners of a bean bag toss game next to him. Jacob walks over to BB and BG first.

"Hello would you like a balloon?" The twins say in unison.

"No thank you, I'm Jacob the new security guard." They smile at him and shake his hand before turning their attention back to the kids. Jacob then walks over to Marionette.

"Hello sir, What do you need?"

"Hello I'm Jacob, I'm introducing myself to the animatronics on my first day."

"Ahhh… I understand It's nice to meet you Jacob. Have a gift." Marionette hands Jacob a small gift wrapped box.

"Thank you, Have a good day." Marionette nods and returns to the kids. "Well that wasn't so bad, I wonder what he gave me?" Jacob opens the box and finds a stuffed Shadow Freddy. He smiles and walks off.

End Chapter 1.

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