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HetaOni: Time Marches On

By Alice Mariah Virginia Rose

Mystery / Horror

Acknowledgements

I just want to write up a quick thank you to everyone who helped me find the answers this game is in so desperate need of solutions for. I worked tirelessly for five weeks writing up the outline, and then revising the outline. 

I’m not the creator of HetaOni . HetaOni is a fan-made game created by Tomoyoshi, which was later adapted into a english version by Pianodream and Neokyno. This is merely a fan-ending. I want to point out that just like anyone, I have my own bias (even if I tried to remain as neutral as I could) and no matter what I do, it would never be quite the same as the creator. So keep in mind that this is how I see the game ending. Also! If you feel I've missed something, or something something doesn't quite make sense somewhere, please tell me. I will in turn do my best to correct this. thank you all.

Because of the large size of chapters I will break them apart into "parts" like you see in the game plays. HetaOni cut us off at chapter 17 part 1/2 so I'll continue from there. Although my chapters will have more parts after that. I've decided the best way to go about uploading these chapters would be by chapter. 

See you on the other side.
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