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More Than a Brother

By shadzler

Adventure / Action

how it all began

It all started one night that was like any other for three siblings. 2 siblings about the age of 12 that looked similar as if they were twins were at a table with their decks in the middle of a duel while a taller figure was in the kitchen looking for something tasty to eat. This figure was at least 1 and a half heads taller than the twins, he had teal hair that was long and spiked up a little at the top of his head, 16 years of age wearing a white jacket without a hood, black shirt, and dark blue jeans were his everyday wardrobe. He grabbed a orange carton from the fridge then left it open as he turned around to look at siblings

"Guys you want anything?" the older sibling asked to them as they just ignored him and continued their duel. He got a little aggravated that they didn't answer immediately so raised his voice only slightly then said

"Hey Leo, Luna I said do you want anything to eat!" he yelled out as his little brother turned around and shook his head

"No thanks Miles" Leo yelled back to his brother then went back to his duel.

"Ok your move Luna" he said to his twin sister. Miles closed the fridge and got a glass for his juice when almost in unison he and his younger sister felt something, almost like they could feel someone in pain. He had a crazy look in his eyes like he was in a trance, and due to him not paying attention his glass fell out of his hand and shattered. He immediately broke out of his trance then quickly shook his head then found his sister running toward the elevator with his brother not to far behind

"Luna" Leo said as he ran to the elevator to catch up with his twin,

"Luna!" Miles yelled out as he ran after them

"Hey guys wait!" he yelled out as he ran after them only to have the elevator shut in his face.

"Damn" he said as he grunted then went to the side door next to it and started running down the stairs rapidly. And of course after the first ten floors he fell and rolled the rest of the way. Feeling almost everyone of the steps hit his body as he rolled down to the ground level. As he got to the ground level he rolled out the door onto the actual ground and stopped. He looked over to the elevator which was still coming down with his little twin siblings, he sighed then slowly picked himself up

"The things I do for these guys" he said to himself as he shook his head slighty feeling a lot of bruises and a bump forming on his head. As he stood up on his two feet he noticed a red duel runner with some smoke coming off it next to some trash cans, he ran to it and saw someone on it. He grabbed the man then shook him to get his attention,

"Hey, Hey dude you okay?" he asked then assumed he was unconcious

'Duh of course he's not ok' he thought to himself as a ding echoed through the allyway. Then his brother and sister emerged from the elevator and were in awe at what would seem like a crashed duel runner with a man in it. Miles looked over his shoulder then did a motion with his head that told both the twins to get over here.

"You guys you get his runner, I'll take him up" they nodded in unison and did as told. Miles picked up the man and put him on shoulder as Leo and Luna pushed his runner into the elevator. Even though it was a tight squeeze they all got into the elevator and headed back up to the apartment. For a lot of the ride up Luna was looking at the guy on Miles shoulder before she noticed something on her brother's head.

"Miles what happened to you?" she asked. He looked at her and then pointed to the fully grown bump on his head with his right arm while the man was on his left.

"You made me take the stairs that's what happened" Miles said in a slightly mad voice. Leo chuckled then looked at his brother, immediately the small grin he had on his face turned into a frown of concern

"Uh Miles you know your bleeding right?" Leo said bluntly as Miles immediately put his hand on his and sneered because it hurt a lot more than he thought it would. Then he immediately brought his hand into his eyesight and saw the crimson liquid of life on it, almost staining it. At ten floors to go Miles started to feel wozzy, almost like he was going to faint, Luna looked at him with concerned eyes. His eyes got snagged by hers as he looked down to her and said

"Don't worry Luny I've been through worse…" he lied as started to teeter around.

After the elevator door opened to their apartment Miles wobbled over to the couch set the man down and sat on the far end of it and felt really woozy with his slowly shutting. After Leo and Luna set the runner on a wall, Luna ran to Miles and shook him which shocked him to open his eyes fully. Luna looked into his eyes with a lot of concern in hers

"You stay right here" Luna said then pointed her finger down as she ran to the kitchen and got the first aid kit.

"Yeah like….. I'm…. Going anywhere….. Luny" he said as he started stuttering and slowly lost consciousness. Luna ran into the living room with first aid kit in hand and saw Miles eyes shutting. She looked around on the floor then grabbed some rag like thing on the floor and put it to his face, which immediately made him shoot up and cover his noise.

"Yuck what the heck was that" Miles asked in a disgusted voice

"One of Leo's socks" she said as she tossed it back onto the ground then shook her hand and rubbed it on her shorts for sanitary reasons. She opened the kit and got a clean napkin from the kit and dabbed some liquid on it then dabbed it on Miles head. He immediately sneered in pain which made Luna giggle

"You big baby" she said with a smile on her face as she continued to dab it on his head.

"I don't care how old you get that stuff always stings" she chuckled as she wrapped some bandage cloth over his head and kissed his head. He grinned at that because it reminded him of his mother when he was really little. But since she and his father weren't really around ever, his memory of her was vague and blurry. His memories of his early childhood barely had his parents in them. In most of those memories he could remember the deep feeling of loneliness he had before two crying babies entered his house with his parents one day. They left the two babies there and told one thing to the very young Miles before they left

'Look after them' which he did. He was more of a parent to them then their real parents. He never really minded watching and taking care of them, he loved his brother and sister with all his heart and he wasn't afraid to admit it. His brother Leo could be annoying but it was always good to have someone to play games with and duel with. Luna was a polar opposite when compared to Leo, she was shy and really just kept to herself. She was more grown up than Leo, and that was something that Miles really liked about her. Luna finished bandaging his wound then gave it one last kiss so he'd feel better, Miles grinned then rubbed the bandage.

"You should probably get to bed Luna…" he said then added something a couple seconds later as Luna began to turn to her room "…and make sure Leo doesn't wake up in the middle of the night and try to wake up our new guest" Luna nodded then turned back around and hugged her big bro then left for her room. Miles knew even with his sister trying to keep Leo in his room he was gonna get out and try to pester this man. Then he had a idea then set out a futon on the ground of the living room and grabbed his duel disk and a single card and waited in the living room as he laid on his futon drifting off to sleep. At 1 in the morning the sound of footsteps and snickering woke him up. He readjusted himself as he grinned and attached his duel disk. Then just when he saw the figure of his little brother enter the kitchen he played his card then a giant warrior in white armor appeared then roared, Leo screamed and ran back to his room like a little girl. He snickered then looked at his monster with a grin on his face

"Thanks colossal fighter" he pulled the card out from its place on the duel disk and put it in his pocket then fell back into sleep with a grin on his face

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