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New Life in One Piece

By cicizchan

Adventure

Weird Girl, Unknown Package

New Life in One Piece

Chapter I: Weird Girl; Unknown Package

[Z's POV]

5 minutes left, then I'm home free. Why does school have to be so boring? Oh, sorry. I forgot to introduce myself. People always call me Z because of the scars on my left arm. I didn't get these scars, I was born with them. I don't really care about it so I can't complain there. I'm 18 years old, senior at Canoga Park High School. I like reading, being alone, and watching anime; mainly 'One Piece' and 'Pokémon'. Hair and eye color: dark brown. Height: same as Zoro. Favorite colors: black, red, and green. Some call me emo, some call me goth, but I don't give a crap what they call me. I also have a straw-hat necklace and poke ball chocker (my treasures) with me at all times.

I was in English class, tracing a Pokémon from my Pokedex. I know what your thinking, 'Why is a 12th grader tracing Pokémon?' Well the answer's simple, I AM FREAKIN BORED! I just finish tracing and coloring Togepi for someone in my class. I don't know why but I give people my art. I looked at the clock and only 10 seconds are left.

"5…4…3…2…1…" I said counting down to myself.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Ring~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Alright students, class is over. Have a wonderful and safe spring break." The teacher said.

I grabbed my stuff and ran out the door. The gate was close again so I just climb over. I started walking home while listing to my iPod.

'2 weeks off! Hell ya! I can final have some peace and quiet. I just hope my brothers don't bug me…again.'

When I got home, I saw a package on the doorstep. It was address…to me?

"That's odd? I didn't order anything." I said to myself.

I took it with me to my room quietly so I don't disturb my 2 brothers from their videogame marathon. They're always like this so it doesn't bother me much but when they scream "DIE! DIE! DIE!" You get used to it really. I went to my room and opened it.

When I opened the package, it was empty. 'What the? Who the hell send this?' I was about to throw it away but then-

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~BOOM~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'The hell? Thunder? It was clear all day and now there's a storm.' I thought as I walked outside to see the damage.

The sky was completely black with only the lighting as its light. I looked at the sky and for some reason I thought I saw…

"Zekrom, what are you doing? What's with the storm; in spring for crying out loud?" I said to myself so people won't think I'm crazy.

A bolt of lighting came down and somehow hit the box that I dropped on the floor. At first, its like nothing happened but when I open the box it sucked me in. I was falling and normally a girl would scream but to me this is both cool and weird. The last thing I remember was seeing Pokémon around me. And then darkness took over.

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