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Bloody Mary

By TheShatteredRose

Romance / Horror

Summary: Arthur told him not to mess with the legend of Bloody Mary. But Alfred couldn't help himself. After all, ghosts don't exist...right?

prologue

A moonless night...

"Bloody Mary!"

A blackened room...

"Bloody Mary!"

A darkened mirror...

"Bloody Mary!"

A flickering candle flame...

"Bloody Mary!"

An Endless reflection...

"Bloody Mary!"

Pain...

"Bloody Mary!"

Fear...

"Bloody Mary!"

Revenge...

"Bloody Mary!"

Make them suffer...

"Bloody Mary!"

...As I have suffered.

"Bloody Mary!"

Make them scream...

"Bloody Mary!"

...As I have screamed.

"Bloody Mary!"

Endless pain...

"Bloody Mary!"

Endless sorrow...

"Bloody Mary!"

Why...?

"It's...it's her!"

Why must you mock me...?

"Run!"

Make it stop...

"The door won't open!"

I'll make you stop...

"S-she's coming out of the mirror!"

Revenge for the pain you have caused...

"Someone help us, please!"

...Join me...

"Let go!"

...Join me in death...

"Waaaaaaaaaaarrrrggghhhhh!"

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1. prologue

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