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Bloody Mary

By TheShatteredRose

Horror / Romance

prologue

A moonless night...

"Bloody Mary!"

A blackened room...

"Bloody Mary!"

A darkened mirror...

"Bloody Mary!"

A flickering candle flame...

"Bloody Mary!"

An Endless reflection...

"Bloody Mary!"

Pain...

"Bloody Mary!"

Fear...

"Bloody Mary!"

Revenge...

"Bloody Mary!"

Make them suffer...

"Bloody Mary!"

...As I have suffered.

"Bloody Mary!"

Make them scream...

"Bloody Mary!"

...As I have screamed.

"Bloody Mary!"

Endless pain...

"Bloody Mary!"

Endless sorrow...

"Bloody Mary!"

Why...?

"It's...it's her!"

Why must you mock me...?

"Run!"

Make it stop...

"The door won't open!"

I'll make you stop...

"S-she's coming out of the mirror!"

Revenge for the pain you have caused...

"Someone help us, please!"

...Join me...

"Let go!"

...Join me in death...

"Waaaaaaaaaaarrrrggghhhhh!"

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